*Completed* Th#2 SS: Hold My Hand Ch. 4+NOTE pg. 1

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

gave me goosebums...

yest only i was reading abt schizo patients...n i somewat guessed it wen anjali in d hosp thinks der is secret

love d turn of events...gave me gooose bumps

poor arnav...

nicely written...

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I had guessed some gadbad in the third part... Nice story.., liked it.

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

ok so Arnav was imagining all of it... his imaginations are very pretty I must say... yep its something new... I think Akash was looking at Anjali with hatred in his eyes because she brought out the topic of Arnav's marriage out right? and that was the reason he was back to his illness... so tht was the medicine Akash was always giving him and I guess because of the terrible feelings of being rejected and saying terrible things about Payal though without intenstion of hurting her caused him to take the medicines on time and that's y he was hallucinating Khushi... It was very different and unique concept as an SS or fanfiction great job done... Though it was rushed but to be honest it was very well written and upto a level I found it perfect and u did justice to the story... and u left the ending for us and I am thinking a happy ending with marriage and kids and all that😆 ahem stuff as well... loved the update

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 12 years ago

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Arshi_fanad

@Arshi_fanad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

This seems like Talaash where Amir Khan has the same problem and sees Kareena who is not real at all.

Frankly, I 'd never expected this story to t be this sort of. I thought this would be a happy-Arnav-Khushi story. Anyways, you are a writer and you should always try something new.

I'm not disappointed. In fact, I'm happy to have had a chance to read a Arnav-Khushi-non-existence tale. Really good.

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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

I may have disappointed many by the last chapter and you may have felt that this could have been written in a better way or it was too rushed or why write this one at all. I had never written something on this genre. So was just trying my hands on it. Forgive me if it was not good enough :)

Also you may feel that I could have given a background and written this one in a greater detail. But that was not the aim behind writing the story. I just wanted to narrate a tale in which Khushi was there and not there :)

This story was perfect. You are right, schizophrenics may be extremely talented like noble prize winning Dr. Nash. Arnav being rude to the waiter was a hint, again Akash following arnav to the coffee shop was another. A little background in the last chapter from shyam's perspective about the original cause of his disease would have been gratifying, because schizophrenia generally needs a primary trigger. Payal's rejection could have been the trigger for his relapse. Just a doubt, did arnav know why he was taking medicines or has the family lied to him about another physiological condition say like diabetes to substantiate which Akash was also taking placebos in front of arnav?

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rechup

@rechup

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Omg... Actually i suffered a heartbreak here... Schizophrenia... I felt so bad realising that khushi was not real... Reading ur story was the first thing i did in morning... From that time i am upset... Terribly upset... Hope the girl in the end is not his imagination...

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

I honestly enjoyed it... Awesome story line.. What is fun in reading the same stories.. This was new and I really loved it..

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Vee

@reflorated

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

AHA. I KNEW IT *fist pump* Lazy, you little genius! This totally defines the paas aane naa da, door jaane na de thingo.

One question -- if he was on medication ... how come he imagined Khushi? Or was he off his meds?

Who was the woman towards the end. ANSWER ME. You left me hanging =(

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Another thing ... Had Anjali done something similar in the past?

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

My goosness!! This story turned out to be something totally unexpected! 😲
i mean WTH!! Khushi was just his imagination!!! 😲
and everything was just an illusion!??
I really will hav to re-read this story to understand what every situation meant.. And even akash sounds mysterious...and i really wish the woman at the end is khushi, ofcourse! 😉
anyways, thanx for the happy reading moment! 👏