Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31 - Page 14

Originally posted by: IAmAaru

Good one!!
Finally SOme twist and turns!
I was literally geting bored with the normal pace! ;) You Know mE! ;) :D
Well to be honest i Miss the trademark Nok Jhok between them!
But its okay if It doesnt suit your story!
great going!!
Update soon!

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Tareef karu kya uski jisneee isse likha hai... Let me take a deep breath first.. How an u make my boy so perfect??? Like OMG I want him sooo bad... He was a boy n he stopped her from going out of control...can anyone get a perfect bf like him??? Do we have a boy like this in real life? If no then y don't we have one??give me oneee :p

Honestly speaking I was about to blast at u toward the end cuz from line 1 till the last paragraph I kicked out my evil spirit n went with the flow of good spirit... Really went back to that perfect world..

Each scene u described was upto the mark n I enjoyed thoroughly...

Karan n virat convo for virman confession... Haha I like how virat made him wait instead of giving the news right away...

Lying to ur parents just to spend a little time with ur bf ahem.., have u done a PHD on teenage life??? Cuz from day one u r giving us real facts about junior kids life :p

And I can't help myself from staying connected with it :p

Agra memories haii this will be there foreverrr I will kill her kamini manvi.. I can curse her I have the right! She hurt my boy n I wont let her in peace :p my heart broken boy... *evil mind on vengeance*


As ur age go up ur sins goes up too! Sweet 19 mei hi sidha 6er? ROFL! Control girl... Again u portrayed a real life event... When the teenages haw their wings they wanna fly without thinking about the consequence ...but O M G this virat is my jaan... I had a big smile on my face when he stopped her although evil mind was frowning for eeh nothing happen lol.

Don't make my boy so perfect yaaar... It hurts when his heart is being crushed... That's I say little bit bad boy is ok.. Saves ur temper :p


Now the big game comes manvi kaminiii bitch... How dare u reject him... How can she... Screw her... Idiot... Urghhh I almost cry ... But again my evil mind say "Kyu roraha hai... Let the game begin... It's bad not time"

He will go Mumbai I know but I wanna know for Wat reason she ditched him..

Random guesses
- she told her parents about him n they rejected.. Sweared her to Stay away from him

- uncle Raj was a chughal Khor aunty :p something he did after the Agra saga..

- past story of vadhera vs Chaudhary

- mrs. Vadhera connecting to chaudharies... Or saying stay away from my boy?

- manvi found a new love hahaha.. That's no use.

Make ur twist a little complicated... I don't want any of them above the list hehehe! Come up with new one...

Now no complain again.. It was lovely update n I enjoyed a lottt <3 muaaah now update soon will be looking forward to it :)