*Completed* Th#2 SS: Hold My Hand Ch. 4+NOTE pg. 1

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

now im dumbstruck! its not the ending i was expecting! i would have never thought that khushi was just a figure of arnav's imagination! their meetings and their talks sounded so real! well i guess thats the talent of a superb writer like u making something not real appear so full of life!

i duno wat to say whether arnav got the ending he deserved or not but i loved the concept and the way u finished this ff, it was so different!

now i understand y everyone was always so attentive to arnav!

a big congratulation on successfully completed this ff! and it was awesome from the start to the end!

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

oh wow.. tht was a nice twist... i did not expect anything of this kind... enjoyed reading it :)

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: V323
AHA. I KNEW IT *fist pump* Lazy, you little genius! This totally defines the paas aane naa da, door jaane na de thingo.

One question -- if he was on medication ... how come he imagined Khushi? Or was he off his meds?

Who was the woman towards the end. ANSWER ME. You left me hanging =(

Vee, if you are on medication also hallucination will be there. The women in the end is Kushi only, it is other episode of his hallucination. Sometimes, there will be more than one person also in hallucination, it is a fine line to define the psychiatry case or clinical psychological case. Here definitely Arnav is Psychiatric case, Sometimes if episode is severe patients are admitted and given mild shocks in the brain to subside the hallucination thoughts.

According to me Anjali and whole raizadas are aware but they dont want to acknowledge his mental state and proceeded to get him married.

Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Love the manner in which you've built up the mystery… really eager to know why the media shouldn't learn anything about Arnav or why he had to be shifted to Delhi so quickly, as also why Arnav's near-drowning is being kept from Akash! Moreover, too many things being hidden from one or the other member of the family, it seems! Anjali's casual manner of talking about Khushi came as a surprise… it's almost like Khushi's wellbeing didn't concern her! How can she be so sure that Khushi is all right and returned to Delhi? Neither do I understand the need to hide the phone from Arnav… the joke's timing is misplaced… doesn't she know Arnav will be frantic with worry about Khushi… or seemingly Khushi is a figment of his imagination! So looks like Arnav is suffering from a mental breakdown or schizophrenia and all Anjali seems to think about is what society will say… she seems to be equally delusional! Glad that Shyam spoke harshly to her! A pretty interesting twist at the end, and now I understand why Khushi's whereabouts weren't a priority. My point of view is that the Raizadas have been blaming the Guptas about being untruthful, but I would say the latter had a lucky escape, and that the former turned out to be the most dishonest! Why is marriage considered the cure to all ills, especially in our serials and films? Schizophrenia is no laughing matter… no wonder Akash is so furious with Anjali! Well Zehra, you've done full justice to what you set out to write!

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

i knd of guzd dat arnie s imaginig vn anji dint find khushi in d rcrd

loved d unique concept zehra

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

You just dont know how I went through the whole update..!! I was full of anxiety as the suspense was killing me..!! OMG...!! Schizophrenic!! Ouchh.. that hurt!!!

anywayzz... A very Good effort.. somethng neww .. and yayyy another storyy has come up..!! Muahz for that :-)

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Freaking gud. . Khushi wasnt thr ACTUALLY. . God atleast let him find hs khushi in the mechanic. .
Superb. .

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Madhumita Saravanan

@madhuishq

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

I didnt expect such an nding.Amazing!

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

what a twist!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Zehra! what was that!? No No i am not 'disappointed' abt what the last chapter had! bu t i am surely feeling low that it was the last chapter!

That was beautiful Zehra ... the concept that is.. .yes a very risky one to have tried .. but the thing is you pulled it off just fine!

It kinda made my heart tug at the situation at hand! and offcourse to have imagined Arnav to be going through it all... surely the impact had to be more!

Nevertheless ... that was definitely a genre that you have managed to really bring out the desired effect it is meant to have!

Really good! proud of you ... really! :)