FF: In another life - Chapter 7 (Part 2) updated

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Ratna and Shweta are the cutest MIL and DIL pair.. their conversation was really pleasant.

And through them you threw in bits and pieces of the Raizada's as a family ... very nicely written.

Arnav has changed over the years as per his mom... so what's the deal behind that ? Eager to know.

Their familiarity with the Gupta does not seem as a co incidence... or i am thinking too much.

Khushi i guess has been taken in by them as a foster family...

Cant wait to read more !😳

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srishti_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Wonderful chapter yet again! You have this wonderful ability to hold your readers to your stories, the twist of events, the turn of situations and the ever growing suspense never lets me relax. My mind keeps on thinking of reasons as to why a particular thing happened and I fail at it terribly. This story is so fascinating! I can't wait to read more of it! Please update soon. Thanks for the PM! 😊 😊

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thetelleroftale

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Posted: 12 years ago

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Wait its her hubby not ratna who is responsible for the calamity befallen on khushi

Or Ami getting confused

But what happened between the family

And what has that gotta do with khushi

Why did they think she died

And mannu reaction was bit extreme right

So confused but loved it

What was that dream about

Hmmm guess arhi Shall be making their entry soon huh

Cheers for pm

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Daam Girl your updates are too short or so i feel !

So the girl Gudiya is Khushi and Manorama knew she was not in that accident ...but the others were not aware about this fact.

What happened that night ????... whatever it is it still haunts Manorama in here nightmares ... gosh all these Raizada's are a mysterious bunch or what !

I want to read more !

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1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Thanks Disha for recommending this. Brilliant start. You are really good. Will finish reading and then comment. This is too interesting. I'll read all the parts and comment as I go on.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Is Manorama's husband responsible for the car crush of Khushi's parents...and how Khushi end up with Buaji...what is between Manorama and Ratna...too many questions...and just loving the way the story is moving forward...can't wait enough for the next part...

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Just resumed with it. Chapter 1 looks so promising and exciting to say the least. And I loved the narration and ofcourse Aman. I hope he is here to stay! =)

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bellacoolio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Hey I just found out that you started updating again. This is wonderful! The story so far is wonderful...the suspense is building up!

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Thats so wow! Chapter 2 had me hooked for its superb narration and suspense. You write so well! So there is this man Aniket, looking for Khushi. What are his interests and why.. The one s who murdered Kailash were the one s in prologue? Awesome!

PS- M a bit confused about timeline :|