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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Randomly ran into your FF, and must say I am glad I did because I loved it. Your writing style is a breath of fresh air, the way Arnav and Khushi run into each other was quite clever. You have me all intrigued hope to read more of this Epiphany! Do continue soon :-)

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-Catharsis

@-Catharsis

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Ha! That was brilliant. I like a ill at ease Arnav. :P Continue soon. Or you know I'll spam

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Very interesting concept and superb start. Glad to see a Arnav different from ruthless, arrogant business man. All chapters were exceptionally well written and the way you describe things is really commendable. Great job and looking forward to read more...

PS: Sorry to mention but spelling of Epiphany in banner is wrong. I hope you can change it unlike me who cant change wrong spelling in her username for a year 😆😆

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I loved the way you are taking the pace of this story. Khushi lil apprehensive abt Arnav and Arnav trying to ease thesituation

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Ah you updated, what a nice treat! Yet another intriguing chapter, everything happens so naturally that one can't help but glue their eyes to their screens and keep on reading to see what transpires next. Khushi has a stranger living under their roof and she can't help but be skeptical hence checking his ID. Arnav on the other hand is quite amused with her behaviour, he is attracted yet he is being quite normal and polite being exactly how someone in his shoes should behave. So far from the story it appears as though Arnav found exactly what he needed in the comfort of this little family and on the other hand looks like Arnav's presence is also exactly what this little family needs, can't wait to see what you have in store for them next! :)

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears
Very interesting concept and superb start. Glad to see a Arnav different from ruthless, arrogant business man. All chapters were exceptionally well written and the way you describe things is really commendable. Great job and looking forward to read more...

PS: Sorry to mention but spelling of Epiphany in banner is wrong. I hope you can change it unlike me who cant change wrong spelling in her username for a year 😆😆

Thank you for mentioning. I have used this banner at so many places and yet never noticed. How embarrassing!😛 Now, I have to correct them all. Sigh! 😆

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Enchante

@Enchante

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Okay. The first thing that I noticed was the difference in the lexicon of Arnav and Khushi's part. The way you alternate is excellent unless you are outsourcing? :P

Now that part aside. I like Arnav. He's thoughtful and I'm sensing a bit of a playboy? Hmm thoughtful playboy. I wonder if that's an oxymoron. 😆

I like this awkwardness, more realistic then falling in his arms and in love the first time. I like the way you are taking this forward. Sometimes I feel that there are so many subtle hues to this while at others I think maybe I'm reading too much into it? And therein lies your skill. I like. I like.

Both of them are mature, yet many writers seem to think that with maturity you lose your sense of humor. I can see that you aren't one of them for which I'm glad. Continue soon hun. Waiting with breath abated. :P

Now, about the song- Give me a hug sister. Give me a hug. I never, ever understood the various cryptic meanings and allusions and what not that were attached to it. I heard this song in the Pakistani drama ZGH (i strongly recommend that you don't watch it😆) and the actor- Fawad Khan sang it in the serial making me positively giddy. I love guys who play the guitar. That is my only criteria, seriously. 😛

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Enchante

@Enchante

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

Thank you for mentioning. I have used this banner at so many places and yet never noticed. How embarrassing!😛 Now, I have to correct them all. Sigh! 😆

You're cute.😛

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

Thank you for mentioning. I have used this banner at so many places and yet never noticed. How embarrassing!😛 Now, I have to correct them all. Sigh! 😆

No dear, there's nothing to be embarrassed about it and you are fast as its already been changed 😃

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Enchante
Okay. The first thing that I noticed was the difference in the lexicon of Arnav and Khushi's part. The way you alternate is excellent unless you are outsourcing? :P

Now that part aside. I like Arnav. He's thoughtful and I'm sensing a bit of a playboy? Hmm thoughtful playboy. I wonder if that's an oxymoron. 😆

I like this awkwardness, more realistic then falling in his arms and in love the first time. I like the way you are taking this forward. Sometimes I feel that there are so many subtle hues to this while at others I think maybe I'm reading too much into it? And therein lies your skill. I like. I like.

Both of them are mature, yet many writers seem to think that with maturity you lose your sense of humor. I can see that you aren't one of them for which I'm glad. Continue soon hun. Waiting with breath abated. :P

Now, about the song- Give me a hug sister. Give me a hug. I never, ever understood the various cryptic meanings and allusions and what not that were attached to it. I heard this song in the Pakistani drama ZGH (i strongly recommend that you don't watch it😆) and the actor- Fawad Khan sang it in the serial making me positively giddy. I love guys who play the guitar. That is my only criteria, seriously. 😛

You are my soul sister. Seriously. Where were you all this time? But I have already watched ZGH so your recommendation comes late...sigh! It would have saved me so much time! But Fawad is hot and awesome and hot. ;)

Also, cheers to us lesser mortals who can't wrap heads around cryptic and frankly deliberately misleading songs. Power to us. (Y)

PS-Thoughtful playboy is definitely an oxymoron.😆

PPS- I know I'm cute. 😆 (And that's how you turn an insult into flattery)