You can't leave me. OS(Dare) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

RES RES RES!

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OH MY GOSH!!

*screams* *dances around* *runs and huggs the author of this BEAUTIFUL story*

OH My My dii!! I am totally speechless! i wasn't wrong!! I was definitely not wrong in saying that YOU will be able to write this in the BEST way!!

I am super happy right now!! way too happy!! Thankyou so so so so so much for this!!!

I mean.. Gosh it was so so intense!! Their love.. I could actually feel it!! I have goosebumps right now!! I so wish I could ask you to continue this!!

I mean.. woah!! Sorry to say this in such a raw way.. But the love making part.. seriously took my breath away!! It was so intense and way too beautiful!!

That part.. When Rey kisses her seeing that tear drop.. It was outta the world!! I mean.. that feeling which it gave me.. Its like.. rey understood that Taani needed him that time.. Seeing her crying.. he knew that she needed him and he kissed her.. Gosh!! So pure.. so beautiful!! i completely completely loved iT!!

I am still awestruck!! Thankyou thankyou so much for this!! Really! Hats off!

Okay honestly...i really am not happy with this update...but you are...so glad to see u that liked the story.
hope you really liked it so much, and thanks a lot for such a compliment.

U surely r an amazn writer..
u shld b provided wth mre nd mre dares..
each emo wz so perfectly written..
each wrd holds sum feelngs in thm whch waz easily understabl..
u surely surely r an amazn writer..

it was damn awsome...👏 frm the beginning till the end I was engrossed in it... 1 of the best os by u... luvd it to the core

This one was so emotional, Loved The TR part so much.. Poor TaaRey😭

wow di
kya likha hai
superb
what intensity
aap jaanti hai jab woh gaana start hua i was crying😭
feeling were eexpressed by heart wow
😛

Oh megha...dat was exceptionally hot...awesum :D

Megha beautiful OS, I love the way u expresses Taani pain on receiving that horrible phone call. And I love that Taani finally tell Rey the truth in the end and they both will face their problem together. I love it, Meg u did an amazing job.

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Omg...it was so intense...!!!
meghu from where do u get these ideas...
very well written...loved it to bits..!!!
poor Rey n taani..!!!
it was so so emotional..!!!
you wrote every emotion so brilliantly...every single word described there love for one another
song selection was superb..!!
thanks for pm...
sorry for commenting late..!!!
love u

hey thank you samiya...
and sorry...god..hunh..next time u said a sorry i'm deffo not gonna send a pm to u...just kidding...i love ur comments so much...they encourage me to write more.