Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #1 [ Completed ] - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 11:
Mints, this banner is superb. You are really good at it!😊

What a beautiful update, Mints! Loved it! But then I always do. You write so well that I am transported into the story each time.

Achha!' Ineteha hogayi intezaar ki' when it comes to him but he makes her wait for his reply. That was truly 'Laad Governor' of him.😛 Poor girl! How restless she must have been!

Love how he planned the 'perfect date', taking her likes and wishes into consideration...and not imposing on her. Love how with each conversation, they are growing more comfortable towards each other.

Loved Khushi's black anarkali suit! Very elegant! Love the effect she has on him. Love her little insecurities seeing him! So real!

So, he has his way around and books a few rows for privacy. I can't believe she enjoyed 'Chennai Express', but then she is Khushi! A simple fun loving girl. I can understand Arnav's lack of interest in the movie, with Khushi beside him. Even if he had gone to one of his favorite movie, his attention would only have been on Khushi.

Love their conversation in the car after the movie. He is jealous of the attention SRK got.😆

Dinner by the pool was perfect! The ambiance looks amazing.

Love her frank question if it was a date, but then looks like she wasn't prepared for the answer. That was so like Khushi. Love his honesty. And the way he is treading carefully.

So, he loves jalebis too. Now that's new.😃

Ahaan, So he would casually date girls if it was not for his Nani and Mom. Thank God, Khushi did not take it too seriously.

And the good night kiss was just the cherry on the cake this date needed. Perfecto!
I want more! And more!

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated comments here... Direct Link
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing ff...
Loved it.
Plz add me on ur buddy list and pm me when u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
its thursday..
update where are u????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mints, when is the update this week?
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaj bhi no update or note???

update ji and mints di for both of u

"kaha ho tum
kaha ho tum
interzaar mai aapke
main gum sum.."😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mints dii 😭 ajao na plzzz
kuch toh bolo atleast if update nt possible dats okk we knw u r busy
bt say smthng
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ... he did make her feel like a princess
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mintsji...what happened?
Thursday came and went and now Friday too. Where are you?
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Posted: 12 years ago

APOLOGY NOTE:

Hey guys, I am very sorry for not being able to update in the last week...
I am unwell and haven't even managed to log into IndiaForums.
The doctor has instructed me, for a complete bed rest for atleast ten days.
So, I apologize for this horrible delay from my end. I do not want to promise a date and not deliver. I will try to update as soon as I find the physical strength to write. Please bear with me for a while, and be rest assured that I am not going to leave Khamoshiyan and Peek-a-boo incomplete.
Thank you so much for your patience. Love you guys!! And hopefully, see you soon... 🤗

Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago

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