*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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please6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

so arnav wasn't cheating on khushi and he was hurt that she didnt trust him but when the time was needed for him to be with her he was awe that was so nice anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: wiwy

I am so happy you liked it Meri Soni⭐️ Meri Tamanna❤️
Jhooth nahi hai Arhi ka Pyaar🤗 😉

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mutermuter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: wiwy

Hey thanks for your lovely comments mm!😃🤗
Thanks for the above edit!⭐️ Arshi in RM, bag in hand...hmmm...Is this the last scene of my story?😉😛

hey thankyou dear😃 pleasure is all mine

n 👏👏 no don't even think of ending your story ,i would love to read more n more of it👏

its really different and good too👏

hai you made my day 😳

🤗🤗

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Wiwee, I loved this chaaapter. 😃Arnav had already broken up with La. 😉 Khushi has an accident, ouch. 😕 But, Arnav came running for her. 😳 And, now rain hug. 😊 Barsaat mein humse mile tum sajan, tumse mile hum, barsaat mein, tak dhina dhin. 😆

So, Anjali was checking Khushi's reaction. Smaaart womaan. 😉 Arnav broke up with La, the day he met Khushi, really? So, was it because of Khushi or was he planning to do that anyway? Or, was he thinking about it, but after meeting Khushi, he finalised his decision?

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-MKM-

@-MKM-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Gr88 update..
can't wait for the next update...
Thanks for the pm...😊

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Throne

@Throne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

Loved it!

The accident was unexpected but by the end I realized necessary!

waiting for more...

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Aww...Very cute update...

I really hope Khushi is fine...

Do continue soon! !

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Loved it...wow...arnav so caring n concerned...hope khushi doesn't say anything stupid ...n again end up fighting...

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IssK.

@IssK.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#889

Uff Wiwy! Maar daala!! Restlessness chalega big time. Fikar not. And you really are a serious, effortless writer, aren't you? Aapko pataa hai na?!
My favorite bits:
Khushi was punching furiously at the elevator button

Arnav stared at her for a few seconds nonplussed. Then something floated up in his eyes.

When the lift reached the ground floor he walked out, hands in his pocket, his face stern without so much as glancing at her.

She acknowledged the voice within her that told her she wanted to be alone with him.

Disappointment formed a painful lump in Khushi's throat.

They stood hugging each, a thunder raging within them, making them oblivious to the storm outside.

Kya baat hai! 👍🏼 Bahut impressiya madam bhickeds!! They flow so smooth and easy, your thoughts!

Aur ye 👏👏...