TaaRey OS: Maula mera...[dare completed]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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mmm..hellooo my sweetu girls.. me with my OS on the song I got as challenge from our favorite Game , Euphonies of TaaRey.. Prassi challenged me to write on the song maula mera with taarey in jungle , break up and romance ….So here I am.. oyee my fellow monkey 's cheer up na.. the panda's are already showing glares

Switch off the music and on in ONLY when u start reading else it will be a total mess[player is In the bottom of this line .. press the pause button]


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IMPORTANT , naughty girls … don't jump to read the OS .. first my lecture .. only then the OS…

Context :

Swaron are officially a couple ..

Taani has proved herself has a successful GS.. She got selected among the very few students who Got scholarship to pursue MBA in a reputed institution….

Only one more semester left in college …

So after exams of the current semester , gang decides to go on a holiday trip , trucking in a jungle … taani denied but swayam and others persuaded her so she decided to accompany them….

Rey wants to tell taani the real reason why he broke up with her and woo her and get her back to his life .. swayam and Sharon are helping him in this , but taani has turned so stubborn .. she doesn't pay any attention nowadays to rey [in front of others and him]..

Ok.. I have written it as the song plays in the background and the situation moves with the song ….like we see in movies , like song being picturized with situation and Not someone singing it ….song in rose colour and situation in violet.. both goes hand in hand.. ok??

I have written in a hurry .. too busy these days my sweetu's .. I don't know whether its good or Bad .. didnt have time to think much … idea came like that situation playing along with song .. couldn't think much .. I just wrote it …please forgive if its bad …

And prassi , this is for you my dear .. I hope its upto your expectation….

Welcome to the official cremation ceremony of a beautiful song😆😆

Ok no more lecture Music ON girls… [press the play button or else refresh/reload the page again ..music will start from beginning] READ IT ONY WITH MUSIC .. ELSE IT WILL BE FULL ON BAD I AM SURE😆😆

Maula mera…..

[song starts ..Music ]

The entire gang were walking side by side through the narrow path in the jungle.. looking at either sides at the dense jungle…rinni and simmi in first row.. and in the back of them were swayam and Sharon[who are officially a couple now]….and neha and ashi and taani in the back row and at the back of them were Vicky,neil,amar , bharat and rey .. the boys were in their stupid talks about the density of the jungle ..while his eyes were all on her…

Maula mere maula mere …

the way she was looking around the dense jungle amused …arranging her curls behind her ears ….he walked along with the gang but his eyes were glued on her ….soon they reached some rocks and settled down… drinking water and sharing snacks …

His eyes were still on her ….

Ankehein teri……aaa

She was pointing to the top of a tree showing ashi some nest on the tree top…he was looking at her eyes and her face .. she was all excited …

Ankhein teri …itni haseen…..

she widened her eyes in joy seeing the small bird chicks …smiling .. she stood on top of the rocks tip-toeing on her toes to see the chicks more clearly….

ke inka aashiq mein ban gaya hoon ….

He couldn't take his eyes off her .. the way she was smiling joyfully…tip toeing on her fingers and showing ashi the bird nest…. her eyes seemed to twinkle in joy.. she was showing various expressions with her hands .. his eyeballs were glued at her

Mujhko basale .. inmein tu…

He had a smile on his face seeing her like that.. he closed his eyes.. raised his hands and clutched his hair..smiling to himself .. feeling her innocence and beauty…with the same smile he opens his eyes ..

Ishq hai….mula mere …maula mere…

He is still busy in adoring her while the gang is making plans to play hide and seek… boys oppose but girls fight up and makes them obey … while all this is going on ..


Ki Inakaa Aashiq, Mein Ban Gayaa Hoon
Mujhko Basaa Le, Iname Tu

he is still adoring her .. the way she is pouting .. frowning… smiling… he cant take his eyes off her .. while on the other hand the team decides to play hide and seek in groups of two .. a couple will be given the chance of finding the others .. those who hide will also be in couples as it can be dangerous going alone in the jungle.. swaron were given the chance of finding …

neha goes to Vicky and holds his hand and simmi goes to neil while amar goes near rinni and bharat near ashi.. all disperse to hide…

Mujhse Yeh Har Ghadi, Meraa Dil Kahe
Tum Hi Ho Usaki Aarzoo
He looks upto her expecting that she will go with him.. she also looks at him . but her face reflects anger …
Mujhse Yeh Har Ghadi, Mere Lab Kahe
Teri Hi Ho Sab Guftagoo

He extends his palm forward .. expecting her to keep her's on his ….and looks into her eyes… his eyes clearly showed his desire .. but she was still stubborn.. she looks onto his palm and then walks forward….

Baatein Teri Itni Haseen, Main Yaad Inko Jab Kartaa Hoon
Phoolon Si Aaye, Khushaboo

He withdrews his palm with a sullen face .. he remembers his cute and lovely old taani … he wishes if they moved back in time .. he imagines the old cute and bubbly taani …if it would have been the old taani , now, she would have came running and held his palm and drag him to hide excitedly…unknowingly he smiles imagining her and her antics…

music

But then he gets pulled out of his trance .. he sees her walking ahead of him.. not paying attention to him.. he too follows her .. they reach some rocks near a spring.. soon they hear swaron saying that they are coming to find them ….. taani looks around to find a place to hide..she looks on either sides …

Rakh Loon Chhupaa Ke Main Kahin Tujhako
Saayaa Bhi Teraa Naa Main Doon

He pulls her by her wrist and moved to a narrow space between two rocks .. the rocks were really close and there was just enough place for two persons to stand…being pulled all of a sudden , she looks at him in startle .. her wrist was still in his arms .. she stood staring into his eyes..

Rakh Loon Banaa Ke Kahin Ghar, Main Tujhe
Saath Tere, Main Hi Rahoon

Soon they hear sound of swaron near them .. .. taani sneaks slightly through the side of the rock and find Sharon standing near .. inorder to prevent Sharon from finding them , rey pulls taani close to him and he moves more into the back of the rock …

Zulfein Teri, Itni Ghani

He pulls her forward and she comes crashing to his chest…. Her hair spreads on his face and he closes his eyes…..

Dekh Ke Inako, Yeh Sochataa Hoon
he slowly opens his eyes.. and amidst the strands of her hair on his face , he gazes her….

Saaye Me, Inake Main Jiyoon

She slowly lifts her head from his chest and looks into his eyes.. he removes her hair slowly from his face..

Ishq hai….. maula mere..

She slowly steps back ..He clutched her by her lower arm and pulled her forward..

Ishq hai… maula mera ..

The water droplets from the spring near by came as a spray on her face and she closed her eyes …

Ishq haiii… maula mera

He slowly touches her face .. and slowly rubs the water droplets from her face .. she felt a shiver ran her spine….she clutched him hard on his shirt near his chest…

Maula mera maula mera maula mera muala mera.. ishq haiii…

He moves his fingers over her face.. she starts heaving …he couldn't see anything else at the moment , he could only see her .. he couldn't hear any voices at the moment .. he could only her her heavy breathing…

Dil Yahi Bolaa, Meraa… Dil Yahi Bolaa,Yaara

Raaj Yeh Usane Hai Mujh Par KholaaKi Hai

Ishq Mohabbat, Jiske Dil Mein
Usko Pasand Karta Hai Maulaa mera[2]

Lost in the aura .. he moves his face towards her ….she was still breathing heavily.. her heatbeats were accelerated feeling his hot breath on her skin..she quivers lightly and he grips her even strongly….she quivers and grips his shirt tightly .. he lowers his face towards her cheeks .. his hot breath seemed to burn her with desire …

Song fades

" taani… rey.. kahan ho tum donom??" swayams voice came like a bang pulling her out of her magical world immediately…she opens her eyes all of a sudden..

Silence behind the sound of the water from the spring could be heard…

Her hazel eyeballs dialated when she found her proximity with him.. his eyes were still closed .. his face , a centimeter away from her's … she was holding his shrit.. she couldn't believe…. She pushed him back harshly

"What are you doing Rey…??"… she shouted

He was startled …like being pulled out all off a sudden from a beautiful dream…

"taani .. rey.." Sharon called from near

Taani looked at rey with anger blazing in her eyes … " Sharon , we are here .. " she said and moved out from between the rocks …

"taa…" rey couldn't complete his call before that taani had moved to swayam and Sharon.. he gulped the lump that had formed in his throat …

She walked away towards the girls .. and he kept looking at her retreating back……

Behind , the sound of the water too had faded … the spring seemed to have lost its life ….he walked forward .. the dry leaves cried as his foot crushed them …. "coo..coo…" a dove cried from a near by branch .. he looked up towards it….another dove stepped from the nest to a branch near by …and turned its back towards the dove which was crying … "cooo.. cooo" the dove cried again ….but the second dove flapped its wings and flew up.. " coo… cooo .. cooo .. cooo" the dove cried again , calling back its partner .. but the other dove had flown high.. far .. far … a lone tear dipped from the brim of his eyes as he stood still at his position gazing at the single dove…

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Prassi darling .. I hope you liked it 😉.. yar romance and break up .. how can they go hand in hand … yet I tried it this way .. nothing else was coming in my stupid imagination… 😆hehe.. 😆shoryyy if its not upto ur expectation…


And now.. now my all dear friends .. both panda's and monkeys😆 hit Like and comment..and tell me how it was 😊

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-Fam_TaaReY- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipeee me first
sorry for late comment but I didn't read it before 😆😆
I complete reading it now ... 😛😛
It's amazing Indu 👏👏
loved it 👏👏
so beautifully written and the song selection is perfectly matching to the situation 😊😊
Rey adoring her
Then their hide and seek game 😃😃
They both together between a rock 😳😳 😳😳 😳😳
All the scenes were amazing 👏👏
last but not the least , the dove scene 👏👏 It was my favorite scene of this OS 😊😊 Loved it to the core of my heart 😊 😊😊 😊
And the dove situation match TaaRey situation perfectly 👏👏
Ending was very beautiful yaar 👏👏
Keep writing more and more like this 😊😊 😉😉
Love you 🤗
Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...i so loved it...it felt so nice wid d song...loved it alooott...it was so romantic😳...until u kill d mood ..😡😆n d end is sad😭..but d point is I LOVED IT..😉😃❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indu, I love the way u play the song in the background. I can easily imagine Taarey in the jungle so close to each other while Maula mera playing. I love it. Beauitfully written OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res. ! /Unres.

Omg !! .

Wonderful OS... 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
What a song.. ..Its my Favourite <3 <3

...I m speechless...about such an update 😆

A short,sweet nd magical OS.. ...

But The Ending..Broken My Heart... 💔

I loved the way u described the end with the heartbroken Dove... ..

We Monkeys are the best !!
Edited by Karan_TaaRey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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diduuu... i so am in love with u all over again and not to forget your doves.. ghosh u have dona phd on doves.. but seriously diduu.. i knew this would be ur style of writing.. but again.. ur predicted work looks unexpectedly exciting.. okk will add good font and colour and all when i come online via pc.. but cudnt cntrl when i read it... for me this os was a super se bhi uper wala os and the dove thing was its limelight.. luved it.. haaye dii u n ur mad but romantic imagination.. no doubt u r female yash chopra my mad dii.. eng chodd do.. u r a better screenplay writer..
Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry-2 very Sorry Bhua ji for a very-2 Late Reply :(

Koi Bhi saza chalegi... It was really very-2 romantic and touching story ... The song selection was awesome ... It touched my heart love you so much Indu... Thank you so much for a lovely story :)
Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG..so romantic☺️..extremely beautiful..👏

the description was awesome..Indu, you nailed it..

You have written this hurry..If you got the time then I could have blown out by the emotion of romance😳😃

Loved it!!

Thanks Pransanna for choosing this beautiful song...after all we Pandas rock nah!!!😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...it was so touching...
loved it di =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome.
loved the way you described there feeling

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