*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Ah, the jealousy track enters. 😉 So, NK and La enter the picture and Arshi are instantly jealous. 😆 So, a nice happy coffee/tea date turns into a fight which includes some hot-tea throwing, all because of the creepwa. 😲 I am so happy that Anjali never married the creep. Ah, felt good to read that. 😳 Poor Khushi, what a doubt she's got! 😆 Good one, Wiwy. Liked the chapter. Wondering which way the story will go from here. Eager to read the next part.


Yes Durgey!⭐️ The jealousy tract is here, just like you predicted!😉

Creepwa is a catalyst in their blooming love! So don't mind him! No he is NOT anjali's husband! It felt good to write that!😃

Yes, Khushi's doubt!☺️
No idea which way story will go!😕 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Another action-packed update! Love how you are moving forward, all guns...rather all funs blazing! Aap toh super hit hain, wiwy ji!! 👍🏼 The freshness in your writing, that is the ⭐️


Iss what lovely comments from you!😳 I am blushwa!☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

Wiwy a serious update the last question by Khushi to Neha was🤣


But the last question was a bher bheri serious one , Chalhov! 😉 😆

Thankyou so much for reading and appreciating!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the story. Very interesting!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



Thanks for this awesome analysis of the update!👏



well thnx..
But if not dat shyam wud help them come close, i literally wud hav been mad at khushi for having such high opinion about her 'shyamji'.. But i guess she needs to see why Arnav behaved dat way.. N besides Arnav too didn't help by snapping at shyam name instantly!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Sohara gussa mat ho! (😆 )
Added profanities to ASR's dialogue so that Khushi's behaviour does not look OTT! Please check, I beg of you! Happy? Or need another change?😭

hahaha.
Good.
So Khushi was indignant to behave like this.
OK, I'm happy.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

hahaha.
Good.
So Khushi was indignant to behave like this.
OK, I'm happy.


Phew! Relieved!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Anita! Ha ha! Yo are on the roll yet again!❤️ 🤗


Lol😆 I try
And congratulations for getting 10,0000 views!!!!! Hope you get many more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh dear they both are crazy. Nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great job with an unique story 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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