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shopaholicloves

@shopaholicloves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

i read parinay a few days back..n i really liked it.

a very simple story..but you have written it wonderfully.

i am glad you sticked to it being a SS..would have never liked arnav sleeping with lavanya..after khushi gives him another chance.thanks!!

i also liked how you portrayed arnav as a normal guy..making mistakes and correcting them..😊

i loved the last sequence wherein khushi is not pregnant..it was quite logical that she will take time to want to have kids..

arnav cooks..😊😛

i have soo liked this story..that now i will read your other ones too..keep writing..you are too good.😛

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Thank you NB for not making parinay into a long story...this story has more impact...because I do not think that this khushi could have taken arnav back after sleeping with lavanaya, his remorse or not...loved this story..my all time favourite

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jisa

@jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

this was a nice closing note...
trust me...the story u decided was also very interesting and a lots of ups n downs i guess...
but i liked the SS in this way...
coz...i don't think it would be nice to read to arnav sleeping with his x while he is married to khushi n later khushi accepting him...

thank you for writing about arnav so beautifully...
someone who has flaws...yet someone to hold into...someone who makes mistakes...yet u can trust him more than yourself...
w8ng to read more from u..!!

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Deepa

@harshdb

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

wow.. what a realistic story. can feel many emotions through out the FF while reading. i m more happy to read all the chapters in one go with out waiting for next. cant thank enough for such an amazing story. and the ending note has touched my heart especially the dedication of FF.. great going. Thanks once again.

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Thanx for this beautiful arhi story
It was a pleasure reading and it
UR other arhi stories are also awesome
Thanx

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

thanks for sharing this beautiful ss with us !!👍🏼

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

NB ji I am glad you wrote Parinay the way you did. I just cannot fathom Arnav cheating on Khushi and then starting his way to redemption. I feel strongly against cheating.

Loved how you kept this SS short, it had a better and a more powerful impact.

Do we get an epilogue? Please give us one! please please :D

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Wow interesting!

I really like how you went with this version instead of the one mentioned above. I'm sure that one would have rocked as well but I feel like this one was more realistic and logical. The second version I feel would have been just all over the place with the cheating and the baby etc

Overall it was great to see where the idea came from

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Thanks NB for this story! I really enjoyed discussions , diff POVs and making new friends.
And thank God you didn't stick to original storyline. If Arnav slept with Lavs while working on his marriage with Khushi then maybe I would not have been able to take it! I dont know abt Khushi!!

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supriya

@Dreamy123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#730

read whole story in one go...i must say fab fab fab 👏 story line ...really liked khushi not taking crap from anyone mature,independent... liked Arnav also...not leaving his responsibility

sensitive enough to think about khushi n taking care of her ...evem la is also nice...so many positive things in whole story...just loved it to the core...thank u so much for such lovely story ...thanks kalyani for directing us to this story 😃