*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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bellacoolio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Hilarious! The bond has arrived...

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tparvaiz

@tparvaiz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Awesome update.

Khushi escape first n second time Arnav didn't let her escape
Mamiji is 007 James bone 😉
Arnav is big and strong enough for break bed.
Khushi 😲 n Arnav is 😉

Wanna to read more can't wait 4 next update.
Please continue soon dear.
Thanks for mp me. 😊

Question is how Khushi's gonna oescape arnav
Or both will start feeling towards eachother. ?...?????

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Hilarious update with an overdose of hottness!

Will he do what we are thinking!

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: cheesemad
res...
glad i checked before sleeping:)
feeling sleepy will edit it tomorrow:)

I dint know you were stalking me, Komal!!😆 🤗

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

That's ramanchi.

how can you end like this!

what he gonna do? will he kiss her? No I, hate this cliff hanger.

So the lady from the store is actually arnav's mami! Hmm she must be thinking Khushi is Arnav's girl friend.

Interesting.

can't wait for the next chapter.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Haye arnav shirtless and in a towel!!!!
Why wiwy why would you stop there

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zeedia

@zeedia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Awesome...loved it
Waiting for the next part ;)

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Awesome 😊 update soon 😳

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

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Posted: 12 years ago

#499

EXCELLENT, AWESOME, LOVELY UPDATE...

Arnav, Khushi, Aanjali, Mama- Mami, u have written about everybody & everything so well; it gives me crave 4 long update. " YEH DIL MAANGE MORE."

U don't believe it while reading last scene between Arnav & Khushi some "CURRENT"pass through my body; just by reading it u feel THE EMOTIONS of them. so very well & beautifully written chapter.

You have done it WIWY...HATS OFF U... It shows along with HUMOUROUS bone u have ROMANTIC bone is also there in ur body. .WELL DONE.

Waiting 4 their FIRST KISS... UPDATE SOON..

THANKS 4 D PM.

PS. Pardon my english , i m not very good at it ; hope i m able 2 convey my feeling about ur update.