Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #1 [ Completed ]

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: mints23
I miss writing this one... In process of writing the next chapter...
Hoping to put it up soon... Just thought would peek in Peek-a-boo!! 😆

Go and rest! 😡

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Go and rest! 😡

i said d same in scraps

bt she is planning to update 😡😡

cn u believe it😭

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

i said d same in scraps
bt she is planning to update 😡😡
cn u believe it😭

Both you darlings... I am resting... but trust me I can rest more easily after I update... 😛

I am already restless because of leaving this story for over a month... ab jab tai hain jaan main likhungi!!! 😉

And yes... will post the link to new thread too... 😊

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: mints23

Both you darlings... I am resting... but trust me I can rest more easily after I update... 😛
I am already restless because of leaving this story for over a month... ab jab tai hain jaan main likhungi!!! 😉

And yes... will post the link to new thread too... 😊

upd8 is nt running away😡😡

tkcr first 😡😡

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: sincereme
When will you update??

I don't want to give a date and not deliver... but next week... pakka!! 😊

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#966

Inteha hogayi intezaar ki. Aayi na kuch khabhar mints ki update ki!!!

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#967

Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo Thread 2

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Edited by mints23 - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: mints23
Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo Thread 2

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Congratulations...👏

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#969

Wow this is an amazingly simple yet beautiful. Two people from two different world falling in love. I really realllyyy loved your writing style. I am loving the story. I hope Aakash doesn't create any problems for them.

I also read your Os Love is... And fell in love with it too. Please notify me with pm/email whichever you like for all your future updates/ff-ss-Os...Being a Arshi Ff reading addict would to read.

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#970

My dear..
loved this concept...👏
so here is my comment on each part.😊

Part 1,

Loved this avtar of Arnav a very fun loving guy and Maa da ladla..😳..
some songs for this wonderful update...
# " Pehli nazar ne kaisa jaadu kar diya!!,
tera ban baitha hai mera jiya."
# "Ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa lagaa..
jaise khilta gulab jaise shaayar ka khwaab..."
# "Tumse jo dekh te hi pyar hua,
yaar mere aisa pehli baar hua.."
# "Saamne yeh kaun aaya dil mai hui halchal,
dekh ke teri ek hi jahlak ho gaye hum pagal."

Part 2,

Khushi is an orphan girl from Lucknow and her best friends cum guardians are Akash and Payal..Payal is with Khushi in Delhi ...😛
I liked the name "dhanno"
she thought Arnav is a "Ameer baap ka bigda ladka"...but naah ..after watching one beautiful moment between him and one of the little girl ..dhak dhak is on 😳 and she was jealous because of a kiss that little one gave on his cheek...now that's very interesting..😆

Part 3,

He was enjoying this event but still his thoughts were occupied by the "Angle"...He was thrilled after watching each performance by the children..and understood why his mother was an active participant of this orphanage ...
aree yeh kya ho gayaa !!!!!! Am I or what..?

his "Angle" performing in front of him and Banda toh gayaa kaam se..
his eyes could see only his Angle...and on the stage...they both were lost in each others eyes...aur unki fingers ke touch se.."zara sa kuchh hua toh hai."...she was shy..and he was drinking this blushing queen's beauty...

"Simti si sharmayi si kis duniya se tum aayi ho!!!,
kaise jahaan mai samaayega, itna husna jo laayi ho.."

Part 4,

Such a warm update ..
a beautiful loving family..
Anji is har bro's stress buster ..
his Mom always know what her Laadala wants and when?
awww I love this beautiful moment of Arnav and Anji...

Other side of Delhi...
Payal's entry and little friends of Khushi ko bye bye karna pada..
Payal and Khushi's bonding is simply awesome..
Payal is protective friend ...
Payal loves her and Khushi is her stress buster just like Arnav has Anji...

Arnav loves music!!! 😛
the song you chose just perfect ..."ek ajnabi haseena se.."👏 and with that you woven his thoughts very beautifully.⭐️

Sumer is "langotiya yaar" of Arnav...
they talked about some party...
and the small party is bringing a very big surprise for Arshi...👏👏👏
Oops ek baat toh bhool hi gayi ...Payal ne zara si Arnav ki taarif kya kar di Khushi ko toh gussa hi aa gaya...😆

loved all the parts very much.
take care dear.
lots of love.😊

Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago