*Completed* Th#2 SS: Hold My Hand Ch. 4+NOTE pg. 1 - Page 12

Beautiful! Thanks for the pm.

I was initially disappointed with the update (not the quality of it, I may add - just the fact that Kushi did not exist). Then I read it again.. and I realized how amazing it really was. I could never have suspected other than when he was ordering coffee. This is excellent and while there is no Arnav-Kushi happy ending this is absolutely exceptional writing.

As for the female mechanic, I like to think it is not Kushi. I like to think no Arnav-Kushi happened to this Arnav as there will be no happy ending. It is hard if not impossible to live with someone who has acute schizophrenia.

Thank for you giving us another beautiful story.

ok.. I started reading this update when it was pretty late in the night and I slowly started getting the idea about what it could be.. Still when I read in the story that Khushi was non-existing, I kind of felt scared and stopped reading & decided to sleep..

I resumed reading now in the morning and turned out to be the same .. I kind of thought that Arnav having this disorder.

Though I normally like happy endings, kudos to you for attempting something different.. 👏


Now some doubts:

How was Anjali wrong in this whole thing? Shyam said that to her. And you also mentioned Aakash giving her hatred filled look..

Also, why did Anjali want to get everything sorted our before Shyam returns? (Earlier it kind of gave me the impression that Shyam might be a bad guy, but that was not the case I read on further.. )

Amazing update...
Really lovd this update...
Khushi s jst his imaginatn...!!!
Poor Arnav...I really feel bad 4 him...😭
Bt y did Shyam said that Arnav's fathr nd Anjali s responsibl 4 his this conditn...???

OMG!!

I new it wud hav 4 chptrs..

Bt dint realiz d cumin 1 wud b d last 1..O.o

Hw strange of me..

Okiiee..

Soo Arnav bach gya..

N was taken 2 d hospital.

N der Anjali came..n thanked d person..who helped him..

N tuk him back 2 Delhi..

Meanwhile no1 actually new wt had happened..only Anjali new

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She talked 2 Arnav..

N he told her abt Khushi..!!

N she said..she wud luk 4 her..

Dey went 2 Payal's place..

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She said she dint no ne Khushi..

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Shyam was cumin..

She asked Arnav 2 go home..n she wud pakka find Khushi..

N he agreed..

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She went 2 AR..!!

Checked d record/..

Bt Khushi's name was nowhr in d visitor's list..

Meko wahan laga k Khushi bhoot h..!!

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Was recallin d day she had cum 2 his office..

OMG!!

Was old t imagination..

I wud talk abt it later..

:P

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Anjali met Shyam..n she told him all wt happened..

At d cafe..whr d driver tuk Anjali..

D waiter said..Arnav was crack..:/

N said he came alone..

D waitress said d same,,'

2 coffees..n only him..!!

Dt was weird,,

So him shoutin at d waiter..d starin part was also imagination..:(

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Okie..

Soo finally Anjali-Shyam got 2 no wt actually was happenin..

N der Aaakash got 2 no..dt Arnav had attended a beach weddin..!!

Alone..!!

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Shyam-Anjali went 2 talk 2 Arnav..

N he almost killed Anjali..n blamed her..dt she has killed Khushi..

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So he's sufferin 4m Schizophrenia..

soo dey ol wer sooo carin..coz of dis..

n he dint drive..alone coz of dis..

wt was dt part?

whr Aakash was in d same cafe whr...Arnav was?!!

aisa tha na..?

dint Aakash notice d weirdness der?!!

Arnav dint socializ alot..coz of dis reason..!!

media was kept far..coz of dis..!!

okiee..!!

I new a bit abt dis..!! Schizophrenia..!

Bt itta nai pata tha..

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Bt my brother..!!

he was my only encyclo..wen i read d chptr today..

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He's doin his MBBS!! ...

N i tuk n hour..:D

2 understnd evrythin..

Hw dey imgine things..

N hw it's 4 lifelong..

wid medicines m ol kamm hota h..

N d way he was explainin me..

I was kinda scared..

Lol

An eg...

If yu ask d person 2 draw a triangle..

He wud draw a circle..n say..triangle hi toh h..!!

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N 1 more..dey cn kill demslves..d others 2..(Anjali waale part ko maine dhyaan me rakh k ye poocha tha..:D)

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N soo much..!!

Gosh!!

He asked me..4m whr i ol of a sudden was interested in medicals..n Schizophrenia..

N i was ol blushin.!!

Ofcourse..!! d reason was Arshi..!!

I jus said..i read it sumwhr..!!

Ye thode batatti k..i read n Arshi fiction..n der Arnav was soo..!!

Ye toh haddd ho jaati..

:/

Okiee...

Sooo end part.!!

I don't want him 2 b in d fase again..

Lyk..ya..

He must hav forgotten a bit abt her..

Or may b alot.!!

So y 2 get in2 d same phase..!!?

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Bt i dint evn want Khushi 2 b real..

Aisa hota toh..he wud again b in d same past.!!

Every now n den..he wud recall.?!!!

N so..

Well..

I m stil scared..:(

Soo...wish 2 skip it..:(

Loved d updte..

Dint expect d stry 2 b dis kinda..!!

Seriously..!!

loved it as alwz..:)

Awesome ending loved the fact that it was completely different from anything else.

This was one shocking update...did not expect the end to this SS would be completely shocking...very well written!!! :)

Wow Zehra, what an ending to your SS 'hold my hand'!!!!

Wow! what a twist in the end... Still trying to gather my thoughts, dunno what to write... 😕

Wow, my heart just dropped when u said relapse !! 😲