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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Me


Celebration of their love, finally
The stage was decorated be fittingly
The bigwigs from every industry,
Friends and family, gathered happily
Amidst everyone chatting excitedly
Ignoring the guests ...were the brothers three,
Their eyes on the entrance anxiously
Focussed ever so lovingly ...
Waiting for a glimpse of their brides to be.

The girls in no less of a hurry
To see their men dressed so handsomely
The moment did arrive eventually,
La, in pink and purple leading them gracefully
Akaash, her hand he grasped instantly
Followed by a gorgeous Payal in a saree ,
NK to her ran almost clumsily
None of this did Arnav notice, you see,
For he was waiting for his Khushi
His love for her increasing rapidly
She, his life had filled completely ...

He looked at her mesmerisingly
Dressed in red and green was she
Her hair in the breeze fluttering gently
Their eyes spoke like always, silently,
Hypnotised by her stunning beauty. ,

Khushi at Arnav looked anxiously
By him, all day being teased mercilessly
Whether in public or privately
He had with her flirted incorrigibly
What would he do ? she thought nervously,
Once they were committed officially
She looked into his eyes questioningly
And for her,she saw love undeniably

An unknown force just like gravity
Pulled them together magically,
And he scooped down immediately
And on her cheek he kissed her gingerly
Causing her to blush so innocently
Embarrassed and surprised momentarily
It was desire for him she felt strongly
And in his hand she gave hers willingly..

Rings exchanged ever so proudly,
The couples blessed so generously
By the four overjoyed families
The Guptas gave their permission wholeheartedly
For this rishta when approached by Anjali
The Kashyaps, had been waiting patiently
For La and Akaash's unity..
Akaash had stated clearly,
Only after Arnav would he marry

The dates fixed for matrimony
Payal, La in a month would be
Raizada daughters in law officially
Khushi would in time follow obviously
Their courtship period they wanted to enjoy freely

La and Akash partners in this conspiracy
Toasted their success ecstatically ,
To adhere to nani wishes respectfully
Akash and La had waited obediently
But Arnav opposed marriage vigorously
Anjali and Akaash attempts failing miserably
Till the day, Khushi in to AR appeared miraculously
And a plan they stumbled upon accidentally
When they witnessed Arnav and Khushi's chemistry

Their plan in motion they set cunningly
With Khushi, Akaash flirted openly
NK to this was pulled in unknowingly
And he became the cause of Arnav's jealousy
Sheetal become the cause of Khushi's fury
La and Akaash included everyone slowly
As a result Anjali intruded their privacy
And Khushi at Shantivan was seen frequently
NK and Payal became one officially
This worked for them favourably
It was time to give 'bhai' a nudge gently
To admit his feelings for Khushi rightfully
Akaash called upon his friend Sumer slyly
Anjali played her part perfectly
And lo behold Khurana made his entry
To stir things up dramatically ...
Followed by the night that made history
The love birds confessed intensely
Love conquered all naturally.

Khushi now his for eternity
Arnav revelled in that glory
He held her possessively
By the poolside, privately
Her choli gave him every opportunity
To feel her skin so teasingly
Devouringly each other brazenly
Love they felt so overwhelmingly
Their touch causing electricity
Claiming each other so sensuously
Consumed by lovely totally
They were joined by destiny
Love, it felt so heavenly..
Their hearts beating in perfect symmetry

Controlling themselves with difficulty
They returned to the party reluctantly
Tears of joy was shedding an emotional Anjali
To see everything turn out so wonderfully
A perfect time to seize this opportunity
Shyam and she would announce her pregnancy

All three couples on stage once again we see
Arnav still could not stop touching Khushi
His hands all over roamed teasingly...
Her memory still fresh from their intimacy
The couples in love with each other as should be..

Everything was progressing smoothly
When Arnav saw Sumer suddenly
To his Khushi walking purposefully
Who in turn greatly him excitedly
And ran to hug him friendly
Arnav charged to them angrily
He never experienced such jealousy
By her waist he pulled her possessively
About to threaten Khurana was he
When Sumer stopped him mischievously
And pulled out his wife surprisingly
Arnav stunned, the rest laughing hysterically
Akaash revealed everything eventually
How Sumer was used so effectively
To get him to admit his love for Khushi

Khushi embracing him tightly
Admitted to being guilty
And repent she would gladly
With her tongue teasing him suggestively
Pulled away teasingly
He looked at her adoringly
And laughed out heartily
Anger, pride, envy
Lust, sloth and gluttony
All the ingredients for a perfect recipe...
And this is how their embarked on their wonderful journey!
Their hearts beating in perfect symmetry!

Mints and Chitra...what a wonderful and exciting journey it has been ..it's not the end ..just the beginning in more ways than one...and Mints thanks for finally not dedicating our story to us...

Vandy Vandy Vandy!!!!
What a befitting tribute to this epilogue!!!
I knew it would be brilliant!!!!
I always look forward to seeing how you poetically transform a story and create the same magic that Mints creates with her story!
Without missing a beat!!!!
👏👏👏
I read this poem and I cannot believe how much in sync it is with the story - unbelievable!😃
The first word "celebration" said it all - a celebration of love, of a journey completed, of new beginnings and above all friendship!!!🤗
Stanzas 4 and 5 are so perfect in conveying the essence of that scene - I had goosebumps (the nice kind😉) when i read it the first time!
Stanza 9 was a story in itself -loved every bit of this poem, Vandy and all I can say is, I will not pressurize you to write, but it honestly would be a shame if you were to stop writing. I can understand the need to want to write and I really hope that, the "urge" one day, does come on you!
WE ARE WAITING!!!!😉(imagine a man in a white linen shirt, half dazed with bhang, saying that to you, with a slight smile and molten caramel eyes😳)
The last stanza was the perfect ending to the story and truly - its about their hearts beating in perfect symmetry.
To a journey completed, to the madness of SINS, to the crazy chats, the shared OCDs, to new beginnings...forever!
Celebration time, indeed!!!
(PS - am leaving out too much MAC and PDA for reasons best known to my crazee self)😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hey...

Thnx for the comment u made on me...

For a writer like u the least i can do is to comment on ur stories and appreciate the work...

Loved the epilogue...

The SS on the whole was an awesome journey...Thnx for writing it...and congrats on completing this SS successfully...

Would love to read more of ur stories...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
read this in 1 go!
and i just loved it!
u have got an amazing writing style
just loved this possessive arnav and crazy khushi!
such an awesome ss!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Congratulations on the new thread. And i am no writer. So really no need for the special mention.

So Aakash and La were the players who got our Arnav and Khushi together? Now that they are so in love i can't help but sigh as they eclipse the other two couples for me. Sorry but i am a sucker for Arnav and Khushi 😛

Yeah when i read the engagement venue had a pool i thought the same. But well Arnav Khushi pool and romance are classic.

Loved the tale. Thank you for penning it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
oh Mints it has ended i m gonna miss it badly 😭 this perfectly described elements of love i love this ff from the core of my heart but i m sure your other story will help not missing it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
OMG MINTS THAT WAS AN ABSOLUTELY AWESOME EPILOGUE. AWW ALL THE MOMENTS WERE TRULY MAGICAL. BE IT ARNAV KISSING KHUSHI ADMIST ALL PEOPLE, THE REVELATION THAT IT WAS ALL AKASH'S PLAN AND THE LAST PART OF SUMER BEING ALREADY MARRIED. I AM GOING TO MISS THIS STORY SO MUCH BUT AM SO HAPPY U ARE STARTING ANOTHER ONE. I AM SURE U WILL ROCK THAT AS WELL. SO THANK YOU FOR SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY AND HOPE U WILL KEEP US HOOKED ONTO YOUR FUTURE STORIES AS WELL.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
The story ended 😭 Loved it, another awesome update...😳 It was a perfect journey dear...never thought the cardinal sins to be so beautiful. So so happy that u started a new one darling, I am sure you are gonna rock it as well...Will miss this though, indeed a lovely lovely story.Thank u so much for gifting us this story dear and also thanks to Vandu and Chitra for waking up the fantabulous writer in you... 🤗
Edited by shar19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I'm glad that Khushi realises that it's not acidity! 😉

And oh what manipulations! But Arnav is definitely happy for having been manipulated on at the end - what with all those promises from Khushi on making it up to him. 😉

Awesome mints! Keep it up! Now off to reading your new works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Amazing epilogue to an amazing story.. Well done!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
And and aaannnddd.. we get an epilogue! Yay :D
First of all, thank you for the shout out 🤗

Too bad there are only 7 sins :/ Really mints, it was a really nice story :)

Arnav-Khushi scene was hot ;)
Now I shall go and read your new story Peek-a-booo! ^_^

PS: Sorry for the late post.. Was out the whole day :)

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