TaaRey OS: Maula mera...[dare completed]

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Tahira-2013

@Tahira-2013

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

ooow that was sooo brilliant indu

i could Really imagine TR in jungle

and than the end was hearttouching 😭😭

brilliant os indu 👏👏 keep writing

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Sreeja Nair

@sreeja_rox

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

I am super jealous of you indu..how can u write so damn well????please pass on some talent to me *puppy face*
The OS was perfect.The lover Rey which is missing from the show was so damn good here.The whole time he was adoring his love,what she did,how she behaved,everything
And the romantic scene was just *blush blush*☺️

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Indu

@redroses123

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: NSohi13
Res/unres

Sorry-2 very Sorry Bhua ji for a very-2 Late Reply :(

Koi Bhi saza chalegi... It was really very-2 romantic and touching story ... The song selection was awesome ... It touched my heart love you so much Indu... Thank you so much for a lovely story :)

what the!! Titaliya dekh, dont make me say ur arnavjis dialg.. How dare u think i can b angry on my titaliya..uhh!buaji can never b angry on her titaliya.. I love u jaan..

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Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

so so so nice...

me kya bolu... naya words dhoondna padega... to expllain the beauty of ur story!

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Ankita Bora

@reyanks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

It was so painful n yet so beautiful...!!

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chinudolly

@chinudolly

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

unres my comment on page 4 😳😳

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-Sapna-

@-Sapna-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Kya baat kar rahi ho aap di!! It was such a beautiful story, and wo end wala part with the doves was amazing! I just loved it!!!!!

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sangeetha

@sangee_manan

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

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Akanksha Singh

@-ChaHHat-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Hayyyeee...mere cmmnts ki stock khtm ho jaati hai jb apke FF ya OS pr cmmnt krna hota hai...!!!

Fab as usual...!!😉

AweSome As usual..!!😉

AmAzing as Chaahat 😉 😆

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pari

@PPooja08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

hey nice indu i really liked it n romance was so beautifully expressed bt taarey r nt togeather actully i liked this os...the pain can be easily felt really good work indu rha nks for the pm...