#3:Arhi FF-Making You Mine,ch 10-13, #4 link pg 1

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Beautiful update
strong attraction??!tym wil answer dat

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Neen

@nnsunn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Awesome update.
Beautifuly described both their emotions, well written. Loved khushi admiring her father being happy on seeing arnav. Glad that arnav decided to make up for his mistakes. So arnav's reason behind the contract s revealed, waiting 4 khushi's reason. Thanks 4 pm

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Finally you back with update...

As usually loved the update and the POV's of Arnav and kushi are Amazing...

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

wonderful updt.
The POVs of both of them r well written.
Thx 4 the pm.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

this is just so wonderful...the thing I love most of this story,their emotions,feelings and thought showed in details...so beautifully written...loved it...continue soon...

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

it feels like ages that i read this story.
thank goodness u expressed their pov n that too so beautifully. 👏
wow, he is ready to make amends.
n that was the reason he married her. so that he ends the rounds of negative publicity about him. 😒 ohhh that means he wud've married anyone at that situation given an option. 😒
now wonder why she married him... maybe just for shashi.
hope hope hope khushi doesnt let him do this room mates wid no ill feelings things with her. i really dont want him to get forgiveness that easily. although im sure he wont ask for one. Egoistic ASR. 😡

n u stopped at such a point... how could u rotten... 😭 😭
i wanna read more