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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for updating
Fantastic hilarious update
The practice for seduction lesson are still on.
Khushi is finally successful seducing Arnav and he has fallen hard for her. He is in love with her.
Now it's his turn to seduce Khushi so that his importance in Khushi life increase more than a boo.
Love it.
Update soon
Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
you rock nice to see you back just loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bwahaha. ASR is a Boo, Arnav made a boo-boo. 😆
So he is her boss cum BFF cum SSS-sample. And he's in love with her, and surprise-surprise, the Great Subconscious does not snerk for once at this admission. Poor guy. Is this what you call being stuck between a rock and a hard place? Classic.
Khushi is...Khushi. She's so awesome she deserves to become a part of the lexicon; a definition in herself. Like," That little monkey is very Khushi". The gal deserves it. Plus bonus points for rescuing Arnav in the elevator. Rawr.

I love these little meta-touches you put throughout the chapter. IPineYou PineWeAllPine, and the author whines. LOL.😆

I'm glad the 500 words decided to reach out and extend themselves. Had great fun reading this. :-)

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Posted: 11 years ago
omg omg u updated i dont how i came to know
i amm not in ur buddy list
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it was beautiful chapter
dont end it fast plzz
i really love this ss
take ur time
so milan got insulted by khushi and khushi wering skilt and fitted withshirt and kitten heels ummm
and the subconsience of arnav is so funny
love it
ps adaptation plzz update soon that one
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you for updating! i love the nonsense they speak, hilarious!
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a surprise update..RB!

I felt it was so romantic in such a funny way...your sense of humor is amazing...unbelievable👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RockBarbie

"Time to be trapped in a confined space and...sir? Are you alright?" Khushi's voice raised a notch when Arnav collapsed on his knees his breath hitching and eyes losing focus.

"Sir...sir?" Khushi crouched in front of him and cupped his face in her hands. "Are you claustrophobic?" She whispered. Arnav couldn't formulate a response but nods answering her question.

"Just small and dark places. If there are lights, am fine." He gasps the words out and heaves as if his chest hurt. "Thus...panic attack." He lifts his head and finishes softly, his breaths coming in short gulps of air.



Awh! Arnav is wuri Kim Joo won's lost hyung ;)
Edited by -Mitra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Okay, its Friday night, after drinks and dinner and seriously, I have no business writing this comment now. But I'm in a reckless mood and I thought, if RB can write this without knowing where she is going, I can very well do this comment.


I love this SSS mode Khushi...Pencil skirt, white top and red lips...woohooo...As it was, Arnav never stood a chance and now he is a total goner.

You know, when Arnav gave his judgement, I thought 'is this aap ki adalat'? and there you went...

But the best part for me was Arnav's answer to her comically seductive question...82%...82%? wow...I swear this Arnav has such fab come backs...

Loved it RB. Missed this one...a lot ...I hope I made sense. If I didn't I'm sorry..

P.S - I forgot I was commenting on W&P...i can say what I want, right?😆😆😆



Et tu "Aap Ki Adaalat"? I did sit once on a grievance meeting which I am told is a very serious affair but the case I was on was anything but. I almost called the two people "children" but held my tongue.

Yep, you can say what you want. Letting go of the immaculate shield and the body armor we have ourselves surrounded with is basically the necessary invite on this thread :=)
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Posted: 11 years ago
You come back with a vengeance! I loved the opening scene and his thought on why he was sitting on the grievance case. This Kushi all dressed to kill just put the final nail in the coffin and Arnav is gone baby gone. Yet he will not give in and admit it the stupid man. I think that is why she called him her boo. Anyhoo it was fun to read about claustrophobic Arnie being rescued by Kushi with a kiss. His Shatir dimaag is working though as now Kushi will work a little bit harder to get the 100%. I like it when you have no clue where you are going with the story as this was hilarious.
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Posted: 11 years ago
RB what a delight after months of wait! But Iam so glad that finally you updated! Thanks heaven for whatever forces that made you write.
As usual hilarious update.

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