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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 4Sitting on bench at railway ,Meera looked at people passing by...So many families receiving their loved ones...Some joys celebrated...some contended...some planning their day ahead ... She wished every week...that this will be her last visit...waiting for sameer to return...to her... but like always he didnt... she wanted to prove world around her wrong... they didnt know but she knew...Sameer will come one day...just for her...as he has to ...coz he promised...Meera looked back to those days...when their love was just about to bloom...she didnt know it would be so soon...but then this ,man was something else... and she was already taken in...by that charm...
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After that incident of bikers, Meera had developed some liking for sameer...but what was that she could not decide...She used to get nervous around him...Just the thought of being him close to her...made her excited...made her smile without a reason... He did start flattering her with compliments each day...he knew well how to impress girls... as meera thought she was hard one ...but she was already taken in... till one day.. when sameer asked her out for dinner...she had no clue...as noone has asked her like that... Was he asking for a date...?
"Meera, It will be fun...plus I need to really check out this fine restaurant...lets have a dinner yaar.. just two of us..." Sameer asked hoping for her to agree..."Just two of us...wait I will ask shekhar to join us..." Meera said"What...shekhar...I mean... Why cant it be just us..." Sameer replied irritated with shekhar's name always...between them"Oh... yeah sure... I will see you then..." Meera said "Oh thats great then...it is 7 pm then...I will pick up from your home..." Sameer said smilingly
Meera was excited..so many butterflies in her stomach...she was so looking forward...to the evening...though she didnt understand why...but she wanted her to look her best... She chose her best dress...red one...lil short ...but still she can wear it..she thought...she let her hair loose...had matching danglers ... And she did look like a princess... Her mother was watching getting amused by her daughter's sudden interest in dressing herself up...and getting little worried too ...coz she has grown up...and was going for dinner with a guy alone...had it been shekhar ..she would nt have mind...but with this Sameer...she was bit apprehensive...she had met him only once or twice...He was well behaved and nice boy...but still...sighed her mother..."Mummy, i think sam is already outside waiting...I better go now..." Meera said taking her purse..."Sure dear...take care" Her mother kissed her and led her outside
That dinner date with sameer was like a dream for meera...she was made to feel to special...and she liked it...Sameer was a gentleman and he knew well how to win girl's heart...They had known each other for few months now since he came in...but in such short time only he had managed to make meera's heart beat faster...After dinner they thought of taking a stroll in garden outside restaurant...Then suddenly...Sameer went serious...and shocked her..."I wanted to say something to you from a long time...Actually from the time I saw you...I felt something...didnt know what ...but having known you now...I realised that if there would be someone with whom I can spend rest of life with...that person is only you..."Meera had perfect 'O' expression on her face... what ...is he serious... and then ...Sameer came near ...and held her hand...looked into her confused eyes and said..."I love you Meera..."Meera had no idea on how to react on this...but she was mesmerised with honesty in those eyes...there were true emotions...she just kept staring at that man..noone had done this to her..made her feel so special ..this man..who came ..and just took her breathe away...
Meera came to shekhar's house late night...She had asked sameer to drop her there...Shekhar was surprised to see Meera at this hour..."Meera...You so late...is everything ok...?..was that sameer who just dropped you ..what happened...where were you ...i was looking around for you all this while..." Shekhar asked all at once looking worried...
With so many questions bombarded at meera...meera just came and hugged shekhar...in her own thoughts...with happy tears in her eyes... She wanted to share one of her best moments in life with her best friend...
"Sameer proposed to me... and I said yes..." Meera said while still in shekhar's arms...
It pinched him hard...but he didnt know why... Meera was so happy... and Sameer was nice guy... But still his eyes were moist... may be because of too much happiness he thought... and he held her strongly in his arms...
"You love him...right?" Shekhar asked softly...in her ears
"Yes...i think..." Meera replied with a smile...blushing hard..
Something was broken inside...but he rather kept it hidden ...sometimes we realise our own feelings so late... and he knew it ...he was late...
"I am happy for you Meera..." said shekhar...a tear flowed from his eyes... meera didnt notice ...and he was glad that she didnt...
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Note- A surprise update...Yes finally I wrote it ...Thanks to all my buddies for comments...and those who could not comment...Please do it ...I love reading it...Just kidding...Just read it...that will be all😊
Edited by riti4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Nice Soulful update Riti.😛.

So Shekhar lost her to Sameer. Got late in realising his feelings.
Sameer was fast, may be too fast and he had some X-factor which made the things work in his favour.
Meera, she heard Sameer's voice but could not hear Shekhar's silence which might have been louder than Sameer's words.

Sometimes one fails to see the things which are very near to them!

The confession was nice and u still seem to have a hang of IPK ('O' expression 😆).
Edited by mpk2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Something was broken inside...but he rather kept it hidden ...sometimes we realise our own feelings so late... and he knew it ...he was late...
You just made me cry... Don't you know I am in office..😉
Nice one..
Two most deep emotions... Happiness of Having Love ... Pain of Losing Love
Edited by A_Soul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: A_Soul

Something was broken inside...but he rather kept it hidden ...sometimes we realise our own feelings so late... and he knew it ...he was late...
You just made me cry... Don't you know I am in office..😉
Nice one..
Two most deep emotions... Happiness of Having Love ... Pain of Losing Love

Aww...thanks soul dear...you are one of dedicated reader i have...🤗...I am glad you liked it...
Indeed two people...different feelings...one just found love...one just lost it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i read part 2 n 3 now only..:)..rtiti u know the craft very well.:)
its more like watching a movie...scene by scene depiction...:)n with minimal words...:)like this back n forth narration
sameer saving meera...hmm...ritiji z highly influenced by bw..:-P but d scene z very thrilling...;-)
meera waiting for sameer in the station...endless waiting..beautifully depicted...
their confession scene...the honesty in sameer's eyes...true emotions...:) ritiji...i know sameer modelled on whome...:-P
shekhar becomes heart broken...n this scene ws truely touching...
story reached a cross road?
waiting for the next update...:) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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New update... yipee!!...
... you write like a screen play dear...!! hmm... a young musical update. first a tone of melancholy, when Meera is waiting endlessly for her Sameer. then all those young vibrant energy in the flash back... excitement, nervousness of a new found feeling.

shekhar was late... he didnt know what he felt for her till someone else took her away from him. poor guy.

btween this one is for Shekhar that girl was near him all these days n ab jaake his ghanti bhaji


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mpk2011

Nice Soulful update Riti.😛.

So Shekhar lost her to Sameer. Got late in realising his feelings.
Sameer was fast, may be too fast and he had some X-factor which made the things work in his favour.
Meera, she heard Sameer's voice but could not hear Shekhar's silence which might have been louder than Sameer's words.

Sometimes one fails to see the things which are very near to them!

The confession was nice and u still seem to have a hang of IPK ('O' expression 😆).

thnks for comment madhu jee... Sameer was fast coz i made it... may be in rush to finish his part😆...but on a serious note... it is just that meera was attracted to him first...and his being nice and all added to that attraction...was it love for meera...she didnt knw...she never experienced it...and noone had actually said that to her too...her realisation...came ..when he expressed his feelings...which shekhar never did... yes sometimes silence is not understood...even by people who are closest to us...Sometimes we need to tell them our true feelings too...and before that we need to realise our feelings too...Shekhar realised it late...that he had feelings for meera in other way...a feeling called love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishaj

i read part 2 n 3 now only..:)..rtiti u know the craft very well.:)
its more like watching a movie...scene by scene depiction...:)n with minimal words...:)like this back n forth narration
sameer saving meera...hmm...ritiji z highly influenced by bw..:-P but d scene z very thrilling...;-)
meera waiting for sameer in the station...endless waiting..beautifully depicted...
their confession scene...the honesty in sameer's eyes...true emotions...:) ritiji...i know sameer modelled on whome...:-P
shekhar becomes heart broken...n this scene ws truely touching...
story reached a cross road?
waiting for the next update...:) :)

if you hav ever followed my writing before... you will know i like to say in minimum words possible...😆 thus length so small...bt emotions shud be high...glad you felt it...😊...yup bike wala scene purely result of watchin too many shows n movies😆..abt those eyes...dear misha jeee...i was abt to write chocalate brown eyes too...but like madhu caught perfect O...in this ...u wud hav caught more on that...😉...last scene was emotional...to write too...Glad it touched you...
Thanks for comments😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueballoon

New update... yipee!!...
... you write like a screen play dear...!! hmm... a young musical update. first a tone of melancholy, when Meera is waiting endlessly for her Sameer. then all those young vibrant energy in the flash back... excitement, nervousness of a new found feeling.

shekhar was late... he didnt know what he felt for her till someone else took her away from him. poor guy.

btween this one is for Shekhar that girl was near him all these days n ab jaake his ghanti bhaji


Aww jachu ...thats so sweet... you categorised update so beautifullly...i think u shud start writing too...yup shekhar was jerk and deserved that hammer... he was just late to realise he loved her...
Lovely comment...thanks dear...*hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

thnks for comment madhu jee... Sameer was fast coz i made it... may be in rush to finish his part😆...but on a serious note... it is just that meera was attracted to him first...and his being nice and all added to that attraction...was it love for meera...she didnt knw...she never experienced it...and noone had actually said that to her too...her realisation...came ..when he expressed his feelings...which shekhar never did... yes sometimes silence is not understood...even by people who are closest to us...Sometimes we need to tell them our true feelings too...and before that we need to realise our feelings too...Shekhar realised it late...that he had feelings for meera in other way...a feeling called love...




Meera was attracted to the lady killer😊. What she had for him to begin with was attraction and infatuation only but not love. When he expressed his feelings she realised that she loved him.

Shekhar... ab kya bolu? His had depth but lacked words. And it was not just about expressing, it was about realisation too. The realisation hit him when someone else took the cake away!

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