I have to start with SHREE I LOVE YOU!!!!! Sorry just shree.nanda told me about your story
And
She was right it was funny and light hearted
LOVING the way its going
A + K fights, Pranks, jokes really. Is great its hard to make ppl laugh and your doing a great job of it
My favourite lines are Arnav's some of the sayings he uses I have never heard before. And they truely make me think for a moment when I read.
Then his flirty lines
My favourite "dilliwali grilfriend" can't belive you made ARNAV say that wwooow.
Is this really Arnav?
Then he kidnaps her???? wat just picks her up and leaves. he goes pass check in wth a sleepy Khushi??????
This story is crazy
But ithink I like the fact you have kept negative characters after all life aint perfect
Not ging to say hate shanaya I know you have probable heard it eonught and her real role is yet to start. hehehe
PAYAL you fool speak up wll you plz gve her a backbone. know younger but se blindly follows Khushi.
And wait she's had BF hmmm move for Arnav to mess with
No idea if they will meet in delhi then travel t mumbai tgether or
Arnav will pick up Khushi at the airport most likely first
Can't wait
Great work!
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