ArShi SS: Forced Marriage ~Chapter12 Page 128 THREAD2 LINK PG1

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Okay wow! Thank you os much for clearing the air and making it clear to khushi that arnav was not the villian of her story but the hero. It was quiet upseting about her dad's health but you have put across very nicely the main message.

The story does not sound ambigious and confusing. Now i will be really excited to see how khushi ammends the mistakes that she has made. how will she manofy arnav and the family?

I feel really bad about arnav as he deserves a wife who really loves him because he is such a lovely person. Hope khushi gives him the love that he deserves.

I really like your style of writing...

regards
kajol

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katj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Nice update..hmmm now khushi knows the truth .. Hope she changes sooon

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gifttag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Awesome chapter.
Now we know what happened with this marriage scenario.
I am glad I did't judge Khushi too harshly.
Arnav as we know is very loving, supporting and a very balanced person and will understand if Khushi try and explain what happened and how she misunderstood him.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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amita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Nice update !!!!!!!!!!!

Now Khushi knows the truth

Finally Khushi knows that Arnav was never wrong

And she hurt him for what he didn't do

Hope she will make a move towards their relation

Waiting for next update

Plz continue it soon

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Thats really sweet of you Shaimma : )

I being a writer of a few stories myself can completely understand how difficult it becomes to fulfill the readers expectation because when readers give time to read your story and comment about their views then it becomes our responsibility to make them feel that their time spent for reading the story was worthwhile and did not go wasted by any means.

I really like your unique concept. In every story that i have ever come across and even the original show has potrayed Arnav being the one hating khushi but in this story it was vice versa. Khushi had been in turmoil as to why her life had changed so sudenly and her behaviour was very well expressed throughout.

Arnav on the other hand was as perfect as any husband could be who was trying very sincerely to win his wife's heart. In this story my heart really goes out to Arnav as i imagine him in such a state.

This misunderstanding really bugged me because the Arnav in your story is so charming, sweet, honest and caring who deserves love and nothing else.

Khushi's misconception was hurting him to the very extent where he could have become negative but you did a profusely great job by keeping him positive in a very realistic way and by making arnav think practically rather than making any hasty decision.

I really appreciate your imagination.

Waiting to read more of your upcoming chapters to see how the story unfolds.

Regards
Kajol