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I loved each and every chapter! Your writing was so really that you could feel them.
My favorite chapter was when when Khushi asked Arnav to take her back or tell him that she was ready to "explore" this relationship after knowing about her parents. It made me feel that she felt so low of her because of her past that she was ready to give up her beliefs but iam glad that Arnav didn't make her feel like that.
Then that chapter where Arnav gives her the ring and got the reaction she didn't expect! But ended beautifully!
Coming to last chapter was Hart breaking! The way Arnav hit Shyam, I really wanted him to give more! Then the things Rohan told Arnav about faith was so true. You suffer more when you see your love one suffer! Arnav proved again that he is the business man, making deal with the god!
Beautiful story and you are a amazing writer!
My favorite chapter was when when Khushi asked Arnav to take her back or tell him that she was ready to "explore" this relationship after knowing about her parents. It made me feel that she felt so low of her because of her past that she was ready to give up her beliefs but iam glad that Arnav didn't make her feel like that.
Then that chapter where Arnav gives her the ring and got the reaction she didn't expect! But ended beautifully!
Coming to last chapter was Hart breaking! The way Arnav hit Shyam, I really wanted him to give more! Then the things Rohan told Arnav about faith was so true. You suffer more when you see your love one suffer! Arnav proved again that he is the business man, making deal with the god!
Beautiful story and you are a amazing writer!
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