*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rrams

wonderful update yaar


❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: the_breeze

Hey dear, you are doing a fabulous job thus far!


Ideal amounts of humor, awkward situations and misunderstandings just make it more howlarious 😆

do continue soon...

P.S. The like button is giving me issues... So consider this as a like for the chapter as well 😳


Thankyou! Breeze! That gust of wind! Uff!
Like button, no issues! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: segad

congratulations on not making shyam anjali's husband

loved his shaatir dimaag
and both are jealous. lovely!


Hey segad
Thanks for supporting me on this one! Not making Shyam Anjali's husband!😃 Enough of that😡, what say? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi

Really nice update.

How come Khushi mentioned Shyamji at the 1st meet?


Hey Shyam is NK's lawyer friend. So Khushi went on rambling from NK to Shyam. Have just edited chapter to make it clearer why Khushi mentioned Shyam's name! Thanks for pointing out.⭐️
Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arhi-raizada

loved it plzz add me to ur pm list


Please send me a buddy request. Thanks for loving and commenting.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: promi16

they are like kids fighting over ice cream🤣🤣🤣


😉 😆 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haha, Khushi Is Crazyyy 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

That is one of really OTT behavior of Khushi.

Just to admonish her to be careful with Shyam how cum she threw hot tea to him!
I'm pretty sure Shyam is a bad guy.When he will entrapped her, she will realise that Arnav was right.
Hmm, so La seems Arnav's present girlfriend.
Ca't assume how will they meet next.
update soon.


Sohara gussa mat ho! (😆 )
Added profanities to ASR's dialogue so that Khushi's behaviour does not look OTT! Please check, I beg of you! Happy? Or need another change?😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi12

such high dose of IpK stuff in a single update..! Hey devi maiyya..! Its as if i relived all those Arnav- khushi fights all over again..

Arnav is possessive about her, concerned, caring, jealous and moreover he's strted to feel for her!

For khushi, she is as she is, instinctive. Though arnav's tone was rude yet his intent was clear and when khushi comes to know of it, she surely wud apologise him for the tea-stunt she performed!

And shyam is again the same rat, trapping away ppl into his sickingly sweet tongue!

While poor NK was being subjected to all sorts of mental torture b the very skilled brain of Arnav singh raizada..

While khushi too lost her self to jealosy thnking about arnav's visit at la's place to change clothes..! Possessive haan?:D


Thanks for this awesome analysis of the update!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

Chapter 3

When Khushi explained how the bed broke and eberyone's reaction was priceless...I could not stop laughing alongside feeling embarrassed for her
And Arnav is a meany for pretending to be her hubby or hone wale hubby!!
And mami said the famous cricket line...I died laughing there too...and ssr knows Khushi will not buy the bed unless he said the opposite,,,he is good

Chapter 4
Khushi's reaction when she found out it was a suhag Raat bed was priceless
Amd aww Arnav was enjoying being called a couple
And I loved how they laughed it off at the end

Chapter 5
Khushi and Arnav were doing so good until Shyam came up...he ruins everything
I wish Khushi listened to him but if a guy did so much for your family it is hard to listen to the bad
And awww Khushi is jelly and is wondering if Arnav undresses I front of that girl

Thanks for the pm and I am waiting for chapter 6


Anita! Ha ha! Yo are on the roll yet again!❤️ 🤗

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