SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Kaise kaise I mean how can u easily right such complicated stories...u pennies down motherly talk , confused lovers talk, with so much ease. ...I m liking this story and to wait for next Thursday ... arghhh

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Awesome update 😊

Swayam confessed his love

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Comment edited on page number 27!!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

no words to describe it was wonderful and outstanding...
the enter chapter was loveable and sweet ... do continue soon and pm me...

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

ohkay didu...
i knoe aap gussa hogi...
i didn't comment on the last update ...furthur more im commenting so late...
so kill me aapki har saza manzoor h mujhe...after all meri idol ka hukm salakho par...😆
im really sorry exams chal rahe the so i couldn't comment...
but m speechless...everytime aap kuch bhi likhti ho...
i mean koi bhi itta accha kaise likh sakta h...😕
n u again proved me right...ki no one can be better than my fanfiction queen...she'z the best...😳
so keep writing...and jaldi jaldi update karna m waiting...
promise ab ye galti nai hogi...
about the updates...no comments...ur the best...and they were enchanting...
supa khoool and feakingly awechumm...
I love u...and m eagerly waiting for the pm...

P.S - i know aap gussa ho but doesn't mean u won't pm me...
next time don't frget to pm me...

love,
Ur anny...

Edited by anandita - 12 years ago

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

here before pm

btw y do u send pms so late??

anyway coming to the update

wow ur really great ya👏 even with the word limit you gave so many scenes aur woh bhi itne acchhe...dats amazing😉

now wat does swayam mean by i love you but am not in love with you?? dats weird of him...

and after dat he kissed her on cheek😳 now dats sweet...

your cutely stupid weirdo alpha will make me crazy

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Trushna

@swaronland

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

I am going to tell u the truth😳 tell me am i abnormal if i read ur ff at My Working place😳😳 i.e not any office but its "THE COURT"😲😆😉

thank god no one saw me smiling like stupid person🤪

there is nothing more to tell u😛

thanks for pm😊

plz update soon😉

Edited by swaronland - 12 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

wolfy grin marium:D

----and there is hardly any doubt that you are an alpha writer.

i enjoyed this. unique----and howlooo!!!

i know---i wont take a bad joke too far:D

love---medha

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vrushan11swaron

@vrushan11swaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

wowww... this is awesomm...
ur story is relyyy guf..
swaron 😳
update nxt part soon

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Anindita91
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Aahh loved the bonding between sharon and her mother. ⭐️ She was so scared to lose her daughter. 😃 Their conversation was amazing. 👏 The way sharon said to mom that swayam is her mate and ran away from there was really cute. N her mom is right, she indeed is fragile. 😳
Oh my god, swayam and rey fighting like monkeys and its result. Swayam shirtless and rey bottomless. 🤣
Wow, now that's something really interesting that they are so open about being werewolves and everyone in shimla accepts them and the girls are excited for the party. Great. 😎
Eeeps really did i read it right? Swayam finally confessed his feelings. Yippee. 🥳
Awe he said he sees something in her eyes which he sees in his mother's eyes when his mother looks in his father's eyes. N that's love. Wow.
But sharon said she doesn't love him. 😒 That's understandable, she is afraid. 🤔
Awwiee he kissed her. 😲 Awesome. I am sure sharon will go to the party. *finger crossed*. 😳
Will be waiting for next Thursday. Awesome update Marium. 👏 👍🏼

Glad, you liked mother scenes because unlike CV's i didn't wanted to show ke yeh sab lawaris hain! Because CV's haven't showed anyone's parents besides Swayam's and i feel like they all are orphan!

Thank youuu for the comment! 😃