Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

hi
i just read ur story today i just love it
u describe arnav khushi relation very nicely
updt soon
waiting for next updt
plz add me in ur pm list thnx

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aura9

@aura9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

I have been reading this story for a from the 10th chapter if I remember correctly. Someone, recommended this. Since, then I have been following it.

Arnav feels something very strong about Khushi and is very possessive about her and is happy as long as Khushi stays under the same roof. But, I'm sure he will try to claim the ownership if anybody tries to invade his territory.

Arnav's mom is a big issue and I feel so bad that he never got a closure for that.

As for Khushi, Arnav really makes her feel different and makes her feel she has earned his friendship. He never offered anything in the silver platter because she was incapable and let her earn it. He is actually making her feel special about about herself.

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

superb

khushi did learn a lesson😆

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1064

I guess am terribly late this time commenting... was simply checking the thread when I saw that u have already updated a few days back. ...my bad I missed it...
Well... am happy to see them befriend each other... but also that somewer deep inside arnav has started to brand her as his... and that last line...wat are u planning anonymous ji???;-)
Well...khushis dramatics is amusing as well hilarious too...it was fun reading that part... everything seems to have brought a positive change in arnav and the family...
And hey time for new thread :-)

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1065

I just found this story and caught up till the latest update.
This is such a well thought and well written story. I love how you brought out the contrast between Arnav and Khushi's personalities. Even though they have suffered tremendously, the love and support she got theough her life molded Khushi's personality and the lack of the same made Arnav what he is.

very well captured indeed..

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1066

a new thread n a new update sooon plsss

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1067

sorry for late commenting

just caught up with the story

had exams couldn't read regularly

n just found the link of new update

really sorry

story has progressed really well

very happy that arnav n khushi are now friends

n arnav likes being with khushi

n she has taken a lot of space in his mind

happy for karan as well

khushi's match making didn't work, she must be sad

but glad she didn't go further with the proposal befoore asking karan

after u gave pics for charachters specially karan n rishab

story got more interesting for me

wonder what further awaits for them

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fleurs

@fleurs

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1068

Waiting for the next update buddy

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1069

Khushi and her awesome plan turned out to be disaster. The whole thing was superb!!! Couldn't stop laughing at her innocence. Loved it!!

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khub

@khub

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1070

I love your style of writing - have read all your works and I constantly stalk your thread for updates. I will surely continue the stalking...also will never forget to hit the like button!
Would like to surely be on your list ifff...you ever move your work to a blog with limited access...
Khub