Forever and Beyond #1 Link to #2 on pg1 - Page 87

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

perfect re

waisa v wohi krti hai

ar mein ana ka baad

uska naya job 😡😡

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1

toh bana du usse asr ke cabin ka security guard??😆

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

What the hell?? 😲

Just read the prologue and Chap 1 and 2.

I was getting so horrified reading one update after.

It was like I am my reading my own story 'Keep Loving Me' but since your story is older than mine, I thought now people are surely going to accuse me of Plagiarizing Cherry's work. 😆

But then as the went on, and I read the 2nd chap, my breaths got even.

The story travelled a different path than mine. But that really had scared me for a minute.

Me and plagiarizing? 🤣

Chalo get over it, coming to the updates.

I simply love the idea of love at first sight and a decent Arnie baby.

And that's what you are offering in the story. 😳

As I was reading the prologuewa, I came across this line it really cracked me up there

"No girl could be seen as they were all getting ready with their final touch ups to impress the most eligible bachelor in town"

The prologue and Chap one was beautifully written, a little less explained (:p), and was exciting.

I was again LOLing where Arnav thought how can ASR's brother blush at the mere mention of a girl. That reminded me how our very own ASR had slipped in a dreamy world just by seeing our Khushi.

Double standards huh? 😆

So I have read only two chapters as of now and I would be reading the story at a slow pace. I hope you don't mind haan?

And even if you mind, do I care? Naat even a bit 😆

That means I'll read this at my own slow pace and you'll have to bear my frequent comments.

But do keep updating the story jaldi jaldi so I that I never run out of posted chapters. 😉

Time to end the comment.

Tata Bye bye

Hasta La Vista 😉