SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Heya marium 🤗

What should i say now am speechless yaar

But still i luv to give big comment on my most favourite work

It was awsum amazing zabaradast out of this world just perfect

I luved it alooot se bhi bohat zyada

U know sumtyms toh i think ke zitna bhi try kerlo saare writer likhte likhte story ko common ker dein ge but aapki story toh hamesha different hoti hai

This part was sooo adorable i have no words i mean the they were just laying on the bed hugging each other is sooo adorable

Lol u always put one hillarious part in ur update which makes me laugh lyk sharon's mom part 🤣 r u serious i mean stupid, jerk-ish, lame, manner-less this was sooo funny

Awww luved swayam's cute angry pouts cant stop imagining them

And then in the end i feel lyk sumthing serious gonna happen

I hope aapke 10 pages jaldi complete hojayein

And i think i will be able to read ur aagey ka work after 14th october becoz i will be bxy wid exams and will not be using internet😭

Never mind i will read them later and will comment on each and every work INSHALLAH

Plzzz update next part sooon and plzzz dont stop sending me pm plzz plzz plzzz

Thanx for the pm

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Reserved
Unreserved amazing update marium loved it to the core.. It was classic..❤️.
Sharon's corrupt thoughts the moment swayam switched off the light kaha ki kaha pahuch gayi woh..😆. Then the talk between sharon's mom and herself was good and her mother has already expressed her displeasure towards swayam poor guy..😛.
The teasing bit where sharon knowingly tells her mother to elaborate things so that she could tease swayam and his reactions were cute I can imagine the pout..😳.
Then the heart to heart talk where swayam actually conveys what he feels for her and what are his feelings around her that part was lovely and the kiss only made that moment special..😊.
Then swayam's monologue where he expresses his guilt that he loves her but his does'nt love her yet he is in a pretty confused state.. I hope things get clear ASAP between them fingers crossed..😃.
Guys let's start spamming I want an update for this FF ASAP its my favourite..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

yes yes yes...finally updated

i was so waiting for this one

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unres

Loved the beginning wer sharon's mom scolds swayam...😆it was too gud..specially swayam's cute reactions...😳

and then the rest of the chapter was beautifull as well...

their kiss and the way they slept hugging each other and swayam's confusion...

were just awww😳

all of them were amazingy penned👏

Edited by -Chaitra- - 11 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Beautiful updatesach a fab wrk

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Shanaya Patel

@shanaya_shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

wow this chappy is so romantic😛😛

sharon and her mom's convo😊👏

swayam's feelings greatly conveyed😆😉

her mom calling swayam jerk...oh poor swayam

swaron's kiss...its hot😳😳

waiting for next part eagerly😊

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Awesome update 😊

Sharon's mother saying Swayam stupid😆

Loved the way u penned Swaron's emotions towards each other

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

finally you updated i hav been sendin you requests

tis ff is1 of my fav ff

swayam hearin his mother-in-law's view about himself 😆

swayam's feelings were conveyd beautifully

do update soon n dont forget 2 pm me 🤗

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

This was one of the best updates I must say!!❤️
U r one talented girl!!

Beautifully written..
The way u wrote this..I could actually feel the emotions..!

Really ahmazing Marium..!!
I so wish I could write like this!!

I loved it..n there's no doubt in it!!😊

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

mindblowinggg updateee👏

well-written👏

lovedd ittt😊

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

marium you are awesome yaar..
totally awesome update..
loved sharon n her mom convo..it was hilarious..
n best part was swayam thought in between🤣
poor swayam,her future would be mother in law think him as stupid,
jerk-ish, lame, manner-less 😆🤣
hope soon he change her thought ;)
swaron moment was amazing..
swayam is such a confuse soul about sharon n making me one too😆
plz update soon..
n thanks for the pm :)
Ps : All the ff you mention in your note was really amazing stories n i follow all of them already..
but you are so sweet to mention so that other too can know..so nice of you😃