Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31 - Page 16

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

Didnt expect virat to react this way i thought he wud go and find out wat was wrng with manvi and why she did all tht instead he hated her and was trying to distract himself using maya tht nt really love no trust even ...
the 2 yrs leap and the story took an interesting leap the change in virat 's life is really annoying hate maya...
rahul is manvi's fiance 😲 also a cardiologist i guess i gt wat was manvi's prblem bt surely wnt say it until the next update lemme check if mine guess is rite 😉
anywayz jo bhi hua maya and rahul are out of the chapter thanx to virat 😆 😆
its really getting interesting update next part sooon 😃

Originally posted by: Sumana123

OMGGG What Did U Just write...It's a master piece ...I still can't get over it ...You gave me angry Viraat...I m still not over the intensity you showed ...OMGGG ...OMGGG >>>>>> OMGGG is all that I can say...It was fabulous ...maanvi's words still ringing in my head ...so touching ...The Haddis Maya and Rahul did their parts well...I m still breathing heavy in excitement ...its was fabulous update


DONT DARE TO END IT SOON😡

Love Sumana

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Picture perfect... U did exactly Wat I wanted again ^____^
Every one has a breaking point n everyone has to move on in life no matter what. But the truth is when u move on u don't forget your past After all, it's hard to forget the first love...speaking of love my boy was hurt really hurt.. However he stayed in his limit n didn't break apart.. I love that section ... Life is hard one storm in life can't destroy u completely... You gotta get over it n try to face it.. Which he did and I'm glad he moved on with a GF/ or shall say thing that will divert him from thinking about her..

U all goody goody writers >_< I asked for bad boy u give me good boy's breaking point outcome.. Psh that's not Wat bad boy is u just dnot get me...

When he was inside the restroom I was like yay someone is in rage n evil things will happen <3 but psh u gotta be a good soul >_<
However, a good part of me liked that section cuz people sud not react without knowing the reason behind the betrayal.

Restaurant area section I was expecting some more dialogs but no u gotta make it short isn't it? Diii what's wrong with u!!!! I wanted my boys dialog >_< at least u cud have showed a shade of crazy lover or a sarcastic crack :p anyways my complain doesn't end here.. Moving on.

The hotel side area haii I love that section :p
One thing everyone Sud learn from this is "if u get rejected don't just sit there try move on repeat the task n see what was the reason for rejection n try to fix it"
Psh philosophy much?

This boy loves her way too much ... Can't see her in pain psh.. All good soul traits .. My evil mind is rolling eyes on that :p

I was laughing when Rahul n maya entered his room rofl.. U don't like melodrama haha so didn't drag that section lol good. I don't like melodrama either. So old fashion no?

Now my evil mind is really mad at u.. Y u have to end on good terms? N wats the rush to ended it huh? Lol u like short n simple stuff don't u? I thought so :p

But yeh dil kya kare ... Dil mange moreee... Evil soul is very disappointed but I'm very happy lol. Thank u for this sweet update.
You said u will end it soon which means I can demand for new one soon .. Too bad u gotta write u r got at that :p