#3:Arhi FF-Making You Mine,ch 10-13, #4 link pg 1

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Blithesome Barlie doll :* :) I'm Keerthu

@...Rapunzel...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

yayyy

From now on late-updating is not permitted understood?

Great great update

I sooo sooo love your style of writing

And hey Arnav its just not a simple attraction its LOVE😳

UPDATE SOONISH

Edited by KeerthuKiarshi - 12 years ago

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Blithesome Barlie doll :* :) I'm Keerthu

@...Rapunzel...

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

yaaay

finally you updated

love you Rottie n sorry for spamming 😳

yeh lo pappis for the update

but you're really really late

but finally

n hey give the next update soon

now lemme read

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

simply superb.loved it
keep writing
and thnxx for such wonderful stuff

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Awesome update...

Finally update to kiya...

Abse no deri...

Loved their meeting near the door .The feelings were well described...

now next is WMB right???!!!!

Edited by ...Iyla... - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

thats his reason for getting married
aur koi naa milli this inhe
he could have married some other girl
but that still dont excuse the fact what he did was right
but yes if he is willing to repay for the same then i think its time he is given the chance
waise all those things he is justifying to himself for what
why does it matter if he is faithful to her or not
why is he thinking so much about khushi
dude once you question the why only then will things make sense to you
but then the contract when it finishes what then arnie
guess that will know when that time comes
if that time comes
how temporary is this marriage for them
wow both were just looking and not blinking
they sure were lost in one another
hmmm and he let her in
wow this is something for sure
cant wait for more now

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Loved the update... You hv written Arnav's perspective really well.. 👏

Thanks for the PM... update soon nxt time.. 😉

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

awesome update so that the reason he got married to show the world he was not a womanizer interesting and play the good guy for a bit glad to know at least he is being faithfully for now so is it attraction or love from his side but that still does excuse what he did so emotional he dad hugged him glad that his sil came to visit so sad he never bother to come with her awesome update

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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LiNdASoUmZ

@LiNdASoUmZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

i dnt got the first place nhi..next tym mera first place mjhe chahiye..spamming warning mein mera koi dosh nahi hai...
Update ka toh kya baatao superb hai superb hai

Edited by MyluvASR - 12 years ago