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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Hey really nice update dear

Wow Arnav opened up to khushi

Ya and Khushi was honest by telling that she doesn't knowhow it feels to not have parents and to share happiness with him.

I liked the fact that she is not orphan

They both love each other.It's really good

Hope they confess soon

And the hug and kiss was cute

The way Arnav tell he will protect khushi and khushi accepts was cute

And Khushi already opened up to Arnav and shared her feelings

So Love is on the air

Thanks 4 the pm

Will be waiting

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

woww...nice...

loved it...

updte soon...

thankx for pm...😃

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SangArshian4eva

@SangArshian4eva

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

really nice update

felt good to see this side of arnav

they became friends

they shared their first hug. it was the sweetest thing

aww he kissed her on the cheek

he told Nani and di that he is in love. wow

iam very excited to read next chapter

pls continue soon

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Kinu22

@Kinu22

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Awesome... Arnav's family is agree for Khushi & him...
Khushi also feeling some strong bond towards him...
lovely update..

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Great update!

I loved all their moments together.

They are both in love! Wow! Lets see who confesses first and how.

Looking forward to Arnav wooing Khushi.

Thanks for the PM.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Superb update !!! ARSHI are in love but nice they are giving each other time to evaluate their feelings and not burdening.. loved the update.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

that was a beautiful update !! 👏

love the pace of the story and i love arnav !!! he is not a khadoos here !! 😆

khushi is so adorable...she is missin her parents and their hug ws so damn cute !!

nani and anjali on arnav's side as well but i luv hw he said tht he wants to win her on his own !!

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Trinity11

@Trinity11

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Okay... So I am Just loving it

The story is line is just simply beautiful

Its a page turner and i keep waiting for your update.

Its good that both of them (the characters) are opening up now

physically too ;)

I hope the story brings turns in their lives, which helps them feel how

strong their love is for each other!

Your Dialogue writing is good

and i can see your vocab is improving! :D :P

Waiting for Chapter 5 eagerly

Keep Writing.. More and longer chapters

Ur ending is very suspicious.. and gives a intensive look to the story!

Keep up the good Work author!

(Y)👏

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Awe beautiful update loved it

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Aww beautiful update, if he has realized is his feelings, come on dude, go and tell Khushi so that we will get more lovey dovey updates. Beautifully written chapter and love the way you described their feelings.. Superb! Loved it 😃

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