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Posted: 11 years ago
part 9
awesome...
nice one...
Khushi is too much...
but Arnav has already for Khushi...
and Arnav's sub conscious is hilarious...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh RB, welcome back with another stress buster of an update!
Noone has made me crack up as much as you have with your witty & crazy dialogues & I mean crazy in the best possible way!

You couldn't have started the chapter on a better note, the Aapki Adalat reference, I can't say I haven't been in the similar situation where people have raised complaints about pettier things. And from that very first scene, there was no going back! Things kept getting crazier, I couldn't help laughing at Arnav's situation with Khushi trying to "pretend" seduce her Boo ( 😆) being blissfully unaware of the sinful thoughts going through her Boo's mind!

Did I mention how much I love Arnav's subconscious that keeps swearing at him while putting scenarios of him massaging Khushi's feet in his brain!😆 Your Jib @ soapies and even yourself is down right hilarious! I am all awestruck again at your ability to spin situations and write the wackiest & coolest lines ever.

Ah, Arnav is madly inlove with his oblivious Secretary, who is seriously from another planet! Specially with the way she kissed ASR in the elevator and scowled at her score of 82%! 😆Oh man this SS just keeps getting better and better! ;)

So thank you again for updating this SS and giving us another laugh riot! I feel like whoever is not reading this piece of fiction, is missing out big time! ;)



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RockBarbie



Et tu "Aap Ki Adaalat"? I did sit once on a grievance meeting which I am told is a very serious affair but the case I was on was anything but. I almost called the two people "children" but held my tongue.

Yep, you can say what you want. Letting go of the immaculate shield and the body armor we have ourselves surrounded with is basically the necessary invite on this thread :=)


I did watch a few episodes "Aap Ki Adalaat" a long long time ago...*Nostalgic sigh*

I'll never forget this one particular episode with Bipasha Basu and I even remember Mahesh Bhatt in that episode...it was better than a stand up comedy 😆

I think the seriousness of the programme is on the anchor's face...that's about it. Atleast as far as I remember it.
Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Freaking hilarious!!!!!
If you didn't know where you were headed with this chapter, I wish for you to remain forever in that state.

"Are you seduced now, SIR?" 🤣
Would she herself be seduced when she reaches that 100% mark? Arnie boy is sure counting on it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome back rock barbie...u r a terrific writer...hilarious update...how do u come up with such creative n crazy thoughts...i like d sanki n downright pagal khushi...
Edited by pearl.b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
gd 2 c u bk
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awsum updt

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Posted: 11 years ago
you've updated after so long, fantastic!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I spent an hour this morning reading all the chapters again.
And this is what I call a morning well spent.
Khushi without the pompoms, and wearing decent secretary clothes.
She is deginitely geared up for the seduction scene.
The ascenseur, the claustrophobic Arnav, and the resulting kiss!
What a fun read.
Love this story, RB.
I do hope you'll update sooner this time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was cute kind of story... really loved it... and laughed a lot...hihihhih
bravo my writer... keeep on writing...mmmaaahhh

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Posted: 11 years ago
Complete and utter ROFL
Off to gobble some nimboo masala right now - it is contraband. I have to smuggle it over 😆

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