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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
sryy couldnt comment on the 2nd part..
i want to read new parts so cont sooonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART - 4


~ MONDAY... at Nurse Station ~


Mu : ye HITLER abhi tak nahi ayee???!!!

An : abhi bhi do minute bki hain muski...

Ni : yup... i agree yaar... She can nvr be late!!

juz then they all heard a strict voice...
"Good morning interns!!"

Ni : le aa gayyee teri fav mentor ;)
muski juz rolled her eyes to nikki... :P

An: waise woh Riddhima Gupta aaj bhi nahi ayee yaar!!

Mu: sacchi yaar.. i think usse apni job se koi lagao nahi hain...


"DOCTOR MUSKAAN CHADDA !!!"
her banter stopped hearing dr. Keerti's voice again...
"aapki time pass aur gossip session agar khatam ho gayyee hain to kya aab main duties assign kar sakti hoon???"

Mu: ye...sss ma..ammm... so..rr..yyy :(

Dr. ke: okk dr. armaan OT... aap dr. subhankar ko assist karenge!!

Ar: yes mam

Ke: Dr. atul... Children ward...
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~ At the Same Time at Sanjeevani Main Entrance ~


A slim hot sorry... super hottt gal wearing tight sleeve less top nd short skirt entered Sanjeevani... She was chewing a gum... Twirling her car keys in her index finger of her ri8 hand... wearing high heels.. her hair was tied in a top knot... no ornaments except her 4 ear rings... nd Tattoos...

Every1 was staring at her with awe!! Nurses were feeling jealous seeing every male worker checking her out!! But She dint pay any attention.. walked stylishly 2 d reception nd asked..

"cuse mee... can u tell me where's the nurse station??"


The nurse frowned... Y d hell dis super model needed 2 go 2 d nurse station.. dats 4 doctors only!! Bt b4 she could ans, a male worker replied 4m a side... "1st straight.. then left."

She looked at d source... without saying a thank u, she followed d direction... She was very well aware of her effect on guys... But she truly dint care...




~ Back 2 the Nurse Station ~


Ke: dr. abhimanyu ... path lab..

Ab: yess mam..

ke: dr. RIDDHIMA GUPTA...

every1 started whispering (except Abhi) as THE riddhima gupta dint come 2day also... but to their surprise they heard a voice...

"YESS DOC !!"

every1 looked at d source but couldn't find any1 as their view was restricted due to dr. keerti... But dr. keerti turned as soon as she heard d reply nd all other saw d face of the most discussed intern.. THE RIDDHIMA GUPTA !!

but every1 startled seeing her... dey dint expected HER in their worst dream (except abhi of course)... Armaan almost got a 440volt shock!!! "SHE IS THE RIDDHIMA GUPTA...AN INTERN???!!!!!!" armaan thought all surprised...

Mu: wat the hell??? ye super model, miss arrogant ek INTERN hain??

An: nd d worst thing is we've to tolr8 her at least 1 whole year... damn!!!

At: ye.. aur intern????

Ra: i cant believe it , man!!!

Ni: god... humara bad luck hi kharab hai yaar!!!

An: see.. how has she dressed??? koi usse bataye.. ye hospital hain.. ramp ya disc nahi... (she felt disgusted)

Mu: dnt wrry.. HITLER will surely eat her (nd she winked at anji)

Dr. ke: So... u r the last intern???

Ri: yess doc..

Ke: DOCTOR... its dr... dnt ever try 2 be cheesy wth me..

Ri: oopppss... (she blew her bubble gum with air nd it blasted causing noise irritating dr. keerti more)

Ke: DR. GUPTA!!! GO.. THROW UR GUM RI8 NOW...

Ri: i'll doc... ooppss sorryy... doctor... but 1st lemme know my duty...

Ke: (raising 1 of her eye brows) r u really interested in duties??? then where d hell r u during the 1st week of ur carrier???

Ri : lill busyy... (casually said)

Ke: with???

Muski was enjoying the live telecast most among all other.. 1st of all she hated ds new intern nd 2ndly she finally found sum1 2 shot back HITLER... nd unknowingly she answered lill loud...
"Busy with parties... aur kya.. kyun abhi??"

Dr. keerti passed a deadly glare nd she stopped then n there like an obidient school student..

Dr. Ke: so... u're busy... but this is not an office where u're d boss nd u can cum whenever u want... u're going 2 be a doctor.. do u have any idea how imp carrier u're into... (taking a pause) juz becoz ur father is a TRUSTEE nvr think dat u can do watever u want... I can't suspend u but i'll surely make ur internship hell !! (she was furious)

But riddhima dint show any guilt...

Ke: so.. u wanted duty... here it goes.. u're going to work at path lab dis whole month.. no imp case.. no surgery assisting... nd of course no marks .. which clearly going to throw u out of d INTERN OF THE MONTH competition of this month...

Riddhima again dint show any reaction.. she stood dere calm nd cool...


Ke: nd... (pointing to her dress) wat do u think??? is it a club?? wear decent clothe 4m 2moro...

Ri: but there wasn't any dress code in d terms nd regulations... (she said coolly)
Ke: do watever i'm saying... i really dont care about dat... nd if u wear this type of clothes again.. i'll mke u do rectal exms until u follow my order...

Ri: chill doc.. (correcting again) i mean dr. u're getting hyper... its not good 4 ur health..u know... (dr. keerti passed a glare but she ignored) i was juz saying.. anyways.. i will wear DECENT (emphasizing d word) clothes 4m 2omoro.. nything more???


Dr. keerti turned her face nd ordered.. "resume ur duties every1..." then turning 2 her.. "come 2 my cabin.. NOW!!"


Riddhima followed dr. keerti while other left disgusted..

AN: have u guys seen her attitude??

Mu: babaji.. ye aapne kya kar diya.. kaise fasa diya hum sab ko.. aab iss chdail ko ekk saal pure 365 days jhelna padega!! hayyoo rabba!! (she cursed her luck)


Armaan dint participated in d conversation... He was lost in his lost...
"why is destiny playing wth him?? 4m the vry 1st day in mumbai he was facing HER nd now he has 2 work with her... How can he handle this wen he knows HOW MUCH HE HATES HER !!"



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Edited by Chotu_Babu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART - 5


~ Locker Room ~


Every1 was busy taking their stuff when finally Riddhima came after talking 2 Dr. Keerti 2 take her belongings...

Muskan elbowed Anji as soon as Riddhima came,, "yaar.. aab jab sath mein hi kaam karna hain to baat karna to banta hain.. Nahi??" Muski asked nd all nodded...

She came 4ward nd extending her hand pasting a small smile said.. "hey Riddhima... I'm muskaan... Remember we met at d disc last sat day??"

Riddhima looked at her nd said.. "hey... but Plzz dont call me RIDDHIMA... it doesn't suit my personality.. Call me Ridz... "

Muski tried hard 2 act as gentle as possible nd said.. "ya sure.. RIDZ" emphasizing her modified name... "Chalo guys.. duty time.. we're running late.." Atul announced nd he sensed muski's sarcasm pronouncing RIDZ...

Soon all left except Abhi & Riddhima...

Ab : Toh kya baat hui??

Riddhima turned her face 2 him nd said.. : Tujhe nahi pata??

Ab : kyun karti hain tu aisa Riddhi??

Riddhima sighed nd said.. : Ek tu.. aur ek teri di... tum dono ko pata hain na main aisa kyun karti hoon.. toh fir kyun pooch raha hain??

But b4 Abhi could say more Riddhima started. "lets go... teri duty bhi to path lab mein hi hain.. Already teri di ko samjha chuki hoon main... fr se repeat telecast karne ka mood nahi hain"

Abhi nodded his head knowing very well her intention of changing d topic nd both went 2 path lab...




~ Path Lab ~

Ab : kab tak bhagegi tu riddhi??
abhi asked suddenly after completing his test of a sample.. riddhima looked at him...

Ab: kyun itni boori banti hain.. sab nafrat karne lage hain tujhse...

Riddhima smiled painfully.. "dats wat i wanted.. abhi.."

Ab: par kab tak?? kyun darti hain itna??

Riddhima looked stright into his eyes... "main nahi darti abhi.. kyunki khone ke liye mere pass kuch bhi nahi hain.. (then taking a brief pause) haan.. sirf ye saansein hain.. nd i think tujhe pata hain ke mujhe inse kuch zyada lagao nahi hain..."

Ab: riddhi... tu...

Ri: tu to sab janta hain na?? mujhe aapni koi fikar nahi hain par main nahi chahti jo mujhse pyaar karne lagenge unhe chot pahuche... I dont need love abhi... i'm contended with hatred...
she said painfully... Abhi knew she was telling d truth... she only opened up in 4nt of him... She is her RAKHI-SISTER... He cared 4 her very much as only he, his family nd some random people knew the REAL RIDDHIMA...

Ab: par iss tarah ghut ghut ke kaise jeeyegi tu??
Riddhima smiled a lill a resumed at her work... Abhi came near her... Placed his hand on her head.. "I wish teri har kwaaish poori ho... jo khushi tujhe kabhi nahi mili wo tujhe mil jaye..."

Riddhima looked at him nd said : "meri to ek hi kwaish hain.. agar woh poori ho jayyee to mere liye isse khusi ki baat aur kuch nahi hain.."

Her statement nd painful smile made Abhi realized some thing... he removed his hand hurriedly as if it had burnt... "not dat one riddhi... NEVER!!"

"par tune abhi to kaha... aur tujhe to pata hain ke har roj main sirf ek hi dua mangti hoon..."

"Riddh..." but he wasn't able 2 stop her saying her one n only desire... The most horribe desire 1 could have..

Ri: " MY DEATH !!! "


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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART - 6


~ Some Days Later ~


A nurse came hurriedly.. "Dr. Muskaan... Jaldi chaliye... It's an accident case... "

Mu : haan chalo... senior doctor me se aaj kin ki 9t duty hain??

Nu: oh actually dr. Shrivastava ki thi bt he went 4 an emergency call nd dr. keerti abhi gayee hain 1hour pehle.. We in4md her.. Par tab tak ye case aapko hi handle karni padegi...

Muskan gulped trying 2 digest d in4mation... no senior dr.!!! how could she handle this.. She could nt handle so much blood.. yess.. she had become a dr. but her head started spinning seeing too much blood... but she dint have any option.. 2day she was on 9t duty nd she had 2 manage until dr. keerti came.. She barged into ICU nd the scene in 4nt made her tremble... too much blood loss alrdy made d white bed sheet red... She felt like losing her sense... she was numb.. numb to take any step...

Nu: Dr. ... Dr. ???

Muski jerked 2 d reality nd instructed 2 clear d wound nd handed over an injection.. nurse did so but they were unable to stop blood.. Muskaan was trying to inject but her hands were trembling... Juz then she felt one confident hand taking injection 4m her...

The person injected d patient nd instructed d nurse:
"give him Saline nd oxygen... nd go.. check his blood group... we need blood ri8 now nd prepare OT as soon as possible so dat dr. Keerti could start d surgery as soon as she came.. now move fast... nd in4m sister lovely to try to contact his family nd police... now go"

all moved hurriedly nd the person examined patient's heart beat nd pulse carefully... Finally muskaan gained her sense nd looked at her savior nd she was SHOCKED to know it ws none other than RIDDHIMA whom she hated a lot saved d patient's life as well as her carrier...

Soon nurse came nd in4med dat every thing was done... They got his driving license nd mobile nd contacted his family who will come soon nd Police was in4med also... Riddhima nodded nd nurse handed a pouch of blood to her...
"Its O+ ... only one pouch left.. Hope he dint need more.." said d nurse. Riddhima attached d dip with his vain... After another 10mins She came to know dat dr. keerti had arrived nd nurse shifted d patient to OT... muskaan was instructed 2 assist dr. Keerti as Riddhima told all nurses not to disclose her name nd so they said dat dr. muskaan handled it...

Operation was a success... Dr. keerti appreciated muskaan although she told her to be more confident during surgeries... Muskaan nodded nd left for canteen for a cup of coffee... Its almost morning.. Within some hour her friends will come 4 duty , till then she has to monitor the patient...

She was in deep thought... Why did she save her?? She's soo arrogant, rude nd proudy... How a gal like her could think 4 other...???? Nd she also dint take any credit... WHY??? & she had to accept dat she never ever dreamed dat Riddhima could be such a good doctor... The way she handled the situation with gr8 confidence surprised her... She met her juz a few days b4 at disc in completely drunk condition ... How dat gal could be so brilliant as a doctor... Its a very responsible job...

She was fighting with her thought wen she heard a tap on her table.. She looked up nd saw Armaan smiling...
"good morning muski.. nd hey congrats yaar... i dint knw u r soo gud"

But muskaan dint smile nor did she thanked...

"kya hua muski??

Armaan asked as he felt her discomfort... Muskan was in dilemma... should she tell him?? then thinking a bit she said:
"armaan.. i want ur opinion... but promise me u wont say it 2 any 1..."

"ya sure.. bol na kya baat hain??"

Nd she narrated all. Armaan was as shocked as muski wen she saw it was riddhima who saved her... But b4 Armaan could say any thing, muski saw Riddhima with a cup of coffee going to a table... Ya.. they dint share same table.. 4m d very 1st day riddhima sat away 4m dem... They knew she was so self obsessed nd so she lacked social communication nd they also ignored her ... But 2day muski stopped Riddhima...

Mu: "mmm... Riddhima..

Riddhima turned nd saw a hesitating Muskaan
Ri: yess

Mu: woh... i juz want to... to... Thank u

Ri: 4 wat?? (she said wth attitude)

Mu: 4 saving dat patient's life nd my carri...

But riddhima cut her with her arrogant reply...
"look muskan.. i dint do any favor 2 u.. ok??? i told d nurse to keep it secret because i was instructed 2 handle only path lab cases dis whole month nd i wasn't in a mud in hearing dr. keerti's boring lecture..."

Muskaan looked shocked... oh yess.. how could she think dat dis arrogant creature understands friendship!!!!

Ri: "nd by d way.. thank ur stars dat i'm out of d intern of d month competition dis month... but 4m nxt month.. it'll be only me who's gonna win d title..."

She said with full attitude leaving a confused Armaan nd furious Muskaan behind...

Mu: tune dekha armaan..?? kitni battameez ladki hain... aur main .. stupid.. idiot.. fool.. ye soch rahi thi ke shayad humne hi usse galat samjha... aarrggg... she's so disgusting... I juz... I juz HATE her more dan any thing!!!"



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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART - 7



"Thank u dr. shaheeba... aap nhi hoti to mere bete ka kya hota!! bahot bahot sukriya aapka..." patient's parents were continuously thanking muskaan wen she informed them about the successful surgery.. Muski was happy.. 1st the surgery ws successful nd 2nd dr. keerti praised her... Although 1st she felt uneasy 2 tke sum1 other's credit bt after seeing Riddhima's arrogant attitude... She was com4tble nd hppily accpting all praises.


But there was some1 who was feeling blissful seeing the hopeful eyes of d patient's parents... & dat was none other dan Riddhima... she was standing far away hiding behind a wall watching the interaction between muski nd d patient's parents... She was happy dat some where she paid her share of contribution 2 bring dat tearful but hopeful smile on their lips... nd unknowingly she smiled her genuine smile... juz then she felt a hand on her shoulder nd she shivered in shock but thank god it was only Abhi...


He looked at the direction nd thn looked at her bt she looked away... Some how abhi guessed it but b4 he could clarify an unwanted incident happen which made Riddhima uneasy...


"Dr. Dr. ??" a nurse came outside of d ICU 2 call muskaan all panicked... "kya hua nurse??" muski asked worriedly seeing her horrified expression... "maam.. woh... woh..." d nurse was hesitating seeing d parents... muski asked firmly.. "wat??" finally d nurse stated... "mam.. d patient is sinking!!"


nd dat was it!! d parents of d patients became crest fallen.. They could see the ray of hope fading away... His mother almost fainted... His father became a statue... How could dey afford losing their only son... Riddhima heard all nd d reaction of his parents made her heart shrink..
"No god!! plzz dont do this... Iss ladke ke pass itni caring parents hain... aur aap aisa kar rahe ho.. jabki ye sab to mere sath hona chahiye tha.. no.. main aisa nhi hone dungi.. he has 2 live 4 his parents..." Riddhima thought.


Soon Dr. keerti came nd barged in2 the ICU... nd after a lill while came out nd called muski a side... "internal injuries... the fact i was dreading... we've 2 operate him again... now!!" Muski shivered... "ek aur surgery??"
Dr. Ke: "yes dr. muskaan.. prepare d OT.. I'm coming with Dr. Banshal.."
Muski nodded nd left but dr. keerti called a nurse nd asked her 2 arrange blood..
"par maam.. maine aapse pehle hi kaha tha.. ke O+ blood ki srf ek hi pouch reh gayee hain which we've attached it already... humne blood banks ko in4m kar diya hain but i'll take at least 2hour as aaj strike hain.. "
Dr. ke : "but we cant wait much... usse abhi operate karna padega!!"
Nu: "par maam... "
Dr. ke: "contact dem nd try to convince dem to do as early as possible.. till then try to manage a donor... now go.."
the nurse left nd juz then dr. keerti heard a weak.. "Keerti di.."


She turned nd found abhi nd riddhima together... She went near dem nd asked:
"kya hua riddhi?? tune hospital mein mujhe di kehke... (taking a pause nd looking at abhi) kya baat hain??"
Ab: "di... aap plz cabin mein chalo.. may be i know Riddhi ko kya baat karni hain.."
Ke: "par bhai... mujhe surgery ke.."
Ab: "di.. ye ussi barey mein hain... aap plz chalo.. (then turning 2 riddhima) riddhi.. "
She nodded nd d trio entered in dr. Keerti's cabin.


Dr. Ke: "kya baat hain Riddhi??" she placed her hand on riddhima's shoulder while abhi was still holding her hand.. He knew wat she must have feeling...
Ri: "di...(in a very weak voice) "
Dr. keerti was now sure dat some thing ws bothering her..
Ri: "usse bacha lo di... woh.. woh... "
Dr. keerti looked confused nd turned 2 her brother... Abhi was now sure wat was bothering Riddhima.. he told his di about d patient... dr. keerti now knew riddhima's mental condition..
Ke: "riddhi.."
Ri: "uski fikar karne ke liye itne achche parents hain di... bt still he is suffering.. aur main.. mere liye rone wala koi nhi hain.. still i'm fine.. wahan to mujhe hona chahiye tha.. na.. di??"
then gulping some air she said..
"I'll gve blood.. mera v to O+ hain... bas aap usse bacha lo .. di.."
Dr. keerti was feeling helpless.. She knew how riddhima is.. She juz kept her hand on her head nd said..
"pata nhi... bhagwan ne tere sath aisa kyun kiya... (then kissing her forehead) i wsh tujhe wo sari khushi miley jo tu deserve karti thi.." Riddhima juz hugged her but soon she recovered nd said after breaking d hug...
"mm.. wo diii??"
Ke: "pata hain.. kisi se nhi kahungi ke donor kaun hain..."
Riddhima smiled..


Ab: "waise ek baat poochun??"
both d ladies looked at him.
"woh kal raat sach mein muski ne ye case handle kiya tha kya riddhi??"
Abhi asked her.. he knew about muski's potential.. its really hard 2 believe dat how a nervous gal like muski could handle such a complicated case so firmly nd dat too wthout a senior dr...
Dr. keerti also looked at riddhima.. although she nvr questioned her but being a gr8 dr. she knew about her interns nd wen she saw riddhima at hospital late 9t, she some how knew d reasn bt dint disclose it but now as her brother raised d question she looked at riddhima questioningly but riddhima looked away proving both abhi nd dr. keerti ri8...


"tu aisi kyun hain riddhi??"
abhi sighed nd said to himself but riddhima was normal nw.. she retorted back coolly.. "not again.. tum dono bhai- behen.. thakte nahi ho kya.. ek hi sawal poochte poochte!!... anyways.. i think OT is ready now.. keerti di.. u shld go now.. al d best.. nd dnt wrry.. u'll get blood soon... thankfully maine kal alcohol bhi consume nhi kiya tha!!"
she winked nd left 2 donate blood...



It was a success.. Though patient will take time 2 be completely fine bt he'll survive definitely.. Their parents were thanking dr. keerti again nd again.. finally she spoke:
"agar sukriya karna hi hain to bhagwan ka kijiye aur uss insaan ka jinhone sahi samay pe blood donate kiya tha.."
"main to uss insaan ko dill se dua deti hoon dr. shaheeba ke woh jo bhi ho bhagwan unke daman mein bas khushiya hi khushiyan bhar de..." his mother replied wth utmost honesty.
dr. keerti smiled nd prayed in her heart... "main bhi yehi chahti hoon... ke aab riddhima ki zindegi mein sirf khushiyaan hi ayee!!"


Abhi placed his hand on her shoulder nd she turned 2 hug him... He hugged her caressing her head... "sshhh... riddhi... soona tune... he's recovering.. teri koshish kamyaab ho gayee"
but she dint reply.. she hid her face in his arms while her eyes started 2 flow...



Riddhima ko khushi ki aadat nhi thi par aaj ek maa ko unka beta lautake usse bahot accha lag raha tha... aisa nhi hain ke zndegi mein pehli baar ussne kisi ki madat ki par ek maa ki dil ki dua sunke woh bhi uss ke liye usse kuch to yaad aya.. ya fir koi yaad ayee...



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PART - 8


~ Same Day ~

It was 10 past 7 in d evening.. Duty was over 4 every1.. Riddhima sneaked in2 sanjeevani.. Juz then she heard:

"Riddhima bitiya.."

Riddhima bit her tounge as she was caught... She closed her eyes nd turned...

"Riddhima bitiya..."

He said again.. She opened her eyes nd made a puppy face...

"Aap yahan is tarah??"

Ri : "sshhh... Umar Chacha... dheere..."

Umar Bhai, the head stuff employed in the cleaning department, nodded his head timidly..
"Par.." he asked so softly following instruction of his Riddhima bitiya...

"Chacha... agar keerti di ko pata chal gaya ke main ghar me rest karne ki wajah yahan ayee hoon, toh aap jante ho na mujhe kitniii daant padegi !!"
Riddhima whispered nd pouted...


In response Umar bhai juz nodded... but then he noticed the huge bags full of stuffs dat Riddhima was carrying in her both hands... Riddhima followed his trance nd smiling like a child she announced:

"ye sab rishwat hain..."

Umar bhai looked at his Riddhima bitiya , understanding d inner meaning of her statement he smiled..

"chacha... aap meri madat karenge , na?? (then taking a pause nd examining d surrounding nd nt finding her Keerti di she relaxed nd continued) aap plzz ye bags leke ward ke bahar wait karenge jab tak main aapko na bulayuun... plsshhh..."
Riddhima requested..

"arrey bitiya ji... isme plz kehne wali kya baat hain... aap dijiye mujhe bags.." & he took d bags nd followed Riddhima...


They stopped near d entrance of d ward..
"aap yahin rukiye... pehle mein mausam ka haal dekh leti hoon... (then crossing her fingers) hey Gannu Bhaiya.. bacha lena.."
nd she entered d ward.



~ Children's Ward ~



a lill gal : "didi aaj bhi nahi ayee!! kaha tha hospital join karne ke baad ayengi par kitne din ho gayee..."

A lill boy: "haan... iss bar hum itni asani se nhi manenge.."

Another boy: "haan... sahi kaha.. baat bhi nhi karenge.."

Another gal : "haan.. bahot gussa dikhayenge... (then extending her lill arms wide) itna sara gussa..."


Riddhima was feeling a strong urge to burst out in2 laughter hearing their cute banter but controlled ...


A gal : "kaha tha.. minnie... main aab dr. bannke ane wali hoon, na... so roj milne ayungi.. (then frowning after remembering some thing) aur fir uss moti nurse se injection bhi lagwa diya bina chocolate diye ... (frowning more) aur dekho aabhi tak nahi ayee... (slaming her lill palm on her forehead) main to puri popat ban gayee!!"


& dat was it.. Riddhima couldn't control more.. Although she knew it will lead her 2 give extra effort 2 manofy her chillar party.. but how could she control after hearing such cute n innocent accusations... !!!! She burst out in2 laughter...


Every children looked at d source of laughter nd their face lightened seeing their darling riddhi di... but soon dat glow vanished 4m their face as they remembered how their di cheated them breaking her promise by not meeting dem b4 ... Riddhima saw the change in their expression nd her laughter subsidized..


Minnie: "bittoo.. inse keh de... hum sab bahot gussa hain... inse baat nahi karenge... so hume manane ki koshish bhi na kare.."

Bitto.. the youngest of all started repeating d same wen riddhima cut him.

"sacchi me gussa ho aap sab??"
she asked ever so cutely.

Now how could they be angry with their darling di but dey had to... so dey nodded their head..

"main manayungi to bhi nhi manoge??"
she said making a sad face..

but dat was it.. they couldnt see their di sad.. all looked at their leader.. MINNIE.. wth hopeful eyes... she nodded as she too loved her di very much.


Riddhima dint get any answer nd looked at dem nd saw them looking at her intently... She smiled a lill nd then smiling widely she extended her arms.. nd all of dem rushed hurriedly to their di nd hugged her... It was a cute scene... So adorable.. so pure!!


"par fir bhi di.. hum aapse gussa hain.."
minnie said while hugging her.

Riddhima smiled.. kissed her hair.. now riddhima was sitting on her knee nd all of dem were standing in 4nt of her.. riddhima now took bittoo on her lap.. hugging him.. said..
"cholly kidss... plzz aapne di ko maaf kar do... "


Minnie came near nd sat on her lap too.. she dint like wen her di showered more love to any other kid.. Riddhima laughed a lill .. securing minnie by one of her arms.. she whispered in minnie's ear..

"tu kabhi nahi badlegi, nahi??"

Minnie shook her head negatively with proud...

Riddhima kissed her forehead nd continued:
"woh kya hain na bacchoo... maine ek week baad join ki .. na... to iss liye keerti di ne mujhe punish kiya hain!!"

"hayyee Di!! aap to kitni badi ho gayee ho.. abhi bhi aapko punishment milti hain??"
a kid asked innocently..

"aab rule todungi toh punishment to milegi hi .. na??"
riddhima replied smilingly..

"par di aapne late kyun join kiya??"
bitto asked wth his sweet childish voice..

but b4 riddhi could ans our nanima means minnie replied..
"arrey bittoo... tujhe nahi pata.. di ko rules break karna bahot accha lagta hain.. (then looking at her di) hain na di??"

"sachhi mein??" bitto asked wth awe.

"haan.. sacchi mein.. (nd tightened her grip around bitto 2 give him a cute hug).. aab dekho.. aaj mujhe keerti di ne strct order kiya tha ke ghar jake rest karo parrr..."
riddhi took a pause intentionally nd also extended d wrd PAR to draw their attention.


"par???" a boy asked being excited..

"par mein to shopping me chali gayee"
riddhima announced nd winked.

"woww di.. shopping... kya kya khareda aapne??"
a gal asked happily..

Riddhima smiled nd said..
"aap sab hi dekhlo... shopping to aap sab liye hi ki hain.."

nd minnie jumped 4m her lap hearing her..
"diii... wooww!!! humare liye gifts!!"

riddhima smiled seeing their excitement... this was wat she wanted 2 see...


"umar chachaaa..."
she called nd umar bhai came smilingly nd placed d bags in 4nt of dem... all of dem attacked d bags...

"dheere... sab ke liye hain... (then seeing a gal) arrey pinki.. dheere baccha.. lag jayegi aapko..."
riddhima was saying all dese but d wrds dint enter their ears...


"woww... psp..."

"wooww... barbiee"

"chocolates.."

"chips.."

"comics.."

"ribbons.. ear ring... wowww"

.
.
.
.


& dey exclaimed in joy as dey discovered their favorite gifts... Now all got their gifts nd said loudly:
"WE LOVE YOU DI... "

"sshhh... pitwane ka irada hai kya??"
riddhima said cheekily...
"waise..i love you all.. a lot"
nd all came nd hugged her.


Umar bhai left blessing his riddhima bitiya in heart while riddhima was having gala time wth kids.. laughing nd playing... but all she dint know dat she was not successful escaping every1.. infact some1 saw her entering children ward nd hiding himself saw her cute bonding with the kids with gr8 surprise...


"kya ho tum riddhima??? woh jo tum duniya ko dikhati ho ya fir yo jo main dekh raha hoon??? aakhir kya ho tum.. riddhima??"
he sighed seeing d sight in 4nt of his eyes...




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sargam ..
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PART - 9



~ One and Half Month Later at Nurse Station ~



All were gathered for briefing session.. But all were busy consoling Atul except Riddhima of course.. She was standing lill away from this with i-m-not-so-interested-in-ur-stupid-drama look on her face.. She was standing supporting the receptionist's table, flipping pages of some random medical magazine showing not to care about Atul but in reality she was juz flipping the pages but all her concentration was in the conversation.

Ni : atul yaar.. tu kyun pareshaan ho raha hain.. don't worry.. sab thik ho jayega..

Ra : par niks.. i must tell you yaar, yeh miss super model hain bahot achchi doctor.. i mean juz look at the score guys, she is far away from us with a lead of 20 marks from atul who is at 2nd position!!

Mu : oye kaan khajure.. teri problem kya hain yaar.. yahan hum atul ko cheer karne ki koshish kar rahe hain aur to uss ghamandi badd dimak ladki ki side le raha hain!!

An : exactly.. shame on u rahul.. dekho becahra atul kitna upset ho gaya hain...



Actually the result of second month's "intern of the month" title was coming near nd as riddhima was thrown out of this compi on the 1st month, none felt that she could be such a tough competitor.. nd On the 1st month it was a tie between Armaan nd Atul but knowing Atul's economic condition, armaan refuse to take the title nd atul was made the the intern of the month (IOM).. It was a rule in sanjeevani, if some one becomes IOM three times back to back he/she will get a scholarship of further studies nd all knew Atul was in the most need of it being least rich among all.. but now after joining of riddhima in the compi, all became shocked.. though muski got a chance to witness her ability before but she never want this arrogant creature to win the title.

Ar : champ yaar.. juz relax.. abhi bhi time hain.. aur agar iss mahiney mein nahi hua to next month mein i'm sure u'll beat HER.

Atul looked at armaan at once nd confessed..

She's d best among all of us, u know that right??

Armaan shushed nd atul sighed. atul knew his best friend come brother could never lie to him nd he also knew Riddhima was far better doctor than him but he badly needed this scholarship.

Riddhima, who was listening the conversation secretly, immersed in deep thought..

Mu : kash yeh sarr firi ladki kuch aisa karti ke issey punishment mil jati aur hitler isski marks kat leti...

muskan expresses her evil wish nd hearing her, abhi looked at riddhima at once.. "oh god.. pata nahi aab riddhi kya karegi.." he whispered under his breathe knowing very well that riddhima was listening to them nd muski unknowingly gave her the idea to solve atul's problem but before they could continue they heard a curt voice..

"may i have ur attention. interns??"

all stood modestly in an order nd greeted dr. keerti "good morning mam.."

"good morning interns.. okkey, jaisa ki aap sab jante hain.. intern of the month mein bas ek aur week baki hain nd i must tell you shivayee dr. riddhima ke iss mahiney aap sab ki performance itni achchi nahi hain..."

hearing praises from hitler that too for riddhima juz bolied muski's blood.. "aargg.."

"sshh.." rahul indicated her to control nd dr. keerti carried on with her lecture..

"waisey main aap sab ko bata doon.. next mahiney aap logo ke liye aur bhi mushkil hain score karna because we r heading to a village for free check up.. so, better u bag more marks this month as it's more difficult to win the title next month.."

hearing this Atul became more upset nd armaan patted his back gently not to become sad on this nd atul returned an understanding nod to him..

"okkey interns.. now resume your duty.."

all left immersed in their own thoughts where muski was busy cursing riddhima under her breathe, atul was sad, armaan,rahul n abhi were trying to cheer him up, nikki nd anji were tensed with their poor marks and ridhhima was busy thinking HOW TO REDUCE HER MARKS..




~ Lunch Time at Canteen ~


Ni : uff !! kitna kaam karate hain yeh log yaar..

An : aut marks bhi nahi dete..

Ra : i agree gals..

Mu : pata nahi hitler ko kab se uss super model se pyaar ho gaya hain.. sarey marks ussey... jaisey humne toh kuch kiya hi na ho whole month!!

Ar : chill yaar muski.. i know u don't like HER.. rather we all HATE HER but she has potential, yaar.. yeh toh tujhe manni hi hogi..

At : haan... bhai sahi keh raha hain..

Atul agreed nd armaan smiled at him.. Atul was so good as a human being although its him who is most adversely affected by her huge score but still he never hesitate to accept the reality...

Mu : tu pagal ho gaya hai kya champ??? sabse zyada nookshaan tujhe hi hua hain aur tu ussi ki side...

but atul cut her in the middle with his answer..

truth is truth, muski... juz becoz we don't like her, i can't overlook the truth..

muski bowed down her head realizing the fact nd said..

sorry yaar.. pata nahi uski naam sunte hi mera mood kyun off ho jaya hain..

both anji n nikki gave her a side hug as they too feel the same for riddhima...

Ra : but i must say... (he got up from his seat) .. champ, u r too sweet.. yaar..

nd he patted his back so loudly dat he spilled out whole juice from his mouth coughing badly..

Mu : gadha kahin ka...

rahul shushed like a bheegi billi nd whispered.. sorry yaar..

Abhi nd armaan gave atul some water nd soon he felt better... but before they could continue the intercom rang announcing..

"dr. atul report to dr. keerti now.."

all looked at atul extremely confused who himself was hell tensed with this sudden announcement. never the less he went to meet dr. keerti nd knocking at her cabin door he asked nervously..

"may i come in.. maam??"

"yess dr. atul.. main aap ka hi intezar kar rahi thi.."

he entered timidly nd dr. keerti raised a file to him.. he took it but got the biggest shock wen he opened it..

"aaj se balki aabhi se yeh case aap handle karenge.."

"par maam.. yeh case tohh.."

"dr. riddhima ka tha par aab nahi hain.. i was so wrong to hand over such a critical case to her.."

atul became confused but dr. keerti carried on..

"mainey aapne poore carrier mein aisi irresponsible dr. nahi dekhi.. she juz tkes every thing lightly.. (then throwing a piece of paper disgustedly in front of him on the table she continued).. she juz sent this stupid leave application by a nurse stating she has some important work nd have to go now... aargg.. wat on the earth is more imp to a doc than her patient's life... (she paused n started)... anyways, jo hua acchhe ke liye hi hua.. u r a responsible dr. ... and i'm sure u'll handle this case efficiently..."

Atul nodded unable to believe his luck...

"okkey.. u may go now.."

He came out of dr. keerti's cabin n saw all his friends standing worriedly..

Ni : atul???

Armaan : champ ???

he was still shocked but then said every thing to them nd hearing him muski n anji juz hi-5 with each other in happiness.. they so hate riddhima but this time they truly love her for making this blunder which in turn helped atul.

Ra : lucky you mahnn!!

Ni : true... now no more rona dhona.. u'll definitely beat that dumbo...

Atul smiled finally getting another chance but two persons were not happy one who was anticipating some thing like this nd one who was confused with this coincidence..

Ar : pata nahi kyuun.. par uss din children ward mein uss riddhima ko dekhne ke baad mujhe nahi lagta woh itni careless ho sakti hain aapney patients ke sath... jiss riddhima ki jhalak uss din mainey dekha tha aur jis tarah muskan ne kaha ke usney uss patient ki jaan bachayee woh ek irresponsible dr. kaisey ho sakti hain... aarggg.. yeh ladki mujhe zaroor pagal karke chodegi...

Armaan thought in his mind understanding the truth but failed.
on the other hand, abhi juz excused himself nd entered locker room.. opened his locker nd switched on his cell to call her bt as soon as he switched on the phone he received a msg from riddhima..

"i know tujhe sab samajh aa gaya hoga... is liye explain kiye bina kaam ki baat batati hoon.. woh atul ko case study ke liye zyada waqt nahi milega.. but tu kisi bhi bahane mera locker open karwana.. mainey sarey notes.. sarey necessary details wahan pe rakh di hain.. it will ease his work load... aur haan.. chinta mat kar.. main wahan nahi gayee hoon jo soch ke tu darr raha hain.. main bas beech pe ayee hoon.. aaj bahot din o baad yahan ayee.. kitna kuch badal gaya hain.. okk.. aut late nahi karwayungi tujhe.. now go... finish ur duty nd don't forget to do wat i said.."

the messege ended nd he put the cell again in his locker switching it off.. soon all came there being extremely happy for atul.. abhi saw them n sighed..

"jiski wajah se yeh log khush hain.. unhe kya pata yeh uss hi insaan se sab se zyada nafrat karte hain.."




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Edited by Chotu_Babu - 12 years ago
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PART - 10


~ INTERN OF THE MONTH ~


Mu : jaldi chal yaar.. late ho gaye toh hitler mar dalegi..

Ni : right.. let's go fast..

Ra : chill girls.. abhi bhi 10minutes baki hain ceremony start hone main..

Ar: champ yaar.. relax.. tu hi jitega .. don't worry..

Ab : yes atul.. u'll win only.. plz don't panick..

An : atul.. relax .. na!! tu kyun uss super model se dar raha hain.. wat she did.. u really think hitler ussey chod degi??

Mu : exactly.. I wish ussey hospital se nikal de.. ek saal ussey jhelna nahi padega..

Ab : guys.. wohh itni bhi boori nahi hain.. yaar..

Ni : plzz haan abhi.. we all knw u hve a soft corner for her .. but we hate her..
Ab : I knw.. but still..
Ra : chup kar na.. kyun iss baat ko leke fir se lad rahe ho.. nd abhi yaar.. gals r ri8.. riddhima is damn arrogant..

Ar : okk guys.. cut this crap.. nd lets go..

Mu : haan chal.. mujhey uss super model ko harte hue dekhna hain..

All left excitedly except abhi who sighed at his helplessness nd followed d gang. As soon as they entered they found their super model talking to some one.



Mu : oye.. yeh kya authorities ko bribe karne ki koshish kar rahi hain??

An : ri8 yaar.. I think that person is from board of directors only..

Mu : uski itni himmat?? Iss chudail ko toh main chodungi nahi.. bribe karke jeetegi?? Aarrgg..

Muski was full ready to go nd slap her but armaan stopped her.

Ar : chill yaar muski.. koi aur baat bhi ho sakti hain..

Ab : exactly.. riddhi bribe dene nahi gayee hain..

Ni : tumhe bada pata hain??

Ab : of course after all she's my'

But abhi paused.

Ra : pata hain teri gal frnd hain..

Don't knw why but armaan nvr like this topic. Whenever all consider abhi nd riddhima as couple he felt like blasting on every one. How can they pair HER with some one else.. only he has the ri8 to be her BF.. but does he?? Isn't he HATE her?? Oh of course he hates her.. she's juz not his type' then y?? why every time he becomes disturbed as well as angry whenever his frnz accuses riddhima for some thing.. he knws she deserves this hatred.. she is so full of attitude but still why can't he HATE her?? Stop it ammy.. u DO hate her. Okk?? Lock it.. u hate her as others do..

Ra : oye armaan.. u okk?? Kaha kho gaya??

Ar : naa.. kahin nahi.. let's go nd sit guys..

All settled comfortably when one pair of blue eyes were continuously scanning riddhima.. pata nahi kya hain tumme ke chah kar bhi tumse nafrat nahi kar paa raha hoon.. kyun mujhey aisa lagta hain ke tum yeh nahi ho jo sabko dikhati ho.. tum wohh ho jissey mainey uss din children ward mein dekha tha.. wohi sach hain na riddhima?? Parr tum wahan abhi tak unn trusties se kyun baat kar rahi ho?? Kya tum sach mein unhe bribe karne gayee ho?? Plzz dnt do dat riddhima.. plz don't spoil atul's life.. plz don't break my trust.. armaan was thinking staring at her when suddenly he found muski tapping on her shoulder. Getting a huge shock he looked side ways nd found her missing.. oh god.. he got up quickly nd rushed towards them to stop muski to create any blunder.

Riddhima turned feeling the tap nd then excused herself from them. They left the place leaving muski nd riddhima alone..

Mu : wat d hell do u think urself??

Ri: cuse me?? (she said in full attitude)

Mu : oyee zyada bholi mat baan.. main achchi tarah se janti hoon teri jaisi ladki ko..

Riddhima raised her palm nd said lill cheekily.. "one min muskaan" nd then turning her head she gestured the waiter who brought drinks to serve them.. she took one glass nd looking at muski asked coolly.. "u need any??" Muski fumed seeing her attitude nd ready to blast on her.. but riddhima paid no attention. Then turning to the waiter.. "thanx.. u may go now.." she sipped some chilled cola nd smiling wickedly she asked muski to continue..

Muski who was in her most angry mode ready to beat her nd she could have slapped her if abhi didn't hold her hand in between.

Ab : muski?? Wat d hell r u doing??
He shouted . actually all rushed towards them seeing muski so angry with riddhima..

Mu : abhi tu mujh pe chilla raha hain.. arrgg yaar.. tujhey ho kya gaya hain.. aur koi ladki nahi mili tujhey jo iss jaisi '

Ab : muskaan.. don't u dare to insult her in front of me.. tu janti kitna hain??

Mu : main janna bhi nahi chahti.. itni bhi boore din nahi aye mere ke mujhey issey janna pare..

Ab : nd u can never.. he said slowly as riddhima gripped his hand tightly to stop him. She knws dat he cannot hear anything against her but this is wat she wanted nd every thing is going according to her will.. she can nvr allow abhi to spill out any thing..

Ri : well well well.. some one seems damn angry with me.. so.. wat's d matter?? She asked casually sipping her coke again.. gals felt disgusted seeing her attitude.. finally armaan spoke..
"mm.. riddhima.."

Ri : ridz.. I told u thousand times dude.. dat riddhima dusn't suit my personality.. call me ridz'

Armaan sighed nd composing himself started again.. "sorry.. ridz.."
All gals gave him an angry glare for saying sorry who juz blinked his eyes assuring them.

Ar : so ridz.. wat were u talking to Board of directors??

Ri : are u spying me.. haan?? She said with her attitude winking at the end..
My my my.. she shouldn't have done this. This gal has no idea wat effect she has on him. Nd trust me wen she winked his breathe juz got choked in his throat for some time. Focus ammy.. focus!! He controlled himself nd asked.. "naah.. but we wonder wat can an intern have to say to the B.O.D s??"

Ri : "personal matter.. I'm not bound to answer you .. do i??" she was super calm.. she kept the glass on the side table nd resumed..
"Nd if u think I was trying to BRIBE them'"
She paused shocking every one (except abhi).. how did she knw wat they are thinking'all thought..
Ri : then prove it..

Mu : teri toh'
Muski was turning violent again.. rahul hold her tightly..

An : dat means u were bribing the trustees??

Ri : who said so?? Mainey to nahi kaha..
She winked at her nd left leaving all fuming in anger nd disgust.. making atul nervous nd armaan dazed.

Mu : chod rahul.. aaj uska murder kar ke hi rahungi main..

Ra : sshh.. relax muskaan.. issey kuch nahi hoga.. tu jail chali jayegi as a result..

Mu : kya??!!!
All chuckled nd she composed herself at once.

At : iska matlab main nahi jeet payunga??

But before any one can answer abhi replied.. "trust me atul.. she didn't bribe.. ussey bribe karne ki zarrorat hi nahi hain.. kyunki.. (pause)' tu hi jeetega.. trust me' aab relax kar.."

At : par yeh tu itney yakeen se kaisey keh sakta hain..

Ab : because mujhey pata hain.. khush.. now smile.. nd lets go.. function start hone wali hain..

All left nd he looked at riddhima who was sitting far away from the gang plastering her fake attitude.. he sighed nd settled with the gang..



After the speech of the guest of honor .. dr. keerti took over the mike nd said..
"Well.. I know all interns must be in tension. After all intern of the month is very prestigious award and as u knw if an intern wins it back to back three times, he or she'll get a scholarship for further studies. Our last month's intern of the month was DR. Atul joshi.. although it was a tie between dr. mallik nd dr. joshi, we selected dr. joshi on dr. mallik's will.. let's see if this month dr. joshi can able to hold his position or not'
I must tell you it was a close call between dr. riddhima gupta nd dr. atul joshi..
(all gasped hearing it.. except abhi nd armaan..)
But dr. riddhima showed very irresponsible behavior towards her patient and..
(all smiled in excitement .. ecept armaan nd abhi..)
Nd I deduced her marks..
(muskaan literally jumped in joy hearing this)
But still she managed quite well' I must say she is a brilliant doctor..
(oh no!! all became tensed)
So finally the one who won between these two is'
(pause)
(all prayed in their hearts while abhi looked at riddhima.. who was smiling her original smile nd put her head on the chair's back.. he knew wat she is going through.. he knew the result as well.. he sighed nd looked at d rest of his frnz.. all are tensed.. hoping atul's win.. he sighed nd looked forward to his di..)
Nd the winner is.. our last month's winner..
DR. ATUL JOSHI'"

All laughed in joy.. cheering nd hooting for atul.. who was beaming in happiness.. his eyes got teary.. finally he heaved a sigh of relief.. finally he saved his future.. smiling sweetly nd thanking his frnz he went to the stage to collect the award..
All were clapping as loud as possible.. "aab dikhati hoon uss super model ko.." muski smirked while clapping.. abhi sighed nd armaan turned towards riddhima nd wat he saw confused him more. She was sitting on her chair keeping her head on the back of the chair.. her eyes closed.. her lips curved flashing a satisfactory smile' her legs were kept one over another.. above which her two hands are joined as if she was thanking god.. does she?? But why?? She should be sad or angry but she is happy.. why??




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Edited by Chotu_Babu - 12 years ago
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PART - 11


Soon atul came back to his friends with the certificate nd bouquet smiling widely. All hugged him nd decide to do a small party in the canteen. But before that muski wanna teach that super model a good lesson. All went near riddhima who was on the verge of leaving the auditorium.. when she heard muskaan's voice..
"so miss super model.. har kar kaisa lag raha hain, haan?? Upset orrr (she intentionally stretched the word nd said).. or super upset??"

Riddhima was still facing at the door. That means muski nd all were standing behind her. She smiled hearing muski's taunt nd soon plastering her attitude she turned nd replied..
"why are u so excited dr. chadda?? (sarcasm was visible in her voice as well).. I think it's dr. joshi who won not you.. so stop behaving like a loser nd take a chill pill gal.."

Riddhima smirked.. muski became furious..
"teri toh.."

But atul stopped her.. "chod na muski.. kyun aapna khun jala rahi hain.."

Ni : "exactly.. leave it muski.. this creature can nvr understand wat frndshp is all about.."

Ra : "such a self obsessed gal.."

An : "let's go.. we've better things to do now rather than talking to HER.."

Mu : "haan tu sahi keh rahi hain anji.. let's go yaar.. party karte hain.. waisey bhi it's our off now"

All nodded but before they can leave armaan asked riddima..
"mm.. ridz.. if u don't mind, why don't u join us??"

All were shocked. Rather shock was an understatement. They looked at armaan with disbelief.
An : "wat the hell armaan.. tu issey kyun invite kar raha hain??"
Anji whispered in his ears greeting her teeth..

Ar : "relax yaar.. don't u think u guys are juz exaggerating this issue.. we don't hve any proof whether she was trying to bribe the directors or not.."
Armaan replied calmly.. and abhi agreed at once..
"of course.. she didn't .. now toh it's clear yaar.. atul won, ri8?? Let her join too, plz??"
Abhi said hopefully..

all agreed finally while armaan looked at him. He really LOVES her.. but if abhi loves riddhima then why he is feeling weird..!!! god.. plz help me to sort out my feelings.. I know I HATE this girl.. but do I really?? uff!!! Yeh kya confusion hain.. yeh ladki mujhey pagal kar ke hi chodegi..

All left for canteen leaving riddhima nd a confused armaan behind.
Riddhima went near him nd whispered near his ear..
"u really like me.. don't u??"

She moved lill away to see his reaction nd smirked seeing him gasped with the sudden closeness.. this girl truly affects him badly.. he juz stared at her.. riddhima this time started with a lower nd calmer voice.. making him understand her words..
"stay away from me armaan.. I knw u r being attracted to me.. but it's better for you if you stay away.. u don't know any thing.."

Armaan was still dazed.. he was juz examining her every expression.. nd this calmer, sweeter tone is same like that day.. wen he saw her with kids. His confusion nd curiosity rose forcing him to ask her..
"then tell me na riddhima.."
His voice was soothing.. mature.. patient.. understanding.. she sighed..
"har baatein batayi nahi jati armaan.. bass itna jan lo.. I'm alrdy engaged to someone.. so, it's better if u stay away.."
Nd without waiting she left the place.. armaan was still standing spot rooted..

ENGAGED??? How?? With abhi?? But she nvr wears any engagement ring.. then?? May be they are hiding their relationship or… he paused.. or may be she juz left lying to me.. he sighed.. don't knw why riddhima.. I've a strong feeling that u lied to me.. but why?? What are you hiding?? Aab toh main jaan kar hi rahunga.. akhir kaun sahi hain.. mera dimag ya fir mera dill??
He sighed nd left for the canteen.


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All were settled around a big table. Muski being a food lover ordered lots of foods. Poor atul was making faces seeing so many dishes. He must be tensed about this extra expense. armaan smiled nd announced..
"arrey muski.. coke kaha hain?? Order those also, na?? (then turning to whole gang).. guys.. aaj ki party merey taraf se.. enjoy.."

Atul at once looked at him.. nd armaan blinked his eyes in assurance. Atul smiled with teary eyes. Armaan is truly his brother.. his best buddy. Soon armaan opened his can nd sat beside atul when his gaze fell on the canteen door.. nd once again he got lost.. lost in HER..

Ri : "hey.. may i.."
But before she can complete armaan said..
"sure.. sit, na.."

Riddhima sat beside abhi nd looked at him with flirting smile. Here we go again.. THE ridz is back. Armaan sighed but smiled also. Now-a-days he feels happy feeling her near him. She behaves arrogant like always but he finds something soothing in her presence. Although he nvr accepted it but he nvr declined as well.

Ni : "guys.. let's play some thing.. I'm getting bored yaar.."

Ra : "yess.. I'm bored too.. but wat 2 play??"

Ar : "truth nd dare??"

Ra : "cool man.. perfect.."

Soon the bottle was spinned on the table nd landed on ABHI……. All hooted.. "ooo"
Ab : "shut up guys.. ask wat u want??"

An : "so abhi.. truth or dare??"

Ab : "mm.. I alwaz choose dare.. so, for a change TRUTH.."

Ni : "kool… so, tell us do u love riddhima?? If yes then whyyy??"
Abhi got very angry.. "wat d hell guys.. y on d earth every thing is related to riddhi??"
Riddhima knew this was cuming nd held his hand under table. Abhi looked at her who blinked her eyes.. he sighed deeply nd calming himself down.. "yess I do love riddhi.. why?? U guys can nvr understand.. bcz I can't explain d reasons.. juz one thing.. she is the most wonderful person I met in my life.."

Riddima squeezed his hands stopping him to be emotional. Abhi sighed nd hugged her at once in reflex.. riddhima , too, hugged him to soothe her..
"I don't like all this riddhi.. yeh sab tujhey.."

"sshh.."

Riddhima cut him to whisper any thing more.. he broke the hug nd looked in front.. all felt lill guilty for their behavior.. of course it's his personal matter whom he'll luv or not.. yess.. according to dem no one can luv a gal like riddhima but love is blind.. they sighed nd muski spinned the bottle again.. nd it stopped on…… ARMAAN

All shouted.. "huh.. wat??" his thoughts broke.. actually wat happened between riddhima nd abhi made him disturbed.. he was feeling bad… abhi luvs HER.. nd she too hugged him back.. he was upset wen he heard sudden noise nd looking at the table he found the nxt target is he.. he locked his thoughts quickly nd announced proudly..
"DARE as alwaz…."

Ra : "really bro?? cool then.."
Rahul thought a bit… then scrutinizing the canteen he said wickedly..
"there are so many gals in the canteen ri8 now.. propose the one u dislike most"
All shouted in joy.. while armaan juz passed him THE look…
"sorry.. dude.. it's a dare after all.."
Rahul winked nd armaan frowned nd started examining the canteen..

Mu : "lehh.. fir toh armaan ridz ko hi propose karega.. after all he HATES her.."

Ni : "yes.. of course.. it will be fun.."

An : "but he's examing all gals, yaar.."

Ra : "chill.. he's juz acting.. propose to ridz ko hi karega.. aur fir.."

Mu : "fir ayega asli maza.."
Muski started laughing in her typical style…




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sargam .. 😆😆
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PART - 12



Ra : "really bro?? cool then.."
Rahul thought a bit… then scrutinizing the canteen he said wickedly..
"there are so many gals in the canteen ri8 now.. propose the one u dislike most"
All shouted in joy.. while armaan juz passed him THE look…
"sorry.. dude.. it's a dare after all.."
Rahul winked nd armaan frowned nd started examining the canteen..

Mu : "lehh.. fir toh armaan ridz ko hi propose karega.. after all he HATES her.."

Ni : "yes.. of course.. it will be fun.."

An : "but he's examing all gals, yaar.."

Ra : "chill.. he's juz acting.. propose toh ridz ko hi karega.. aur fir.."

Mu : "fir ayega asli maza.."
Muski started laughing in her typical style…

Armaan on the other hand was thinking wat to do… "propose the gal u dislike d most".. rahul's wrds were ringing inside his ear only.. "oh god!! Yeh kaha phas gaya main.. aab kya karoon main.. I'm damn sure rahul n all are expecting me to propose to riddhima bcz according to them I HATE her.. wait a minute.. according to them?? Don't I actually HATE her?? Ofcourse I do.." he made his mind nd turned his gaze towards riddhima…

Ra : "see.. I told u.."

An : "yeah.. I'm so excited for some super fun.."

Ni : "mee too.."

Mu : "nd mee three"

They high fived wth each other nd waited impatiently for a huge drama..

But as soon as armaan turned his gaze towards HER.. all his resolutions to HATE her flew out off the window.. there she is.. sitting with her usual attitude, cross legged, flipping her pager from one hand to other nd looking at him smiling mischievously.. goshh!! That means she knows dat I'm gonna propose to her.. armaan thought nd sighed.. this is going to be hard.. really really hard.. how could he do this dare now.. the conversation between her nd him juz a few minutes back came to his mind.. she knows he is attracted to her.. do I really?? may be.. frankly speaking i don't know.. but that's not imp now.. wat is imp now is this stupid dare.. do hell with u mr. rahul grewal.. can i kill him now for putting me in this trouble.. plshh?? he thought nd cursing his luck, he again looked at riddhima who winked at him making him more nervous… think ammy.. think.. how can u do this dare.. u won't b able to propose to riddhima.. thn wat?? He was lost in his thoughts again..

Mu : "yaar.. yeh armaan itna time kyun laga raha hain.."

An : "seriously.. it's as clear as water.. why cant he juz go nd propose to riddhima..??"

Ni : "ridz.."

Nikki corrected n all chuckled..

But wat happened nxt was beyond any one's expectation.. armaan turned 90degree more towards right side nd faced muskaan.. smiling naughtily, he went near her nd kneeling down in front of her, he said.. "muski.. my sweet heart.. will u marry me.. plzz??"

This did nothing but gave all the biggest shock of their lives.. muski literally choked her breathe in her throat nd strtd coughing badly… armaan quickly got up nd handed her a glass of water while anji rubbed her back..

Ar : "u okk muskaan??" his tone was caring..

Muskaan was still in the shock nd kpt on staring at him as if he is some spirit.. thn after sometime she regained her consciousness nd blasted on him..
"khote da puttar.. tu mujhse sab se zyada nafrat karta hain?? armaannn.. tu toh gaya aaj.."

Muski literally rounded over him nd he gulped the lump formed in his throat in fear… "nahi.. muski.. wohh.."

Mu : "kya.. woh.. woh..??"

Ar : "muski yaar.. yeh toh bas ek bekar sa dare tha.."

Mu : "mera dare ane de.. fir main rahul se kahungi ki mujhey yeh dare de ke main aaj balki abhi kisi ka khoon kar sakoon.."

Ar : "muskaan.. yaar.."

Mu : "u r soo dead today mallik.."

She said crunching her eyes, her nose flaring in anger..

An : "chill muski.. he wasn't serious.." then turning to armaan.. "ri8 armaan??" who juz nodded his head meekly..

Ni : "ammy.. r u mad?? Y did u choose muski??"

Ar : "mmm.. kyunki jab bhi woh merey kaan ke pass ake chillake good morning wish karti hain na.. I truly hate her that moment.."
Armaan said nd all chuckled excpt muski who juz fumed in anger..

Ra : "I agree… I wonder abhi tak merey kaan kaisey kaam kar rahe hain.. warna muski aur uski high speech voice.. allah rakhe.."
Rahul winked nd high fived wth armaan..

At : "haan armaan.. correct selection.."
Atul too joined but shut his mouth quickly as soon as he got a deadly glare from muskaan..

On the other hand riddhima, abhi, niki n anji juz were juz fighting their urge to burst out into laughter with great difficulty.. it was completely unexpected.. all thought armaan will select riddhima only.. in fact riddhima,herself, was pretty sure about this but this sudden change of the game lightened the atmosphere completely..

An : "okk guys.. enough of this now.. can we resume d game,plz??.."
Anji changed the topic seeing muski getting more n more furious wth every passing second.. needless to say, she also changed d topic so that she, herself, will not start laughing like a maniac..

Ar : "ya sure.." then turning to muskaan.. "sorry na yaar.. it was juz for fun.. chal.. meri taraf se tujhey ek ice cream.. aab toh maan jaa.."

Mu : "ek nahi teen.. ek se kya hoga.. mera dimag abhi bohot garam hain.."
All chuckled hearing her..

Ra : "tujhey khane ke alawa aur kuch soojhta bhi hain?? sara din chapar chapar chapar.. ya toh khati rehti hain ya fir chillati rehti hain.. non stop fm radio.. aur Teen teen ice crm akeli khayegi..?? pagal hain kya?? moti ho jayegi.. bilkul dhol ki tarah.."

Mu : "oyee rahul.. mujhsey panga mat le.. yeh sab teri wajah se hua hain.. na tu yeh dare deta aur nahi merey mood ka kachumbar banta.."

Ra : "arrey .. issmey meri kya galti hain.. aab mujhey kya pata tha ammy tujhsey itna nafrat karta hain.."

He said cheekily pulling her leg nd in return got smacks on his both hands.. one from muskaan.. other from armaan..

Ra : "ouchhh"

Ar : "tu chup nhi reh sakta kya.."

At this rahul only grinned shamelessly nd again all settled to cont. their game… the bottle is spun nd it stopped on MUSKAAN..

While muskaan massaged her both palms smiling devilishly, armaan nd rahul juz gulped seeing her expression..
Rahul turned to nikk nd said pleadingly.. "nikki yaar.. zara sambhal ke.. humhey marwa mat dena.."

Mu : "oyee.. ussey kya bribe kar raha hain.." muski threatened him n thn turning to nikki she said in a sugar coated tone.. "tu toh meri pyari si frnd hain.. hain na nikki.. chal aab mujhey ek achchi wali DARE de.."

Muskaan emphasized the wrd 'dare' nd nikki looked at armaan n rahul helplessly.. "sorry guys.. but mujhey itni jaldi nhi marna.." nikki apologized at which the duo turned pale nd looked towards muskaan who is all ready to eat them up..

Ni : "okk..toh muski.. tujhey abhi koi bhi ek rule thodna hain sanjeevani ki.. par yaad rahe.. blame kisi aur pe ana chahiye.."

Nikki finished nd both armaan n rahul looked at her aghast.. while muski literally jumped in happiness.. her mood once again is back to normal.. or better to say more than normal..

Ar : "wat the hell yaar.. tu dost hain ya dushman… aab pata nhi muski hum dono mein se kiski band bajanewali hain.."

Ra : "ya fir hum dono ki hi.."

He suggested another optn.. both sighed n waited for their fate…
Here, muskaan got up from her seat nd went out of the canteen…

Ra : "yeh kaha gayee??"

Ar : "humhey marwaney ka intezaam karne.. aaj sach mein sherni se panga leke thik nhi kiya humney.."

All chuckled seeing both the dudes so afraid of their punjaab di sherni..


After around 10minutes muski came back dusting her hands smiling sweetly nd sat back on her seat.. both ammy n rahul looked at her waiting her to reveal something.. in return she juz shook her shoulder as if she doesn't know anything..

On the other hand anji nd nikki asked her through eyes which she returned winking mischievously..

At : "so.. bottle spin karoon??"

Poor atul asked without understanding wat they should do now..

Mu : "rukh ja champ.. abhi toh countdown strt hi nhi ki.. so.."

An : "10??" anji asked hesitatingly..

Mu : "9" muski said smiling triumphantly..

Ni : "8" niki,too, joined

At : "7??" atul unknowingly said and got THE look from his buddies..

Mu : "6.." her tone became naughtier..

Ni : "5" she felt excitement all of a sudden..

An : "4" anji said nd looked at muski raising her brow..

Ni : "3" she became impatient..

Mu : "2… 1.. nd here u go.."

Intercom : "Dr. Rahul Grewal.. report to dr. keerti immediately.."

Rahul closed his eyes cursing his luck.. nd looked at muskaan.. "why me?? Armaan ko kyun chod diya tune??"

Mu : "kyunki usney mujhey teen teen ice cream dene ka wada kiya hain aur waisey bhi usney toh bas aaj mujhey tang kiya hain par tujhsey toh mera bahot purana hisab hain.."

Rahul looked at armaan nd said.. "dude.. I so envy you ri8 now.." who juz gave him 'wat-can-i-do' look nd showed pity towards him…

Intercom : "Dr. Rahul Grewal.. report to dr. keerti immediately.."

Ra : "chal beta rahul… marney ke liye taiyaar ho ja.."

He got up nd ran towards dr. keerti's office.. all other also followed him n waited outside dr. keerti's office..

Ni : "muski yaar.. kiya kya hain tuney??"

Mu : "sshh…"
muski cut her in between nd eavesdropped on the door..

Dr. keerti inside the room.. "what the hell is this dr. Rahul…?? How can u be so careless??"




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luv,
sargam.. 😆😆

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