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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

res

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i just now realized i resd here n i posted a comment in next page too...

chalo koi nai do do comment...

i loved their conversation...

continue soon:D

PS: i flunked in german...n thank god it was an audit course😳

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Now I really need to improve my German;))... lovely update.

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-Catharsis

@-Catharsis

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Love, love, love the update! Details later. :)

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Awesome update...why is arnav suffering from insomia????? Khushi arnav finaly maintained a comfortable talking...continue soon...thanx for pm

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Nice khushi and arnav conversing so easily and fluidly is just so nice to see.
Thanks for the pm!

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

great one! 😊
smooth talking stranger??...umm sounds nice!! but i didnt mind the previous one either..😉

lol. arnav thought it was arjun and that he was watching some adult stuff!! arent all boys the same??!! 😆

loved arnav khushi bonding in the update! looking forward to the next one...!

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baishali

@baishali

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

👍🏼

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

You gave me the fright of my life! When I started to read this the title said Epiphany and when I just looked up t was Smooth Talking Stranger! :-))

I really thought I had lost it :-)

What a wonderful FF... love the pace and the characterisations so far..

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Wow what a beautifully written chapter, as Arnav and Khushi were impressing each other with their language skills you were impressing us all with your writing skills! I am grinning from ear to ear, absolutely loved it! They are getting comfortable with eachother and that too at 3.50 am.😆 It appears as though you wrote this chapter particularly to suit the new tittle as both arnav and khushi were doing the smooth talking ;) I like I like 😃

Bring on the next chapter, appreciate the PM! 😊

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

I like this Arnav and Khushi too. Angst really isn't my forte and even from the limited number of works I've read on IF, I think many others are better qualified to justify that part of Arnav and Khushi far better than I ever could. I'll try writing about hate and such if I'm in an extremely sour mood but purely as an experiment. :P

Thank you for commenting. :-)

^^^ You are being very modest my dear with the skills you are exhibiting already I am sure you will be able to portray any kind of character because the subtle, mature and relate-able characters are much harder to pen down than the dramatized ones. (As you can gather I haven't been fond of some of the stuff that I have read😉)

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago