Arhi FF: The Matchmaker #3

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: _disha_
Wow... this was quite a breakthrough wala update!
Arnav actually was able to let his guard down and converse with Khushi about his past. Thereby giving Khushi also a chance to know him better and realise where he is coming from.
The bitterness in their interactions has anyways gone down so this will only help them positively.

But with Shyam lingering in the background always make the atmosphere tense...the revelation of his dirty thoughts will only make Arnav hate marriage even more so again what role Khushi plays there will be interesting to note.

Leaving that the holi bits were super cute.. looking forward for some light hearted moments!

Ps: I dont know if i have mentioned earlier but i love the banner for this story ..it is beautiful and perfect.

Thanks Disha. Happy you liked it.😊

It isn't easy for a person like Arnav to share such personal and painful details with anyone...The fact that he was comfortable to bare his soul to Khushi says how much he respects her.

@ You are right. Shyam- Anjali's truth when it come out...would be hard for him to face.

I am glad you liked the holi bits along with the videos.

I am happy you loved the banner, Disha. It was a pleasant surprise from Mints. I absolutely loved it too. I agree, it is just perfect.😊

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: nishaipkkdian
Loved it. Loved the way he was looking for her in the middle of the night and found her in the pool side, asking her permission to join her and finally opened up with her found solace in her arms. Wonderful. After that night she was looking at him and he wondered what? Do we need to pay tax to look at Arnav Singh Raizada? Lol. Actually that one of my favorite dialogs.
About the holi part, I loved every part of except the creep Syam part.

Thanks Nisha. I am happy you loved it.😊

@ bold, It was one of a kind, wasn't it? I just love that scene.😛

I am happy you liked the holi bits too.

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: Afya

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it. 😊

He indeed has opened his soul to her...let out his dark secrets.

I hope I live up to your expectations on Tuesday. I want to move the story fast. That is why I decided to try and write extra updates every now and then.

Thanks dear I really appreciate your commitment and dedication there are very few like you who reply to the comments and I am really touched with your gesture.

Coming to the story I have always told you that I loved it and I mean it . I always wait for your update and as soon as I get your PM I keep all the work aside and will read it .

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: ashw99
Beautiful updates afya...
again one of my favorite scene tax wala.
Loved the beginning, Arnav's breakdown infront of khushi, atleast sharing his pain with khushi might relieve him a bit.
His chacha was such a filthy and rude man he didn't even think once throwing them out.
But i felt your version of their past more convincing then what we saw, i mean a mother with two children solely depending on her would just abandon them, thinking of her cheat husband and suicide.
I really appreciate you showed her strong and responsible towards her children.
Khushi and Arnav both drunk so we can wait for some passionate rabba vees coming next, oh wait before that i forgot there a snake roaming around with some filthy thoughts, but i trust you to take care of him.
aww how many times i'll say this Holiii again my favorite scenes.
haaa tuesday not very far thanks girl will wait : )

Thanks dear. I am happy you liked it.

I love the tax wala scene too.

@ bold, neither did he think twice before showing a 12 year old boy intimate pictures of his dad with another woman.

I am glad I could write a convincing past. I did not like the one they showed in the show either. There were too many gaps and too many things that did not make sense.

@ red bold, there were some already in this update..

I want to move this story along quicker too. So, I will try and squeeze in some extra updates whenever i can. 😊. Glad you are enjoying it.

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: narcy24
So...he felt that he can trust Khushi...she knows now the truth behind his rejection at the concept o marriage...
They talked and she felt his pain...I'm glad that he shared it...

The holi fast is here...I missed this scenes between Arnav and Khushi...both of them drank bhang...lets see what happens next...

Arnav cares for her...I hope you bring them together...no more Shyam misunderstanding...

But it's your story...so...surprise me...

Wonderful update...Thanks for PM.

@ bold, Yep...and finally...he felt comfortable enough to bare his soul to her.

Shyam has made his entry, dear. So, he will have a part...How that will unfold and how that will affect Arnav-Khushi, you will know in time.

And Arnav and Khushi will come together too...but the journey is important for them to form the everlasting bond.

Thanks for appreciating. I am glad you liked the update.

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Thanks Mints for such a lovely feedback. And I am happy you loved it. 😊

Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham😆! That bad, huh?😉 Just kidding.

I am glad you liked their conversation, Mints. That part is very important in this story and I wanted to get it right.

what brilliant dialogues were there in IPK... 'ASR ko dekhne ka bhi tax lagta hai kya??' 😆

You are so right, Mints. Some dialogues were just superb and this was one such. Loved how amused he is when he hears it.😆

Barun!! Come back!! We love you and miss you... and they way he talks about Khushi... 'Uski aankhein, uske baal...' Awww... 'thodi pagal hai par cute hai'...

Barun cute toh main bhi hoon... mujhe bhi thoda nachao!! 😉

I agree! I miss him on screen. He was such a delight to watch.

You are indeed cute, Mints. You just have to shout from the roof top near his house to get his attention.😆. Just make sure his wife isn't around😛

All-in-all... this was a brilliant update Afya... and as usual I am going to say like a stuck record... that the simplicity of your writing is the beauty of it... 👏

Thanks Mints for your kind words. Like I told you earlier, I can't do complex.😳

And besides, all my writing is so last minute. I sit up a few hours before the deadline to decide what the chapter will be about and write it. So, I don't get time to improvise.

@Blue... I agree Afya... his past is a very important part of his present...So Khushi needed to know that to understand him and his behavior better... I am glad atleast because of their comfort level now he has opened up to her...

@Red.... You know actually if I was mad enough I would have done that... I live in Mumbai... and forget his wife... will have to make sure my husband never comes to know about it!! He already thinks I am half insane.. 😛

@Green.... Well, frankly I am glad you don't do complex... because I never understand them! 😉

And its bloody brilliant that you can write updates like this... I wish I could... I have things planned for the next 10 updates in my head... and its all a chaos there because I don't have the time to sit and write... drives me insane... more than I am already!! 😳

Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Good. Shyam's plan is foiled now..

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

nice update

so arnav opens about his past

a bond is started to from between khushi and arnav

loved the holi scene ,it was one of my favorite in IPK

thanks for the pm and video update

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

Beautiful update
Arnav share his past with Khushi

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: Ashavi
loved the update...so vl either one of them confess their feeling for them...felt bad after knowing his past...so nw Khushi knows the reason of his behaviour...
i guess Shyam's prank vl lead for Arshi 2 have wonderful moment...
update soon...

Thanks Ashavi. I am happy you loved it.

You will have to wait for the next update to get the answers.😉 Hopefully I will update on Tuesday.

Shyam's plan has so far backfired...He still hasn't been able to steal a moment alone with her.