*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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wiwy

@wiwy

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: indi52
ha ha ha ha, that was funny and really smart writing. a lotus fountain in the middle of a gaudy store with rabba ve playing in the background and mamiji with her barbs conveniently in the wings. very very nice, and i wonder why he doesn't like the round bed? to small for him to jump on? wiwy, please don't make me wait too long to find out. 😆

Okay! thanks Indi!🤗

Too small for him to jump on? Ha ha! I thought so too but couldn't find another pic. Was neck deep in office work so...😳

He just felt that Khushi will not like the bed!😉 Okay, I will try not to make you wait too long to find out why😃

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Aww...

What a lovely update...

Loved the shop wala scene...Oh gosh Khushi's so embarrassed...

Do continue soon !!!!

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-MKM-

@-MKM-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Nice Update...thnxx fr d pm... 😊

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Throne

@Throne

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

It was hilllarious...! 😆 Especially the HE-JUMPED-ON-MY-BED-AND-BROKE-IT-PART...😉

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Srishti

@dereksmith

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Heyyy !!
Thank you so much for messaging !
This story is hilarious , poor khushi , she
didn't understand the meaning behind
that bed ..
Looking forward for more fun Write soon
p.s. I have sent you a buddy request
:)

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fairycake

@fairycake

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Thank you for the PM. Lovely update

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

awesome update

wonder what's going on in ASR's head ??

what's up with this bed ??

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

WIWY 😃😃

this is awesome ⭐️👏👏 seriously i mean...lovely ❤️

okay i loved the first line of ASR wat he told to Khushi...😳

nd the entire scene at the shop...amazing...my most fav part...Khushi plannin to escape...nd ASR tellin her not to even think abt it 😉...too good 👏

wat a bed...😳 the lights , curtain nd a mirror...i want it...but its a bit small...i am curious why doesn ASR want her to hav it???

ASR started of with a Smirk...nd Khushi ended it with a bang in total her style 😆 ...loved the first dialogue to the last one which Khushi told...Superb 👏

Edited by supriya.arshi - 12 years ago

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi
WIWY 😃😃

this is awesome ⭐️👏👏 seriously i mean...lovely ❤️

okay i loved the first line of ASR wat he told to Khushi...😳

nd the entire scene at the shop...amazing...my most fav part...Khushi plannin to escape...nd ASR tellin her not to even think abt it 😉...too good 👏

wat a bed...😳 the lights , curtain nd a mirror...i want it...but its a bit small...i am curious why doesn ASR want her to hav it???

ASR started of with a Smirk...nd Khushi ended it with a bang in total her style 😆 ...loved the first dialogue to the last one which Khushi told...Superb 👏

Supi 🤗

Thankyou! You are so sweet! You really lked it fom the first to the last dialogue?! Awww! I am thrilled! Your fav part ...Khushi thinking of escaping...I added just before posting!

You want the bed? Take it, my friend. Its all yours! Small in size? Sorry. Should have googled more😳 I will tell you why Arnav doesn't wnt it in next update. okay?😆

"Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai"😉