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Firstly, ARE YOU MAD?? I didn't want to read the note which you put up but still read it.. Curiosity you know. 😆 It compelled me to read your note and don't worry, I totally understand why you put it. :P It happens to me too. We are at such an age where writing ahem stuff would be out of the way, and we can't put it together nicely. 😆
Now, are you mad isliye kyuki when I read the dare, I was expecting it to be a totally different OS. I have read some of your one shots till now, and they don't contain such stuff. This did. 😆 And how can you say that you suck at writing such stuff meri maa???😲 😲
This was one of the most well written one shots from your sides. It had everything one needs for writing a perfect OS. Most of all, I admired the continuity it had. You know, your write ups have that charm... one can definitely connect to the feelings very very well. This one, wasn't something like your other write ups, but oh my god, so beautifully penned down, that I could not help but go awestruck at your writing skills. Girl, you have this talent in built you know. You should do something about it. 😳
I loved this OS. It had so much flow and continuity in it.. Extremely well written. The end was completely natural and emotions were amazingly portrayed. Girl, you deserve a round of applause for writing so well. 👏
I could very well connect to the emotions they were going through. Seriously, brilliantly written. So beautiful, and I've nothing else to say no.
But definitely, one of the most beautiful one shots I have ever read. 😳
Well done.
