#3:Arhi FF-Making You Mine,ch 10-13, #4 link pg 1

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

The best thing I love in this story is one from his POV,and one from her...was waiting for this...loved the way its written...as if I felt her pain...and the ending...he is there...dying for the next part already...don't make us wait so long again...

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

After a long time you have updated and I actually had tears in my eyes when I read about Khushi's pain, her longing and her inability to forget her husband even when she was so away from her. Arnav has also missed Khushi but both are unable to express their feelings to each other. And suddenly we have Arnav at Khushi's house and this is no doubt to take Khushi back with him to his house. Arnav thinks it is only his guilt which is making him come to Khushi's house but in reality he has fallen for her, he feels incomplete without her. Can't wait to see both Khushi and Arnav talking and Khushi coming back to Arnav. But this time around I want Khushi to not fall for him so soon. Let Arnav woo her with all his might. Can you please update little sooner the next time around. Thanks - it was lovely reading an update on one of my favorite stories.

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nimmi

@aksuji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

o God...first of all take my bow...it was so amazing an update...u r really amazing ,

u know actually,literally and practically my heart skipped a beat when I read this

"The full fledged smile that was on display immediately faltered the next instant

cuz it wasnt the next door aged Sharma ji..but a still immaculately handsome n undoubtedly charming, looking as fresh as ever, Arnav singh Raizada at the door."

even though I knew it would be arnav still I felt a tug in my heart n it was the effect of the whole update that I read will all interest before coming to this end,

all of khushi's emotions,her efforts in hiding her sorrow n trying to be cheerful ...n still being a loser in that...u have written it so fluently and amazingly,atleast I really really loved it...

description of all khushi's emotions made arnav's entry quite special and soo eagerly looking forward to what will happen next and how arnav would interact with her and what would be khushi's reaction...

oh m so thrilled for next part...actually m impatient...

plz plz plz continue soon...I don't know what I have written down but m actually overwhelmed after reading this update n I won't reread my comment coz I know I mightend up deleting that all ...

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

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khushi put up the act of bubbliness to not show her restless but her resolve is breaking...she still cared for him
arnav is at door...khushi caressing his pic was so cute
waiting for more updates
update soon
thanks for pm

Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago

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apoorva12sharma

@apoorva12sharma

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

A marriage of two

is for love that is true

A marriage of two

is always something new

A marriage of two

happens sometimes out of the blue

A marriage of two

is worth it when its due

A marriage of two

is a marriage of trust

Many can find themselves lost

It can be an expensive cost

They are only very few

who have a clue

of when love accrues

A marriage of two

is about love making

It is not about

money raking

A marriage of two

can be bad

A marriage of two

can be sad

You should only be glad if

A marriage of two

is for love that is true.

I love your work and Making You Mine is very close to my heart.

I loved the update.

I loved it when you portrayed the emotions of Khushi. Those emotions which you can't understand until you feel them and your way of writing makes me feel so deep that I sometimes go with the flow and start crying.

But please don't make us wait for so long.

Update soon .. :)

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Loved it..grat update but cant wait for the next update

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

omg!!...u jst cant end it der!!!... 😕 😭
superb part...
n i want faster update dis tym bas...
cant wait for nxt part...
thnx for d nxt part...

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veggie

@veggie

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

a fab update...luved how u described Khushi's emotions and gud dat Khushi is not gonna use arnav's money or be herself infront of him...he deserves it for now!

Oh Ma God!!! Arnav has finally cum to maybe get Khushi...wanna see how Khushi reacts...

Over all AMAZING!!! 👏

Continue soon! :)

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

NO did you stop THERE... how could you rotten : (
This updates were worth wait though much needed khushi pov.
aww i just wanted go and hug khushi tight poor girl so much pain.
Her turmoil when he kissed on her cheek oh i felt so sad.
She tried so hard almost done, one glance at him and there she was back to square one.
why is he doing this to her infact them both.
Now he is there to take her impatiently waiting to know more plz plz plz update soon.