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Posted: 11 years ago
kitna kuch ho gya iss story me... 😲

anyways... rey is so sweet... made arrangements for kriya's bday... 🤗

poor kriya... thats a dark secret... which keeps on haunting her from years... 😔

feeling the guilt of killing her own parents is soo scary...

he was right... to make her confess all this to her grandparents... that guilt is gone now... 👍🏼

she's in love.. great... but rey ko nhi hoga na abhi... 😳

moreover she'll withdraw... good.. atleast fir rey confuse to hoga... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part -6

(PS: Didn't proof read )


" Jaldi jaldi kaato , this is so yummy " Rey pulled her to the cake making her laugh hard. She never felt like this. Him being by her side was the best she could ever ask. She felt so special with him. She looked at him totally lost in him. Long back she forgot his parents and her grand-parents are also present along with her and Rey. But all she knew was he is with her right now. And she loved that smile on his face so much. She smiled looking at him when he shook her .

" Blow the candle Doc " he said and grinned. She smiled and blew the candle off. Everyone clapped and she looked at him smiling. He signaled her to cut the cake and she looked at the cake. She remembered those day's when her dad used to hold her from back and make her cut the cake . A lone tear rolled down her cheek. She almost jumped when she found someone holding her from back . She immediately looked at her side to see whose hands were those and found Rey smiling. Seeing him that close did make her heart flutter but her tears rolled down more seeing that he was in her life now and she knows how important he is to her.

He could guess what she is thinking. Ofcourse , she would be missing her parents. As she cried more he hit her forehead with his slowly and signaled her to stop crying and everything is fine. She is so pure. He felt lucky to have a friend like her. If not her , he won't be like this today..he would be addicted to drugs badly and no wonder if he would be breathing his last breathe. She smiled and looked front when he made her cut the cake. Everyone cheered when she cut the cake . She looked at all and grinned. This was the best day indeed in her life. She took a big piece of cake and walked to her naanu. She grew up on his shoulders. He was her actual hero. He reminds her of her dad. After feeding her naana and naanu she fed Rey's parents and looked at Rey. He stood there with a angry pout. She was in awe. How cute can he be. She grabbed one big piece and walked to him but he was stubborn to open his mouth.

She pleaded him but was shocked when he applied cream on her face and started laughing hard. Her jaw touching the floor , she looked so funny that he laughed more along with the rest.


All were sitting and chit chatting .

" So I planned everything, hum sab pehle lunch karne jayenge and then movie. And haa Kriya, mere kuch friends bhi aarahe hai , and tum officially mere gang ki member banjaogi " He grinned when she smiled. She will not object to anything. All she wanted was to spend time with him and she was more happy to meet his friends. He spoke a lot about them .

They were laughing and talking when her phone rang, she excused and went aside to pick the call.

Rey looked up frowning when she came running to the couch grabbing her hand-bag.

" Haan I am coming right now, just clean the blood and dekho clot na ho I will be there in 15 minutes maximum. Rohan ko bol dhyaan se kare " She ended the call and spoke hurriedly.

" Sorry, Mujhe abhi jaana hai emergency, Rey naana naanu ko ghar drop kardo please?? Sorry again.. bye !! " she ran out to get a taxi soon.

" Mai abhi aata hun "Rey excused and ran back of her.

"Kriya please aaj keliye kisi aur ko handle karne do na " he caught up with her.

"Nahi rey I can't " she said walked fast.

" Kriya please!! Maine poora plan kiya.. birthday ke din "he stopped in middle as she spoke.

"Rey!! Ek ladki ke sar pe chot lagi hai, she is in critical stage. " She uttered those words and his world stopped. The same happened with him. Now he can never stop her.

"Do minute rukho, mai drop karta hun tujhe " he rushed in and grabbed his car keys.

" naanu aap log yahi rukhiye.. mai wapas aake aap teenon ko ghar chod dunga " he said left.

Through out the drive she saw him tensed. All the memories haunting him. He came with her to her cabin and followed her to the OT too. Before she entered he held her hand stopping her.

"Kriya!! I know you can do it.. be confident, and iss ladki ko bachalo " he literally pleaded. He doesn't want other to suffer like him. She suddenly has this lost feeling. How can she ever think of him with her. He loves Swetha, still and he honestly thinks her as his best-friend. What was she thinking all the time?? She made a quick decision that she won't let her new feelings affect their friendship and determined to save this girl at anycost. He wanted her to save. What if she couldn't save Swetha as he wanted, she will save this girl and reduce her guilt. She nodded and left after giving him a quick hug. He looked around. He could clearly imagine himself and his family crying in the place of the girl's family.

He closed his eyes shedding those tears formed in his eyes as he remembered Shwetha's face. He had decided not to cry thinking of her, instead he would smile thinking of her, his love. But today he couldn't control. He walked to Kriya's room and sat on the couch remembering the initial days how he met his love of life. He silently prayed to God to save this girl .



Okay here this ends!! Two down!!🥱 One more left 😆

Meet you in GS thread !! :*

Love ya!!

-Deetha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
aap sidi se gir gaye the kya ? :O
back 2 back updates de rahe ho ! 😲😲😲
neway !
lovely update !
i loved d bond !
n d end !
shit !
memories ! >:O
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved this one..!!!

withdrawal of feelings..i though Rey will realise...but nahi...this is different...

i loved how u showed Rey having a hard time remembering swetha... aawww...poor soul...

now its Kriya whoz gonna hold her feelings... hmmm...

now me really waiting to see how will Rey fall for her!!!

Loved it!!




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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updt
Loving their frndshp
Rey still loves shweta but waiting to see hw he falls for kria
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome... rey still loves shweta and considers kriya as his best-friend...ab kriya kaisa react karengi???? thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loving KriYaansh's bonding
but Rey's past is still haunting him
waiting for tomorrow's update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Really amazing ne
Kriya ki feeling for rey growing so much
Love the update to much
Wonderfull
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update!!
feeling really bad for Kria n Rey!!
Kria relized hr luv fr Rey bt wont express it!!
Rey determined to nt to shed tears for shweta but watching situation like his own he became sad!!
they're lyk two pieces of same puzzle!!
waiting fr their union!!
loved it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
it's a nice one...aur age kya hoga...??

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