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Posted: 12 years ago
Super cute update..thx for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
both of them are getting comfortable with each other
sharing their thoughts with each other
awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Darn...I missed it, again 😔
Res

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This time, I promised myself, I would catch up with my comments earlier!😳
Thanks for the PM, Afya--really appreciate it!😊
Loved this first scene very much...initially when I read the update, I was too tired to appreciate all the little details that you managed to insert here. After a good night's sleep, I re-read it again, slowly'...and I must tell you--this was well -written---very much so...👍🏼 I loved the fact that they have a heart to heart conversation, like two sensible, mature individuals...no fighting. I loved the fact that Arnav has come such a long way, that he opens up to Khushi about his past... the most painful memories of his life- a family shattered and broken- I felt really sad for the little Arnav here😭. Now it becomes clearer why he is so closed off...why he does not believe in love, in marriage...the bitter painful experience of his mother. Having his illusion of a happy family broken at such a young age...Poor baby!😭

I loved how he unconsciously seems to look for her, almost all the time... His concern, that she was not around...finally I loved how they are so comfortable with each other now- slowly growing so---sitting down by the poolside...together, looking at the night sky, in perfect amicable silence..at first.👏

I loved how he knows she must be emotionally stressed with all that had been happening. I loved how he is appreciating how much she is doing for his sister. They make conversation- just little common-place things at first... like any normal husband and wife.😊
Then Arnav's "thank you" -- sincere and heartfelt, really goes a long way in making Khushi feel appreciated- it must have been unexpected for her, perhap? But Arnav has realized the invaluable support and comfort she had given his sister. Loved how the fiercely proud Khushi, reciprocates with her "Thank you"- for all the help that he had given her father and her family. I loved how she admitted that she had misunderstood him and had realized that Arnav had just made all the arrangements for their best interests. I loved how Arnav opened up to her- so honestly..so much pain. He has finally found someone whom he can share it with...the recent events, the emotional burdens finally are too much to bear-causing his feelings, thoughts to pour out...and perhaps, this is a long overdue process of catharsis for him..a necessary step on the path to healing old wounds? 👍🏼

I loved how Khushi tried to comfort him ---the first time that she physically touches him of her own accord.😊 I loved how she mentions his mother -- recollecting the positivity of the lady, her strength and her memories. Khushi is now more understanding of how he felt- she hates having to cause pain to anyone - hates being the cause of his tears, by making him remember the past..
I really liked the morning after scene- some of the IPK scenes seem tailor made for this story - I loved how you are using them here...👏and then'...life goes on'... 😊

Afya, its really wonderful how you weave office scenes into the story-such a refreshing change--the way you show that Arnav does work and he is running a business!'👏
So now, Arnav has two men Friday? Aman, of course...and now Prateik!!!!😆🤣

Things have changed too for Arnav, surely...".He couldn't wait to get home..."
Wonder why????😉

HOLI -- all of us have loved IPK Holi and I do not think, we will ever see anything like it, ever again!!! I am enjoying reliving IPK scenes through your story'...Loved your description of the activities at home, preparing for the festivities.

And Arnav true to form, decides to go off to work, rather than join in the celebrations!!!!
His exhaustion when he returns home, does not go unnoticed by Nani or Khushi- I really liked how Khushi knows his preferences and habits by now and doesn't hesitate to get him coffee. At the same time, I loved how he naturally asks her for water instead.
Anjali expects that Arnav will be around for Holi, since it's Arnav and Khushi's first Holi after marriage...he makes a concession, 😃although he still won't participate, he will be around, he says!!!😉

I really liked the little brotherly teasing scene with NK-Arnav- makes it so much more of a family scene...nice touch! Arnav is not jealous of NK???😲That is a welcome change, too!👏

Loved your Holi, Afya---Arnav seeing his crazy wife, making bhang...hearing her crazy banter ... leaves him with a smile for her innocence and craziness- the lighter playful side to her that had probably been suppressed under the strain of their marriage. Unhappy
👏
And Shyam'.hmmm'.is he to be the catalyst here too, in getting Arnav and Khushi together? So now he does manage to get Khushi drink Bhaang? His nasty evil thoughts ... instead of sparing a thought for his wife who had just gone through such personal tragedy, he is eyeing another woman!!! And that too his brother-in law's wife!😡
😡😡
I hated his glee when he saw her drink all the bhang and honestly hope, Arnav rains on his parade!!!!😡

Anjali seems to be the one who will cause the rain on Shyam's parade though. She gets her brother drunk on Bhaang too😃

And that last scene was the icing on the cake'...👏

Loved his shy bemused smile when he spots his lovely wife dancing, the way he cannot take his eyes off her, his dreamy gaze, his slow walk up to her- them lost on each other- the way they speak with their eyes, and that twirl-she, dancing again, almost as if just for him!! Superb!!! 👏

I loved Barun and Sanaya here---I think they were perfect!!! Loved how his possessiveness surfaces...yup, Arnav, you are a goner now!!! You are truly, madly, deeply...falling in love with your wife!!!😆 Loved how he realizes she is missing, even though he is intoxicated. I loved how he senses she is not there, how he starts looking for her...
The possibilities...😳

Looking forward to the next update
So you are back to Tuesdays and Saturdays!!! Great!!!
Thanks for letting us relive IPK through your story, Afya!
Have a great week!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this update. nice to see arnav opening up and sharing his sorrowful past with Khushi. Also nice to see him being protective of Khushi when some guy was trying to dance with her, He came for holi to be around Khushi. He may not admit it yet, but he's not gonna be able to let go of Khushi and has already fallen deeply in love with her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update beautifully written





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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
Arnav is cute.
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Res

I loved it...completely

Loved him wondering where she was and then finding h by the pool joining her and both seem relaxed and comfortable with each around...which was nice to see .
loved his appreciation for her and telling her how grateful he was and how di's recovery was so fast mainly due to her, loved how she tells him that she considers di as her sister too...loved how she thanks him for babuji and his treatment, and apologises for her earlier behaviour realising how it had benefitted his health ...loved how he enquiries about babuji's health... and then loved his opening up to to her, her concern and asking him about his past and what makes him feel that he could never be a good husband...
Loved the past you wrote it beautifully, I felt his pain and anguish and wanted to hug him...loved how she realises his pain and tells him he does not need to continue, but am glad he does and tells her everything about his father's betrayal, his mothers heartbreak, his convincing and greedy uncle's plans and conspiracy to evolve the secretary...his father's death them being thrown out...and a quick and tragic end to their perfect world or as they thought...as a child being exposed to those photographs and his mothers tears and the deceit would be taken a toll on him.
The trauma of the events taking away the innocence of a young boy making him grow up way before his time, and hardening him and robbing him of emotions and trust...and the ability to see goodness in people...
This so explains his thought process...it fits like a puzzle ...him offering K money, not able to understand what she stands to gain from their marriage if it was not money she wanted...

Loved the video from the morning after, so apt...she finally understands the circumstances and had no idea of the amount of grief and pain he had been hiding...and she resolves to help him in anyway she can...

Loved how you also let us into his work and he is not shown at home whole day...having to rescheduled things to accommodate di and his anxiousness to get back home...positive change!
Loved how she is surprised at him asking her so causally to get water, like they have a normal relationship finally!
Loved how everyone things he is been working too hard the last few weeks and want to see him enjoy some time off...and happy that he will be around for holi...
Loved the hustle bustled around the house for the holi celebration and their decision to continue with their plans for Holi...and him unable to run off this time like he has been doing every years since his mothers death, due to Di...

Loved Khushi and NK, their familiarity and easy relationship ...despite being different the brothers shared a great rapport and Khushi with NK, their craziness making Aranv smile...

Loved how seeing her he is mesmerised ...as she Shyam but don't want to dwell on him on this arshilicious update...but hate his plan to make her apply colour on him and or get her drunk and spend time with her...am counting on Arnav to ensure it backfire...
Loved the Holi video and how he stares at her and suddenly stops realising, but his heart is definitely going dhak dhak for the most beautiful girl he has seen...
Loved how they both drink the bhang unknown to her and loved how he admits to Di that she is beautifuuul...and goes on to describe her, this has got to be one of my favourites and loved how you used it here, I loved how the almost kiss scene is also here,did you add it or was it always a part of that scene? It was brilliant...loved how the update ends with him jealous and angry for the guy in the crowd from touching his wife...loved that he is seeing her as his wife and feeling possessive about her...have waited for him to develop these feelings for a while now...
Waiting anxiously for the next, this was one of your best parts I think...loved it Afya...you nailed it!


Thanks Vandana for such a beautiful and reassuring feedback. I let out a sigh of relief after reading your feedback. Thanks for the quick one. 😊

I guess now you know why I didn't show Arhi interaction in the last update. I wanted Arnav to feel comfortable enough to open his heart to her.

The trauma of the events taking away the innocence of a young boy making him grow up way before his time, and hardening him and robbing him of emotions and trust...and the ability to see goodness in people...
You have understood him so well, Vandana. I am so glad I was able to bring that across.

I am happy you loved the videos. The holi episodes of IPKKND were so beautiful. I could not resist using some of them.😳


Loved how they both drink the bhang unknown to her and loved how he admits to Di that she is beautifuuul...and goes on to describe her, this has got to be one of my favourites and loved how you used it here, I loved how the almost kiss scene is also here,did you add it or was it always a part of that scene?
It was part of the scene, Vandana. As they have the rabba ve, they recollect some past intimate scenes. There was one other scene (teri meri) they recollect in this that I edited out.

Thank you Vandana for your kind words. I am happy you loved it. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23

Res!! 😊

Haha! Thanks Afya for resing for update...
I would have been out at 5... Now I get to be on the first page!! 😉

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Afya!!! I just loved the update... it was so beautiful... it had a little bit of everything... Kabhi Khushi kabhi Gham... Truly coming back home after a tiring day and reading this makes very happy!

To begin with... the first part of the update was totally awesome... I love the comfort that Arnav and Khushi share this night... Where they can sit comfortably besides each other... Liked the fact that Arnav was worried for Khushi as she was sitting up so late in the night... wondering if everything was ok with her. I liked the fact that he acknowledged and thanked Khushi for taking care of Anjali... She really had been her support system in the past few weeks... 😊

And then she thanked him for arranging the best treatment for her babuji... Then finally she managed to ask him the question she had been meaning to ask for a long time... and he does not deny her... Loved the fact that he bared his soul out to her... about his tragic past... I felt so sorry for him... Afya, as I always say you narrate the story to well... it just makes me feel as if I know the character personally... It was so good to see their bond strengthen... even if those two do not realize it yet... Btw I love that morning scene where Khushi just stares at Arnav... what brilliant dialogues were there in IPK... 'ASR ko dekhne ka bhi tax lagta hai kya??' 😆

And then the crazy Raizada family and their Holi preparations... Its so good to see Anjali coming back to her normal self... NK is stupid and sweet... I love the complete Holi episode of IPK... so this was like a beautiful memory coming alive... Hate Shyam spoiling it though... Just hate him... They way Arnav looks at Khushi with those caramel eyes... Hayye!! What to do?? Barun!! Come back!! We love you and miss you... and they way he talks about Khushi... 'Uski aankhein, uske baal...' Awww... 'thodi pagal hai par cute hai'...
Barun cute toh main bhi hoon... mujhe bhi thoda nachao!! 😉

All-in-all... this was a brilliant update Afya... and as usual I am going to say like a stuck record... that the simplicity of your writing is the beauty of it... 👏


Thanks Mints for such a lovely feedback. And I am happy you loved it. 😊

Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham😆! That bad, huh?😉 Just kidding.

I am glad you liked their conversation, Mints. That part is very important in this story and I wanted to get it right.

what brilliant dialogues were there in IPK... 'ASR ko dekhne ka bhi tax lagta hai kya??' 😆
You are so right, Mints. Some dialogues were just superb and this was one such. Loved how amused he is when he hears it.😆

Barun!! Come back!! We love you and miss you... and they way he talks about Khushi... 'Uski aankhein, uske baal...' Awww... 'thodi pagal hai par cute hai'...
Barun cute toh main bhi hoon... mujhe bhi thoda nachao!! 😉
I agree! I miss him on screen. He was such a delight to watch.
You are indeed cute, Mints. You just have to shout from the roof top near his house to get his attention.😆. Just make sure his wife isn't around😛

All-in-all... this was a brilliant update Afya... and as usual I am going to say like a stuck record... that the simplicity of your writing is the beauty of it... 👏
Thanks Mints for your kind words. Like I told you earlier, I can't do complex.😳
And besides, all my writing is so last minute. I sit up a few hours before the deadline to decide what the chapter will be about and write it. So, I don't get time to improvise.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Wow amazing update.



So Arnav has shared his past with Khushi . Arnavji great going. Holi was amazing I am waiting for Tuesday

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it. 😊

He indeed has opened his soul to her...let out his dark secrets.

I hope I live up to your expectations on Tuesday. I want to move the story fast. That is why I decided to try and write extra updates every now and then.

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