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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

I really love reading all your writings 😃

thank you 😊 for this wonderful SS 🤗

"Happy Anniversary" to you and your Arnavji 😃

Edited by spsharmila - 12 years ago

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Awesome awesome awesome!!! Just loved it:-)) wow I am so going to miss this story:-(( but loved this part.., looking forward to read your new one and also CD..,

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

*sniffs*

*wipes tears*

*sniffs some more*

Parinay has come to an end 😭

What a story, like a storm that swept all of us. Bound so many of us together. Arguing, debating, discussing, fangirling, being angry, sad, happy...a multitude of emotions and so many new friends, all thanks to you! You are a rockstar ⭐️

What I loved most about this last chapter was that you maintained the element of reality, it doesn't take a leap into the fairy land just after the confession. The quote in the end fits pefectly. Insecurities take their time to leave, wounds take time to heal... decisions are tough, compromises are real. I liked that you showed Aakash all guilt ridden (rightly so) and his way out of it. And the last conversation between Arnav and Khushi, hopes for a future together.

Lovely! And you mentioned me in your note! Awwiiee 😳

Thank you for writing this story *wipes more tears.. where the hell is that tissue?* I love you dammit!

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Beautiful end of a beautiful story...will miss waiting for the daily update...it has been a wonderful journey...which has been quite a thought provoking journey...I could add lots of personnel points from my own life but it wont be right on open forum though...all I will say is that some finer points of the story has influenced me to a great extend...so thank you.

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rechup

@rechup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Forgot. To wish u a happy anniversary...

Many many happy returns of d day...
Lots of love for ur little one...
God bless ur happy family...

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

It was truly a beautiful journey so far..will miss this one..it was dfrnt n surely worth many rereads ...

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

very nice...
loved it..
finally lavanya is moving on..
loved to see all of them happy..

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verisimilitude

@verisimilitude

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

First of all Happy Wedding Anniversary..
True we can do nothing unless we get the support from our better half... Thanks for a wonderful perfected journey in spite of your schedule with the little one.. Its really difficult to manage a normal routine when we are more attentive towards our little one's actions especially this growing stages.

The end as we call here. Lavanya has finally found out her real interest.. Glad that she had found her apt choice though after going through a turmoil.Three years or shall we call it Nine months of Married life of a newly "marriage accepted" couple..They did wait for the love to get realised before they entered into this acceptance. Arnav's love realisation and his truth fulness in not hiding the fact that he realised it in Lavanya's arms was truly impeccable.. Its time that clears every thing straight.. Khushi needed that time to realise that he was indeed being kind hearted to Lavanya than being insensitive by not visiting her at the time of despair.Her dreams are getting fulfilled, his dreams of seeing her happy attains too..
Happy to see the family around to witness the once forced couple accepting the marriage with their pure love.. Akash finally accepts his guilt and he too suffers like his cousin. Finally the couple like a normal couple has their own decisions on the family trying to accept each other's wishes which may again change in due course of time.. Thanks for the wonderful ending..

I had seen a national award winning malayalam movie called Parinayam where the female protoganist becomes fourth wife of a man in his 60s in an orthodox family.. To be frank your title dragged me into the story as I found the similar name to that movie.. I seriously got hooked into it.. A simple concept, complex relations conflicting ideals and confusing minds.. I liked Arnav the most.. his flaws, his transition and in the end his achievement was beyond words. Khushi's boldness, her vision to success, her quest for love, her rigidness and her firmness in decision making even after much conflicts highlights her character. I loved her friend Sharanya too in this FF. Though her part is less she played an important role in support of KHushi. It was totally Realistic.. Nothing fictitious.. Insecurities, confusions, flaws are all part of life.. It depends on how we get through all of these..

Perfect words.. Happily Ever After is really a choice. A choice made by the couple and not by those who forced the choice upon them!

You deserve a 👏 for this excellent writing..

PS: I started reading your first fiction Chasing Dreams.. Taking my own sweet time to complete till the recent chapter as I dont want to finish and wait desperately for the next ones..😆

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Such a realistic story! Even the ending is real. I feel this Khushi is a tad selfish and Arnav is too understanding, but in real life, people are not perfect! Looking forward to your new story and please update Chasing Dreams soon!

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

I am a tad bit sad to read about the denouement of an amazing narrative..

But, that does not take away the fact that this story brought some really thought-provoking matters to the fore...

It was so nice to read about La signing up to do charity work, in Congo... after, her chance meeting with Pierre..and devoting her life for a better cause...

My heart went out to the guilt-ridden Akash, who became an insomniac ...but, thank heavens, he was on the road to recovery..

Ah! Khushi was agonized that Arnav realized his love for her when he was with La...nonetheless, things fell in place...

Glad to read that they made peace with everyone, and, the dinner with Chef Arnav's special biryani, which tantalized the taste buds of all those present, and, earning him plaudits...was heartwarming... forgive and forget, should be the mantra...it gives one, immense inner peace...

And, the last few lines gave me a sense of satisfaction...both trying to be accommodating...and, thinking about the other's well-being...

Lastly, I loved that you have dedicated this story to the women, all over who were not fortunate enough to have the opportunity/make choices...Thank you, NB, for such a noble thought...

And, here's wishing you..

May this day of your anniversary make your relation stronger and lovelier. Wish you a happy anniversary.!!!!