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Jenna

@LondonChick

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Firstly Jyojo I cant thank you enough for doing this collab with me🤗.

That was the most amazing thing ever to read. I know I have done the right thing in asking you to collab with me for this.

It was so beautifully written. I do not think I could have done a better job even if I had tried.

That was so amazing to read. Every word was written to perfection. You managed to take a few words, put them together and create magic with them.

I do not think any amount of words can give this chapter justice. And standing ovation to you indeed for such a flawless chapter 👏👏👏.

You deserve a massive round of applause for that chapter Jyojo I could not have done that chapter justice like you have 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

AMAZING!!!!

Once again thank you for doing this with me I owe you a million times over for it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awesome prologue...

loved it...

i picturised DADI...

suits her persona...

waiting eagerly...

all the best jyo n jenna...^_^

edited for comment of ch 1 & 2...
I know i know im smart...lol
editing my prev coment to get the first position...lol

awesomes dudeS...
U both took my heart...oh no im heartless now...buhuhu...hehe
u both did a great job...
As always im at lack of words...
Simply loved it...
I loved it how arnav supported her without doubt...
I couldnt believe that they had an arranged marrige...

Really really well written both of them...
Thanx for the pm...jennuuu...^_^

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Jenny ❤️

I know u hate thanx so I wont say that.

But I love you... love u for being such an amazing friend, I know we bonded over a short period of time.

And I love u for asking me to join you in this SS.

You had such a clear vision about this story that it was so easy for me to write, and as I wrote, I could feel what I was writing.you know I got emotional writing it 😊

I am happy I could write it the way you envisioned it.

coming to Chapter 2

one word - its beautiful !!

I knew you would do a bang on job at writing the confrontation, simply loved it and I know how rushed it was.

and yet u did awesome. Arnav's pain at failing his wife, Khushi's love and assurance back to him, his oath to always protect his wife and baby. beautifully done.

the men of our society should try to be something like Arnav, they cant let their family torture their wives. its a crime and it shouldnt happen.

ppl shud understand that boy or girl, what matters is that ... its a life, u cant discriminate on that.

its heartbreaking to see women wishing for a bot child despite they themseleves being a female.

Someday the society has to change and that can happen only if we do our bit in creating awareness.

Jenny.. I cant stop reading the chapter ... I dont know... but Arnav's protection to Khushi and his love !! U have done it beautifully !! 🤗

Edited by Jyo.Arshi.IPK - 12 years ago

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dershika

@dershika

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Continue soon

Feel sad that ppl withsuch thinking r there

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Loved it...khushi suffered so much but did not tell arnav and arnav dnt have any clue about his mother who killed her grandchild for being a grl...awesome work yar

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awesome di...khushi finally told arnav about his mother and arnav being the loving and caring husband supported her and is happy with the baby being grl...loved it and he confornted his mother...continue soon...thanx for pm

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome prologue...but waiting for the chaps...also where is arnav when this is going on with khushi

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

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Unres
Awesome part Jyo ji.

Khushi has beared so much pain.How can a women herself hate a girl baby?Thats so disgusting.Arnav mother herself is a mother of daughters but she dont want her daughter-in-law to have a girl baby.I dont wanna say but I have to,She is mean mother.She dont care about her son's happiness but only about heir of her family.

Happy that arnav now know the truth and will save his baby this time.And he will not let his mother harm his family more

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

R for part 2
Unres
Amazing chapter J,

Arnavs mother deserve this.Arnav gave her a good piece of mind.

But she was seething with anger.Hope she dont harm Khushi or the baby.

Will b waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the pm.