SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Rajeshwari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

swayam ne confess kar diya!!

yay!!

so unexpected!

nd the bond between sharon nd her mom is so beautiful!

the fisht between reyam was also penned well!!

nd he kissed her!! aww!!!

i hope sharon goes to the party!!

waiting for next thursday!!

fantabulous update!!

thanks for the pm;D

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Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Oo Woww I loved the update:-D:-D
Swayam and Rey's fight omg🤣🤣
Superb job:-):-):-)
Waiting for next chappy:-):-):-)

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

awesome update👏
loved sharon n her mom bond..
reyam part was hilarious🤣
loved their bond also..
finally swayam confess yipee[<:-p]
swayam's birthday party n sharon najaya impossible right😃
aww swayam kissed sharon😳
excited for next update..
thanks for the pm :)

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Lubna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

sorry for the late reply!!

i just read both chapter 2 and 3...

and both were great!!!

the power of these wolves are amazing!!!

loved the reyam fight!!

that was hilarious!!

and i also loved how you made sharon!!

she is weak but she knows very well how to be strong!!!

and my god she is soo strong!!!

she talking back to swayam so easily!!!

I love it!!!

awesome updates!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!!

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

AWESOME UPDATE 😊

VERY WELL WRITTEN

U R A AWESOME WRITER

I HAVE READ ALL OF UR WORK THERE SIMPLY GREAT ,OUT OF THIS WORLD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

UPDATE SOON WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER 😊😊

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Really amazing update!!
Luv ur works..this one is my fav!!❤️
Swayam turned 18!!😳
Now let's c wat happens at the party!!;)

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Marium maarna mat 🤓
I know last update didn't had my comment, sorry bolke mei tera bheja fry nhi krna chahti, isliye seedhe line pe aake comment kr rhi hu.

Last update was superb, rocking in every sense man *_*
Confrontation! Ah, total bliss.
And this wolf mate thing is building up my curiosity in each passing update of yours.
The way he can make her obey him but the territories differ and here is where the problem beguns.
The wire touchy affair was scary! But hah, alphaa is here so no fear and oh not to foreget no scars! 😎😆
Beta thing is super interesing, i took it in a fun sense and came out rofliin' 🤣
Aao beta aaao aaj kya khaoge? Arre tum nhi beta woo waala betaaa 🤣🤣
This is sooo confusing but 🤣🤣
Why i turn so OTP excited at your FF's while commenting 😕 I dunno 🤔
Oke now i will seriously comment on rest of the things.
The next update was having so many happenings, sharon telling her mom about all this and i liked the way natasha ran, lol!
And then mother daughter talk was nice n relaxing.
Then the invitation thing, like seriously its difficult to control for wolves when they turn 18?!
Well it can turn quite difficult for them.
But now they have confessed 😃
Swayam knows how sharon feels and vice versa!
Last part was heaven to think of.
She as a wolf turned around deep down in the forest and swayam looking at her intently standing in the corner of a classroom
So precisely you write and explain things, so perfect and above all the concept makes it soo amusing for us to read further.

Looking forward to comment on the next. 😛