Faltering Footsteps Series:Boojh Part 6 up 26/10

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kushiasr26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hate arnis mother for doing this and the people still believe that a girl in a family is a burden

felt bad for arhi

awesome updates

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anamnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Nice updates
Khushi had gone through so much bt dis tym she has armav by her side

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hey!.

Well-written.

Emotional.

Descriptive.

Realistic.

I'm glad that Khushi has Arnav by her side ... he seems to be a loving and caring husband. Sweet. I'm exceptionally glad that he listened to Khushi and seemed to understand what she was saying ... even though to him ... it would've previously been an alien like thought to think that his mother was capable of such wrong.

As for her mother-in-law ... well I feel disgusted by what she coerced Khushi to do. Isn't she a female ...

Go Arnav! His mother needed to be told whats what and there we have it ... she was.

Ooo she must be angry! 😡

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choti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

-----UNRES------
I'm really glad that you are taking up social and society problems!!sometimes while reading this series as in all three of them i get goosebumps!!thank you for sharing these stories with us!!you are doing a great job!! *salute* 😃

Edited by ruble-sobti - 12 years ago

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

CHAPTER 1

KHUSHI HURT AND PAIN POOR GIRL HER MIL FORCED HER TO HAVE AN ABORTION JUST BECAUSE THE BABY WAS A GIRL VERY SICK AND SHE HER SELF IS A WOMAN SHE HAS DAUGHTER GLAD THAT KHUSHI HAS TOLD HIM HOW HIS MOM IS THE REASON FOR THE FIRST BABY MISCARRIAGE AND GLAD SHE TOLD ARNAV THE TRUTH VERY EMOTIONAL AND HEARTBREAKING UPDATE

CHAPTER 2

A HUSBAND DUTY IS TO PROTECT HIS WIFE FROM EVERY EVIL IN THIS CASE THE EVIL IT THE ONE WHO GAVE BIRTH TO HIM KHUSHI KEEPING THE SECRET TO KEEP PEACE IN THE HOUSE WAS SO WRONG BUT GLAD THIS TIME SHE IS READY TO FIGHT FOR THE BABY LOVED HOW KHUSHI TOLD HIM THE WHOLE TRUTH LOVED HOW HE STOOD UP FOR HIS WIFE AND BABY HE SHOULD HAVE TAKEN HER AND LEFT HIS MOTHER WON''T GIVE UP THANKS FOR THE PM VERY VERY EMOTIONAL AWESOME UPDATE

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Did not realize Bhoojh is up already. Read the prologue. A very common story in some parts of the world even in the 21st century. The prologue gave Bhoojh a promising start. Gonna read the first two chapters now.

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Dat was jz fabulous
kudos to bod writers👏
blessed wid a luvng husband n cursed wid an evil MIL
hw can she b so cruel gosh
gt d child aborted n named it miscarriage ??
Ppl lik her bring shame to d society
she is also a woman she shud kill herslf first
I feel so enraged wen ppl lament d birth of a girl
if it wudnt b fr a woman no1 wud hav been on earth
pathetic thoughts that keep d society in such a bad lyt
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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Chapter 1:

I would only say that a woman is the worst enemy of another woman. Being a mother herself, Arnav's mom didn't for once think that what will her own son think if he learns the truth. She didn't even bother to think that she is killing a part of her own son, her own blood. Leave Khushi, she didn't even consider the happiness of her son. Khushi should've told the truth to Arnav the first time itself. For she was a mother too whose child was killed even before it was born and the woman she was trying to save was the one who killed her baby. She is very lucky to have Arnav in her life who understands her and most importantly, he trusts her completely. He had every right to know what actually has happened to his baby. Along with Khushi and the baby, Arnav also was the victim of his mother's cruelty. I feel sorry for Arnav the most as he didn't know what happened to his baby, he was betrayed in the worst way possible by his own mother, he has lost not only his baby but also his mother. A father is equally hurt when he loses his child as the mother. But when we can see the pain of a mother on her face, a father hides the pain so that he can support the mother. Nonetheless he is hurt equally. Unfortunately such occurrences are still very common in the society. Many mothers suffer through similar pain or even worst where they have no one to support. Jyo is a fantastic writer and so is Jenna. So I m very much glad that u have decided to shed light on the darker side of the society through ur writings. Its time we know the reality and act on removing the darkness

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

His mom made him feel like a failure. He failed to protect Khushi and his baby just because he thought they were under the safest care of his mother. Arnav tried his mother to see sense but he is again making a mistake by trusting his mother. She will hurt Khushi again and this time with double force. He should've left already. He is thinking about the daughter of the woman who killed his and Khushi's unborn daughter. His mother is very lucky to have a son like Arnav and a daughter in law like Khushi but unfortunate enough to not to understand their value. I hope this time she will not be able to hurt any of them. Great update. Thanks for the pm :)