Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #1 [ Completed ]

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

Maar dalegi aap muje meri M..😆
part 5,
Simply brilliant...👏👏👏

"tere chehre se nazar nahi hat ti nazaarein hum kya dekhe?"😉

and Sumer ( awesome friend😉)

Part 6,

I like this Sumer as matchmaker..
and angry young woman Payaliya...😆
hate Nisha's entry...😡...
both were feeling jealous one because of Family friend and other because of his Angle with his best friend...like Sumer thought "aag dono taraf hai barabar lagi hui."...
Sumer aur Khushi ki achchhi dosti hogi!!!!!
and both were restless ...
this update ended at very beautiful moment...😳...finally he felt he is at home.👏👏👏

Part 7,

so so beautiful and very beautifully written update..
I liked the way you wrote about their thoughts and emotions...
In this whole play of Ashadaan orphanage project The Matchmaker is involved? ( I don't know why but I felt so..)...
So Naniji and Anji and of course Arnav's mom love Khushi...😳...
Oh Majnuji laila ka no. lena bhool gaye...

Again I loved the song you chose...👏👏👏

Part 8,

so adorable update...
Anji was rewarded by granted her wish of her favorite watch by her bro..
Akash's entry and their conversation..
Oh he is a walking encyclopedia !!! but he noticed her facial expression while she was talking Arnav...and Arnav was feeling jealous her being with some other man but not him..
I liked the way Akash asked about Arnav but also gave her time..👏 this is called a true friend.

M you always chose a very perfect song for each update and I love you for that.🤗

and it ended with a very filmy way...Haaye...M you are making me crazy...😆...

lots of love my sweet heart.😳

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#972

👏Part 9,

I love this Smart Khushi..she knew his plan and played along with him..👏👏..touching touching and wants more...haaye Arnav dear dheeraj se kaam lo fruit mittha milega..😆😳...loved the way he tried to comfort her and it worked and now Arnav knew about Khushi being an orphan..
so beautiful and superb update...poor boy caught red handed..😆 by Sumer 😆 now that's a beautiful and tikhi si treat for us..😆...

Khushi ki dhanno ki nikal padi...Cute dhanno...😳

"Aap yoo hi agar humse milte rahe dekhiye ekdin pyar ho jaayega..."
lekin idhar toh baar mil sake uska jugaad ho rahaa hai ..haayo rabba..😳😆

I love this Sumer bas.😊

Part 10,

Oops Akash was interested and has soft corner for Khushi but good that he knew what she thought about him as a FRIEND nothing more..she will be happy as being a friend...
a very eager and restless Arnav called her for dinner ...(dheere dheere se meri zinagi mai aana, dheere dheere se mere dil ko churana..tumse pyar hamein hai kitna jaane janaa tumse milkar tumko hai bataana,)😳

I loved these bodyguards but Akash !!!..(is there a cold war between Arnav and Akash for this K?😲 in future updates?)

"Ja Khushi jee le apni zindagi..."(DDLJ)😳👏👏👏👏

Haaye M mai bhi gayi kaam se...lovely update..👏🤗.

Part 11,

I am not going to write long comment on this very particular part...
because it's SIMPLY AWESOME 👏👏👏👏

LOTS OF LOVE AND HUGS sweet heart.
take care.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Hi mints.. me here too.. buhahaha :P on same day :P

Ok.. ab jab mai aa gayi hoon, to comment to banta hai na..!

See iam writing this, as I views of every chapter..as I am writing my comment after evey chapter, before reading next one.. maine aisa kabhi nahi kiya, except for U di's ts.. but who TS thi :P aur, mujhe ermm.. kya bolu.. aisa feel hua, ke mai pagal hoon :P

Now PAB :P

First, Character sketch :P

Hmm.. interesting.. read prologue too.. and character skecth seems interesting

So arnav this, time have parents and khushi is orphan.. jisse mujhe yaad aaya, I everytime wanted to read this type of stoy... and now cant ait to read more!!

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#974

chapter-1

amazing start

great description of delhi traffic, which makes me wonder, have you ever been here :P

and also loved the description of raizada's.. very cute and sweet family

ohh.. arnav loves his mother beyond anything.. that's so sweet! and his expectation and love toward his company... amazing!

ahh... love at first sight huh😉.. great😃

arnav is clean bowled in khushi's first sight (I am sure it's khushi, kissi aur ka toh sawal hi nai uthta 😉) which wasn't there meet even!

going to read next chapter now😃

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

chapter-2😃

this chapter is about khushi.. again very very beautiful description of chandni chowk.. loved it yaar!! her friends akash and payal.. waah!

so.. I was right.. no.. that was khushi.. lol. her dhanno!!😆 and she was teacher at the same orphanage, whose function arnav is going to attend!!

lol.. khushi's love, no, craze for dance is so much.. that she even dance while sleeping😆.. wow

so, khushi had a mental image of arnav.. 'aamir baap ka bigada beta' very bad khushi, never judge anyone before knowing😉.. coz pata nahi baad mein dil issi par aa jaye😉😉

here khushi was too a lost case😆

she too.. after seeing him and his behavior got clean bowled😆

and also she was jealous too..

and again this wasn't their first meet either😆

going to read chapter-3 now😛

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#976

chapter-3

wow.. beautiful chapter..

I really, love, how you describe scene, it's just beautiful😳

so, arnav has seen his anger and khushi, laad governore.. lol. I loved her reason to give him this name.. coz he made her heart-beat erratic.. and all dhak-dhak😆 she is too cute!

hayyee.. loved when he was just staring at khushi, all through the performance

and yeah.. they finally, but no talk😕.. chalo koi na..

will read and comment for chapter-4 soon

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#977

Bravo!

Just read 11 chapters so far...

what i can say more...it's stupendous story..

Beautiful concept..Lovely Banners ..superb choice of old songs..i'm die heart fan of old Bollywood songs...I liked all characters in this story..especially arnav-khushi and payal...loved their bonding...U very well portrayed Arshi possessiveness towards each other..Arnav is cute..hilarious the way he act to take khushi on coffee or dinner..their first date was so romantic..Aag dono taraf brabar lagi hy...the attraction, jealousy, possessiveness is increasing between them...this story is going wonderfully, totally different from the others you have written so far...now moving to the next thread...

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Just finished reading the story so far and I love it.. I am simply amazed the way you write, it's flawless and so darn romantic.. I love the positivity of the story, it's simple and very light hearted.. Amazing👏😊

BTW love the song selections, they were all my favorites 😊

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ipk1970

@ipk1970

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#979

This is a beautiful FF. read all 15 chapters in one go. waiting for the next one.

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#980

I just couldn't help but comment in between...much that I was engrossed in the story...
This is the best character of Arnav portrayed in any FF till now that I have read...
he actually looks human...with emotions that one would expect!!!!!!!!!
your choice of song that he listens to and associated with Khushi was ecxellent...
Reading chapter 6 ...will comment as I proceed...