*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 3

When Khushi explained how the bed broke and eberyone's reaction was priceless...I could not stop laughing alongside feeling embarrassed for her

And Arnav is a meany for pretending to be her hubby or hone wale hubby!!

And mami said the famous cricket line...I died laughing there too...and ssr knows Khushi will not buy the bed unless he said the opposite,,,he is good

Chapter 4

Khushi's reaction when she found out it was a suhag Raat bed was priceless

Amd aww Arnav was enjoying being called a couple

And I loved how they laughed it off at the end

Chapter 5

Khushi and Arnav were doing so good until Shyam came up...he ruins everything

I wish Khushi listened to him but if a guy did so much for your family it is hard to listen to the bad

And awww Khushi is jelly and is wondering if Arnav undresses I front of that girl

Thanks for the pm and I am waiting for chapter 6

Edited by ..Anita.. - 12 years ago

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raniluvsasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Hey thnxxx for d pm,loved d update. Amazingly good. Very well written. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Very well written. Ohh god cant beleive dis, khushi aall way long was thinking abt dat. Want to noe more about shyaam. Excellent. Keep updating.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Ah, the jealousy track enters. 😉 So, NK and La enter the picture and Arshi are instantly jealous. 😆 So, a nice happy coffee/tea date turns into a fight which includes some hot-tea throwing, all because of the creepwa. 😲 I am so happy that Anjali never married the creep. Ah, felt good to read that. 😳 Poor Khushi, what a doubt she's got! 😆 Good one, Wiwy. Liked the chapter. Wondering which way the story will go from here. Eager to read the next part.

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IssK.

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Another action-packed update! Love how you are moving forward, all guns...rather all funs blazing! Aap toh super hit hain, wiwy ji!! 👍🏼 The freshness in your writing, that is the ⭐️

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DurgaS

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Wiwy,

10,000 views for your story

What an achievement!

Congratulations!

😳 😃 👏 ⭐️ 🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: salooni
awesome
wow what a hot conversion
and two new entry in single update
you are quiet fast
and god girl is still thinking from all thing this odd
whether he undresses in front of la
truly enjoyable ]just love it tfs

Thanks salooni for enjoying! 🤗

Yes two new entries! But don't know what to do with them now!😆

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Thanks rakhee 12 and roshaan for liking and commenting!🤗 🤗

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
👏Excellent wiwy my grabber

KHUSHI IS THINKING WHAT I AM THINKING WHAT YOU MADE HER THINKING...She is thinking about him and La and all ...that says a lot and is the selling point 😊👏⭐️

1-Arnav's possessiveness and jealousy ...Hmmm LOVE IT😳
2-KKG and throwing tea...just true to character😆
3-NK is same funny dude yet caring😊
4-DATE and the way he asked her out😉 remember this one

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dds4rdGIyBM[/YOUTUBE]

I love the way you gave a nice character to Khushi ,a balanced one.Shyam is in the BG .oh boy...and a bad one and the hate level is way high already in Arnav...waiting what did he do this time as Khushi is not involved or is she..hmmm...interesting

Thnx wiwy your bedstory is making me sleepless now...👏