Arshi: Burdened (Thread 1)

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Ooo wow
Brill start eh
Wonder wat arnies doing thrre xD

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@Chocolate_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Came accros it today amazing work dear...arnav goes mandir for khushi right...u siould definately continue dear...update soon yar

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esamoe

@esamoe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

AWESOME START.

loved how Nani and Anjali tricked him into agreeing to get married.

Arnav wants to choose his own girl and already has some1 in mind and also disappears every morning and goes to the temple could the girl be khushi??but in the prologue khushi told arnav that he first brought a proposal for her sister tooo much suspense.. continue soon I Am loving it good job.👍🏼

Edited by esamoe - 12 years ago

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

this si soo nice

but what does he do in mandir ??

he goes there to meet khushi na ???

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Mm...arnav babua has plans han...
Nice update...
Thanx for the pm...^_^

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Sona257

@Sona257

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

He has a secret from the past 2 months... Thats interesting.. THis arnav is really different,, I Like it!!

I guess he is stalking khushi :P

Loved the read more.. can;t wait for the next chappy !!

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neha

@neag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

always like the stories where Arnav is one of the strongest and make Khushi realize that he loves her more than ever and she not a burden or something on anyone...

one more story i'm reading just something like this...so like it when read the prologue...

will wait for an update...loved the first chapter