*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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tparvaiz

@tparvaiz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Awesome update 👏
Khushi NNS projects n Arnav is boss...??
Khushi help anjali... I really love all khushi n anjali scene. 😊
Khushi feel like that she's in home... n that too arnav home.
OMG khushi's in arnav room n wearing red saari
What's gaana to happen now ...????
Arnav too shirtless 😳
What's next wanna to read more.
Please continue.
Thanks for mp me.

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wiwy

@wiwy

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: frenzyy
read al in one go.. awwsum! plz pm wen u update

Thanks a ton! I will!😃

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: wiwy

Awww! Thankyou Durgey! I like what you like! 🤗

Actually after you finished your story I had a good mind to end mine fast! Khushi in red in Arnav's room on the third day?😲 Ha Ha! No point dragging it! Though I do love titillating! The main problem is how to put all these romantic thoughts into words!😳

Glad you liked the Anjali Khushi meet! 😃

Arnav Khushi car convo was a last moment addition. Happy you liked. 😃

NSS project! Yes, yet to detail that one!😳

Wiwy, don't end it already. Look at the following you have for your story. And I can see that there's is a lot that you can explore. I had already visualised my complete story before I started to write, so knew where I would be ending. But yours is still in initial stages. Take it easy, you can develop a very good story from here. Do give it a thought.

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Wiwy, don't end it already. Look at the following you have for your story. And I can see that there's is a lot that you can explore. I had already visualised my complete story before I started to write, so knew where I would be ending. But yours is still in initial stages. Take it easy, you can develop a very good story from here. Do give it a thought. 😳

Its trueDurgey, that i haven't conceptualised the whole story. It sort of moves on its own volition from one update to another. But a SS is a short story. And sometimes I feel the story is carrying me instead of me writing it! Yes, I owe a lot to my readers. Their comments and inputs guide the story subconsciously. Till a point you write for yourself, then your readers take over!

This is for you for being the first one to appreciate my story and to all the readers who have found my story enjoyable so far...!

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sindhu

@sarun21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

wow super update dear...

just loved it...

so arnav wants to listen abt them from others wow simply superb...

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Lovely chapter Wiwy! So it's all getting exciting, especially as they're both at the poolside! 😉

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: wiwy

Its trueDurgey, that i haven't conceptualised the whole story. It sort of moves on its own volition from one update to another. But a SS is a short story. And sometimes I feel the story is carrying me instead of me writing it! Yes, I owe a lot to my readers. Their comments and inputs guide the story subconsciously. Till a point you write for yourself, then your readers take over!

This is for you for being the first one to appreciate my story and to all the readers who have found my story enjoyable so far...!

Aww, thanks for that doggy, Wiwy. It is quite cute.

About the story, take your time. Think how you want to go forward with it and how far. Nothing wrong in going with the flow too. It is your story after all. I think you will find your way. 😊