*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

edited...

Awesome...Awesome...Awesome...

love it totally...

loved it when she felt jealous

loved it when he said he left lavanya the day he met her

loved it when she asked him about lavanya with all right

loved it when he showed his concern for her even when he was angry...

loved it when she cried hearing his voice(I believe that people cry in front of the people they love the most. I too cry over phone only when I listen to my Mom's voice otherwise pretend to be Jhansi Ki Rani😆 )

Loved it when he came running to her, leaving all his work

loved it when they hugged...

update was awesome but chhotu😭

continue soon:)

I need to brush up my stalking skills😆

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

Originally posted by: wiwy

I need to breathe...

I need to update...very soon!

I need you guys...thanks for being there!

🤗

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will always be there for each other!! glad you found time to update. I need this!!!

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

Wiwy, Just loved it...so intense. And his panic!!! It shows how much he cares! Sigh... thanks now commence to the next chapter!

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Lovely wiwy

Thnx for taking time for the update...Take it easy

Grabbers

-Khushi's jealousy and restlessness over his gf

-His anger over her thinking ill about him as usually

-Anjali's hide and seek

-His ignorance yet making Anjali to call her to make sure she is fine

-RAIN HUG

Just lovely...I like this Arnav as he is way caring and come out of his self imposed anger quickly

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melonie

@melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

Hi,

Thanks for the PM :)

Beautiful update. So Arnav and La used to date and now everything is good.

Anjali can be so sneaky sometimes 😆

I loved how Arnav rushed to her and held her close. Can never get enough of that "tum teek ho" dialogue. So beautiful ❤️

Waiting to know what happened to "the bed".

Pls cont soon...

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: salooni
res wa

lovely dear
i not imagine this
twist
for sure
editing is so beautiful
and arnav
was rockstar today

loved it
thanks a lot