Paint it Red - Vignette collection [Completed] - Page 12

You are an awesome writer. Read each story.

Your analysis takes the show to a whole different level.

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Peering into their thoughts fleshed out each scene you described camouflaging the ludicrous

That's exactly why an attempt of this sort was made :=)

WOW RB. Yes I've come to this late but I have to say I loved your short synopsis of how the scene felt from either of ths two protagonists. I honestly feel there are few episodes where their true ability comes out. What annoyed me the most was how despite her being a mature person beyond her years she was often the comic side. What annoyed me more was the way Arnav treated her after the arrival of Arav.

If he was the shrewd business man he would have seen that this mere slip of a girl ( yes a girl of what 18? Indian at that) took on the responsibility of her foster family even though she was not a real daughter. Like him having to take the responsibility of Anjali, his horrid chachcha and the Raizada name whilst being a mere boy of 14. At least he had some money behind him, he also benefitted of an education. What did she have but she did it all the same. She was the one who realised that something was wrong during the kidnap story, she was the one who found him, she was the one who saved him, not once but twice.

But then again where she wears plimsoles to go and sort out Payal future inaws, but she decides to wear thes stupid slippers not even her leather mojari to go an trackdown the goons and free her husband!(😉 ) and manages to get her dress torn in the process how? Not to forget her miraculously cured hand in the barn scene... ooh I could go on... maybe we could statr a thread of all the lapses in continuity aswell as the sad writing😉

Fantastic work..ur vignettes had everything that the story writers missed

Read Red Dress. How fantastic. I don't think I should read all of it at once, this needs to be savoured slowly 😆

Hi there...just came across this series of vignettes.

These vignettes are awesome! Your portrayed very well the feelings that it's like watching a better version of these scenes! I wish Ipkknd was like your vignettes! Keep it up it's really wonderful!