Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #1 [ Completed ]

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supakoolpr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

Hey thanx a lot for the pm!! really liked the update do update sooon n pm me too

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

OMG! What an awesome update! I love this story so much! I think one of the reasons is because you have made Arnav humane. Instead of putting him on a pedestal where he can affect others, especially Kushi, but not be affected by her, in spite of loving her to death, where he can do no wrong, where he is always trying to get one up on her! I absolutely adore this Arnav of yours. His love for Kushi is so apparent in the way he treats her. I do so hope nothing happens to turn this.

I loved their first date. It was obvious that he had taken the pains to make it perfect for her.

And OMG! OMG! OMG!THE FIRST KISS!!!!!!!!

I hope Kushi thinks long and hard about the whole date. I would love for her to do something just as memorable for him. Although, he already went on the scooter with her and saw things her way,still, but something just for him. A picnic?? With jalebis???

Akash is stalking her now??? Why is he spying on her?? I hope he doesn't do anything rash with her. He seems to be a thorn on her side.

Did I tell you that I love this story? Please don't change Arnav!

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

so sorry for the late reply but as they say better late:))))

wow thats wat i call a super romantic update!! i think along with khushi im falling in love with ur arnav! he is so cute and adorable!

i simply love reading about his restlessness and his eager ways to meet khushi. its so special and sometimes complicated being in love for the first time! like how he is debating when to call her and wat to say.

but super happy to see that aag to dono taraf barabar lagi hain! even khushi has started falling for this amazing guy!

n love dthe fact that arnav wanted to make their first date perfect and in a way he was successful in making their first evening night out mesmerising for her and at the same time he allowed her to have a glimpse of his world!

i know they might have so many difference concerning their lifestyles and all but this chemistry and attraction between them is the one thing that ll always pull them together

wow they have both started falling for each other! i duno y but im feeling that akash has the role of the villain here! it does give me the creep thinking that he was looking and somehow intruding on their private moments!!!! a jealous and one that cannot get the love of his loved one can be very dangerous. i just hope he doesnt turn out of to be one of those creepy and obssessed guys

so overall it was one fabulous and super exciting update and i had an awesome time reading this one and im totally looking forward to see how their relationship is going to progress:)))

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#894

as usual it was just perfect!
loved it to bits
both of them were so excited about their date
khushi was waiting for a reply from arnav but arnav didn't want to show that he was desperate. so he called in the evening and asked if she want to watch a movie
and khushi being khushi wanted watch chennai express and arnav couldn't refuse his khushi's wish so he said yes but wanted to book a theatre for them but khushi at the khushi got her way
and arnav too didn't leave his chance. he too got his way
and finlly the day for their date came
both of them got lost in each other
arnav was left speechless with khushi's beauty. khushi's doubts vanished when she saw arnav was openly admiring her
and then they went to watch the film and arnav was really surprised with khushi
he fell in love with her more
And then when khushi praised srk in front of arnav he couldn't help but feel jealous
awww. he is so cute 😆

"Why are you so quiet? Didn't you
enjoy the movie?" Her question
amused him and he glanced at her, for
a few seconds, before looking back at
the road. "How does it matter? I am
just your chauffeur. I hope you are
enjoying your time with Mr. Khan."
She hadn't expected this kind of jibe
from him. She could see the
annoyance and envy, clearly reflected
in his eyes. She giggled a little before
replying back, "Oh yes... we did have
a great time. But now that we have
left Mr. Khan way behind, I was
wondering if this chauffeur would be
kind enough to take me out to dinner,
because I am simply starving."

and khushi too realized that so she teased him
and then he took khushi to a grand hotel for the dinner
khushi couldn't help but again she again got neverous about her abd arnav
and arnav saw this and he made her comfortable by taking her hands in his
arnav is truly a gentleman and i just love him for that
and khushi got jealous when she saw others admire arnav but of course she didn't show it
arnav had arranged their dinner by tge poolside cuz he knew that khushi loves the ocean. a sweet gesture

"AR is just a friend,
Arnav... I don't agree with the
statement that 'Ek ladka aur ek ladki
kabhi dost nahin ho sakte' ."

and when arnav asked about akash she quikly explained about him as she didn't want their date to be spoiled
and their talked about their likes and dislikes and cane to know that they are very different from each other except for somethings

"You love those Dariba
jalebis ? Really? I can never have
enough of them. I make sure I send
HP, our Man Friday at home, to buy
them every week. Those jalebis are
my weakness. I could forgive my
biggest enemy, if he got me those
jalebis ."

i never ever thought thar arnav will talk about jalebis like this. he is a die hard fan of jalebis just like khushi. khushi was shocked to know this
and when khushi asked whether this was a date and he said yes khushi couldn't help but blush
awww arnav kissed khushi at the end of their date and khushi ran away blushing and this was witnessed by akash
since you saud that akash was not negative chatacter i am not worried about him
so at the end of day tgeir date was a success. it was perfect. khushi felt like she was a princess
i too wish for a date like this
waiting for the next update
i got late this time to comment
was caught up with school and studies

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#895

beautiful n romantic chapter... such a lovely date :)

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#896

its amazing really like Cinderella who meet her prince and now her prince tried hard to get her

its beautiful

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#897

Very nice first date - almost perfect.

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Aarnavi

@Aarnavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#898

Woohoo... What a update after a long wait! Too good.. It was such a romantic moment between Arhi..❤️.. Thanks for the pm dear.. 😊

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 12 years ago

#899

it was beautiful update

though it was normal setup,every couple goes for a movie n dinnre,but the way described whole journey was beautiful

obviously peck was cherry on the top

asr watching srk's chennai express...😆khushi should have given him some whistling tips.

on of the imp part i like in it that he immediately understood wats bothering in leela palace,and comforted her..

just like-hum bane tum bane

ek duje k liye'

though arnav was little hurt but i think it was good that khushi asked abt his usually going out on date.shuru se sab clear hona chaiye.same way she told abt akash.

lag ja gale in song in a ferrari...wow...

atlast wat akash saw,it was surely heartbreaking for him at that tym but i think it will be good for future prospectus..

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#900

Missed you and your stories so much Mints. 🤗

Really sorry about the delay.

It's been so hard to find time for myself.

Read Chapter 10:

Loved Loved Loved it. Beautifully written, Mints. You make it so easy for your readers to see the story as it unfolds. 👏

So, Akash was interested in Khushi. Looks like he still is. That explains his anger at Khushi for wanting to go out with Arnav. Poor guy! I am glad he has Payal who will hopefully knock some sense into him.

Loved how Payal is protective of Khushi! She truly cares for her. Her affection, so genuine! What a blessing to have such a friend.😊

Arnav in this story is indeed cute! He fumbles like a teenager in front of Khushi. But finally he asked her out! Loved his message the next morning.

Eager to read about their first date. Heading to the next part.

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago